when i finished i look at it and i really wasn't pleased. So i was wondering if people would send some tips my way, or even help change some things (i am willing to send .pds file if anyone truely wants). Any thoughts? What do you think looks awkward about it? and what should i leave?

 

 

 

Original:

 

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/9922/piece16tn.jpg

 

EDIT1: removed green, and other minor stuff, toned down the colors too

 

http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/9754/piece30is.jpg

 

 

 

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I posted it, thanx for all your help guys, here is the final:

 

 

 

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/35278338/

 

 

 

You guys are right the hair hand is not really appropriet (sp?), but i realy like the detail of the hand and so i had to let the hair slide. Thanx again guys.

After some thinking.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

is the hairy arm....

That was the first thing I thought too, Cupcake. :lol:

 

 

 

The hairs on the arm aren't very complimentary to the pic.

After some thinking.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

is the hairy arm....

 

 

 

Ditto...

the yellows and the greens dont seem to mix well with the other stuff.. :S

 

maby the grey BG can be changed to a dark/saturated peachy color..?

 

 

 

i think the arm is fine though :P

Shave that arm pl0x :boohoo:

 

 

 

Anyways I think its good :-s

Its nice, I dunno thats the arm at all, but the color of it.

I quite like the hair on the arm, adds more detail to the outcast of the piece while the rest is the vector. I think the little bubble with Tina needs a colour change to something that stands out more and easier to read though.

yea sorry guys the arm stays, i have tried looking for another arm but none of them are any good. Then i tried vectoring the arm, but honestly that just takes away from it.

Try using the smudge and burn tool, so there's not too much hair. If you don't mind, coudl I do it?

Try using the smudge and burn tool, so there's not too much hair. If you don't mind, coudl I do it?

 

wouldn't that just make it blurry??

Nope. This is a technique I love to use :P. It smudges it so it is blended in and then compresses it. Kind of hard to explain, but I'll show you if you let me (I don't want to rip it.)

Nope. This is a technique I love to use :P. It smudges it so it is blended in and then compresses it. Kind of hard to explain, but I'll show you if you let me (I don't want to rip it.)

 

go for it

Actually i use that technique sometimes too :$

well after the pc I'm on finnaly manged to load the picture (uncle still has dial up O_O.) It looks nice.

 

 

 

 

 

I can't realy tell but something it is kind of bothers me. However, it is late and my eyes are tired (was in car all day) so I realy can't figure it out. For the most part however its looking great.

 

 

 

btw, when the heck did you get back man?

well after the pc I'm on finnaly manged to load the picture (uncle still has dial up O_O.) It looks nice.

 

 

 

 

 

I can't realy tell but something it is kind of bothers me. However, it is late and my eyes are tired (was in car all day) so I realy can't figure it out. For the most part however its looking great.

 

 

 

btw, when the heck did you get back man?

 

ha ha i am back when school is over. Dam school :-#

 

 

 

no its not just your eyes, i feel there is something wrong with it too, thats why i posted it here. The removing of the green really helped, but i feel i am still missing something :-k .

I can't give any hints on the picture itself, but the first time I read the title at the bottom I thought it said cancer. :shock:

 

Or was it supposed to. :P

Yeh, I thought the same, Peter. About the text. :lol:

Well, I guess you are correct, it is kind of blurry, but I'm not sure if you will like it...

 

That looks much better...

 

 

 

Smoother.

I agree, it looks a lot better.

Well, I guess you are correct, it is kind of blurry, but I'm not sure if you will like it...

 

 

yea it is way to blurry, as you can see the rest of the hand has detail while the arm is smooth, its not gonna work. Its well done though. I have decided to stick with the hairy arm. Anything else??

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