vladmoney Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 when i finished i look at it and i really wasn't pleased. So i was wondering if people would send some tips my way, or even help change some things (i am willing to send .pds file if anyone truely wants). Any thoughts? What do you think looks awkward about it? and what should i leave? Original: http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/9922/piece16tn.jpg EDIT1: removed green, and other minor stuff, toned down the colors too http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/9754/piece30is.jpg [postED] I posted it, thanx for all your help guys, here is the final: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/35278338/ You guys are right the hair hand is not really appropriet (sp?), but i realy like the detail of the hand and so i had to let the hair slide. Thanx again guys. Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cupcake Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 After some thinking. is the hairy arm.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldwolflord Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 That was the first thing I thought too, Cupcake. :lol: The hairs on the arm aren't very complimentary to the pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_OnE Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 After some thinking. is the hairy arm.... Ditto... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LP Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 the yellows and the greens dont seem to mix well with the other stuff.. :S maby the grey BG can be changed to a dark/saturated peachy color..? i think the arm is fine though :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxshady Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 Shave that arm pl0x :boohoo: Anyways I think its good :-s ------------------------------------------------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 Its nice, I dunno thats the arm at all, but the color of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAGE Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 I quite like the hair on the arm, adds more detail to the outcast of the piece while the rest is the vector. I think the little bubble with Tina needs a colour change to something that stands out more and easier to read though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted June 20, 2006 Author Share Posted June 20, 2006 yea sorry guys the arm stays, i have tried looking for another arm but none of them are any good. Then i tried vectoring the arm, but honestly that just takes away from it. Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow_Wu Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 Try using the smudge and burn tool, so there's not too much hair. If you don't mind, coudl I do it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted June 20, 2006 Author Share Posted June 20, 2006 Try using the smudge and burn tool, so there's not too much hair. If you don't mind, coudl I do it? wouldn't that just make it blurry?? Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow_Wu Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 Nope. This is a technique I love to use :P. It smudges it so it is blended in and then compresses it. Kind of hard to explain, but I'll show you if you let me (I don't want to rip it.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted June 21, 2006 Author Share Posted June 21, 2006 Nope. This is a technique I love to use :P. It smudges it so it is blended in and then compresses it. Kind of hard to explain, but I'll show you if you let me (I don't want to rip it.) go for it Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tunaboy692004 Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 Actually i use that technique sometimes too :$ Current Goals80/80 Fletching60/75 Woodcutting97/100 Combat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 well after the pc I'm on finnaly manged to load the picture (uncle still has dial up O_O.) It looks nice. I can't realy tell but something it is kind of bothers me. However, it is late and my eyes are tired (was in car all day) so I realy can't figure it out. For the most part however its looking great. btw, when the heck did you get back man? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted June 21, 2006 Author Share Posted June 21, 2006 well after the pc I'm on finnaly manged to load the picture (uncle still has dial up O_O.) It looks nice. I can't realy tell but something it is kind of bothers me. However, it is late and my eyes are tired (was in car all day) so I realy can't figure it out. For the most part however its looking great. btw, when the heck did you get back man? ha ha i am back when school is over. Dam school :-# no its not just your eyes, i feel there is something wrong with it too, thats why i posted it here. The removing of the green really helped, but i feel i am still missing something :-k . Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peter_selie Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 I can't give any hints on the picture itself, but the first time I read the title at the bottom I thought it said cancer. :shock: Or was it supposed to. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldwolflord Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 Yeh, I thought the same, Peter. About the text. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow_Wu Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 Well, I guess you are correct, it is kind of blurry, but I'm not sure if you will like it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldwolflord Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 That looks much better... Smoother. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_OnE Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 I agree, it looks a lot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted June 24, 2006 Author Share Posted June 24, 2006 Well, I guess you are correct, it is kind of blurry, but I'm not sure if you will like it... yea it is way to blurry, as you can see the rest of the hand has detail while the arm is smooth, its not gonna work. Its well done though. I have decided to stick with the hairy arm. Anything else?? Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted June 25, 2006 Author Share Posted June 25, 2006 posted final Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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