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My first 2 fakes


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man both of your fakes stink like hell

 

 

 

for once if your gonna fake somthing dont add lines from paint or something. plus the text in the box is out of place and overlapping the lines. and the second fake wdp? the sheep has some dark outline

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To the point: It stinks.

 

 

 

But don't be discouraged, "get up and try again" with practise you will get better.

 

Things to improve on:

 

 

 

Alligning your text, on both your lining is HORRIBLE.

 

You can obviously see that you are not the person on the cow as the camera view is clearly on "stranger"

 

 

 

Also there are other things but i am tired and i wish to go to bed.

 

 

 

PM me if you wish any details on how to improve your Fake making abilities. i can supply you with Tut's, kits, etc.

 

 

 

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These fakes are a rather poor quality. It is your first and I understand. You should see my first abstract*shutters*. Here are some tips, don't add black lines from ms paint and try to save it as a better quality, also eventhough the fakes are original they, they are not very funny.

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Dont just say its sucks, well it does.... but put in a little constructive crisisim (sp?) tell him what he need to improve on. not so he never wants to do fakes again.

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there is stilll pink from Bloodveld's tutorial on the cow king fake, its under the c in "Cows being to circle you"

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