GoingUnder Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 Hey all, I really need some c & c on this one guys. This is my first pixel ever, and I want to see if you notice all the flaws I see ... and I sell many -.- Plus I could get a flesh type colour on Ms Paint either ... And please, please don't be easy on me, I need to get better. Oh and if you need some Deeto, The Girl on the left is my RuneScape char, the guy on the right is Link, the girl is stood in front of the air alter (darn I forgot the symbol) and Link is in front of the Deku tree .. C & C away ^_^ P.S Only Two colour shading -.- I am a much better sketcher i am a paint noob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grim_Jokes Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 The anatomy could use some improving, same with the shading and colouring. I'd also like to see more branches on those trees if possible. Why does the scythe have 2 handles? Proud founder of the Myriad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ralvn Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 im no pixel artist but i'd say thats quite good =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoingUnder Posted June 26, 2006 Author Share Posted June 26, 2006 I'd also like to see more branches on those trees if possible. Oh ya, I just realised I drew kiddy trees Why does the scythe have 2 handles? Because it does in the game ... .. . i am a paint noob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grim_Jokes Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 im no pixel artist but i'd say thats quite good =D> It's not bad, I've seen worse...literally. I'm not even going to ask about the mustache on the tree. Proud founder of the Myriad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 Its quite good, I like the grass :) things to work on: fix the feet, they are in a strange position, and the altar with the rock in it isnt correct. 6.5/10 so far. [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoingUnder Posted June 26, 2006 Author Share Posted June 26, 2006 Thank you Woopidoo, I'm gonna' check out the FAQ and stuff first ^_^ Oh and grim_jokes? i like this quote I'm not even going to ask about the mustache on the tree. =) i am a paint noob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timmay929 Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 It's very good. The first thing that sticks out to me is their feet. I think if that was fixed i'f give you a 9/10, but it's still very good so ill give you a 7.5/10. 122 Combat : 99 Hits : 99 Attack : 99 Strength97/99 Defence : 99 Fletching : 99 Woodcutting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sebbeberg Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 I'm not even going to ask about the mustache on the tree. Have you played Legend Of Zelda: Ocarina Of Time? No? Then play it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 on the flesh colour and the shading...im guessing your using the pre made color pallette for mspaint arent you? i dont see many technical issues besides shading..... youll get a better style and anatomy with practice thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godslayer Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 Thats far too big. Its helpful in terms of actualy finishing something with some degree of sucess if you dont give yourself an impossible canvas size. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodyrb Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 i needs more shading Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxshady Posted June 27, 2006 Share Posted June 27, 2006 wow thats your first ever? cuz its really nice :) ------------------------------------------------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyco Posted June 27, 2006 Share Posted June 27, 2006 People are kind of pale. :shock: Yeah, but other than that it looks pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoingUnder Posted June 27, 2006 Author Share Posted June 27, 2006 Thank you everyone for the comments. Godslayer: I realised shortly after that the canvas was too big can someone please post a pic about the right skin colour ? like this one i am a paint noob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grim_Jokes Posted June 27, 2006 Share Posted June 27, 2006 I'm not even going to ask about the mustache on the tree. Have you played Legend Of Zelda: Ocarina Of Time? No? Then play it. Played it, hated it. :) Proud founder of the Myriad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted June 27, 2006 Share Posted June 27, 2006 I'm not even going to ask about the mustache on the tree. Have you played Legend Of Zelda: Ocarina Of Time? No? Then play it. Played it, hated it. :) Ahhh... Its sucha a nice game...! @Pixel: The position you gave them makes it look like dolls, theres not action in it. But I like the shading, its a clear nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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