June 26, 200620 yr Hey all, I really need some c & c on this one guys. This is my first pixel ever, and I want to see if you notice all the flaws I see ... and I sell many -.- Plus I could get a flesh type colour on Ms Paint either ... And please, please don't be easy on me, I need to get better. Oh and if you need some Deeto, The Girl on the left is my RuneScape char, the guy on the right is Link, the girl is stood in front of the air alter (darn I forgot the symbol) and Link is in front of the Deku tree .. C & C away ^_^ P.S Only Two colour shading -.- I am a much better sketcher i am a paint noob
June 26, 200620 yr The anatomy could use some improving, same with the shading and colouring. I'd also like to see more branches on those trees if possible. Why does the scythe have 2 handles? Proud founder of the Myriad
June 26, 200620 yr Author I'd also like to see more branches on those trees if possible. Oh ya, I just realised I drew kiddy trees Why does the scythe have 2 handles? Because it does in the game ... .. . i am a paint noob
June 26, 200620 yr im no pixel artist but i'd say thats quite good =D> It's not bad, I've seen worse...literally. I'm not even going to ask about the mustache on the tree. Proud founder of the Myriad
June 26, 200620 yr Its quite good, I like the grass :) things to work on: fix the feet, they are in a strange position, and the altar with the rock in it isnt correct. 6.5/10 so far. [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
June 26, 200620 yr Author Thank you Woopidoo, I'm gonna' check out the FAQ and stuff first ^_^ Oh and grim_jokes? i like this quote I'm not even going to ask about the mustache on the tree. =) i am a paint noob
June 26, 200620 yr It's very good. The first thing that sticks out to me is their feet. I think if that was fixed i'f give you a 9/10, but it's still very good so ill give you a 7.5/10. 122 Combat : 99 Hits : 99 Attack : 99 Strength97/99 Defence : 99 Fletching : 99 Woodcutting
June 26, 200620 yr I'm not even going to ask about the mustache on the tree. Have you played Legend Of Zelda: Ocarina Of Time? No? Then play it.
June 26, 200620 yr on the flesh colour and the shading...im guessing your using the pre made color pallette for mspaint arent you? i dont see many technical issues besides shading..... youll get a better style and anatomy with practice thanks everyone for the sigs!
June 26, 200620 yr Thats far too big. Its helpful in terms of actualy finishing something with some degree of sucess if you dont give yourself an impossible canvas size.
June 27, 200620 yr wow thats your first ever? cuz its really nice :) -------------------------------------------------------------------
June 27, 200620 yr Author Thank you everyone for the comments. Godslayer: I realised shortly after that the canvas was too big can someone please post a pic about the right skin colour ? like this one i am a paint noob
June 27, 200620 yr I'm not even going to ask about the mustache on the tree. Have you played Legend Of Zelda: Ocarina Of Time? No? Then play it. Played it, hated it. :) Proud founder of the Myriad
June 27, 200620 yr I'm not even going to ask about the mustache on the tree. Have you played Legend Of Zelda: Ocarina Of Time? No? Then play it. Played it, hated it. :) Ahhh... Its sucha a nice game...! @Pixel: The position you gave them makes it look like dolls, theres not action in it. But I like the shading, its a clear nice work!
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