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i have no idea what the others have said (just to let you know) but heres my opinion :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Since you are making a Skate/Graphics layout maybe put in some pictures of ppl skating on the banners :D i think it would be alot more sofiticated than if youd just put up some random gfx and no skate theme :)

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i have no idea what the others have said (just to let you know) but heres my opinion :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Since you are making a Skate/Graphics layout maybe put in some pictures of ppl skating on the banners :D i think it would be alot more sofiticated than if youd just put up some random gfx and no skate theme :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

heh i probaly will :P Right now this is for a battle against Rhymez, so i gotta follow the rules of no stock and ps only :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but once i get it for a site i'll be sure to do that :D

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V5 up :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

btw crate, i made some gel button thingys, but i found that the normal kind didn't realy fit in with what i was thinking, so i aplied the style of them to the menu's ect. :) and i think it turned out nice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i also took other people's advice and made it take up more space. the 2 bottom box's are blank cuz i dunno what to do for them yet :P

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Too much drop shadows on those content boxes... They are about to slap me in the face if I get too close... No offense, but the pixel/retro thing doesn't fit the space theme well, the way you are doing it anyway. Those pixel fonts are also way to big... usually the point of pixel is to keep it small and clean... they are all big [wagon] and ugly... try maybe a different font...? Dunno, just some suggestions. Keep trying, you'll get it.

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Too much drop shadows on those content boxes... They are about to slap me in the face if I get too close... No offense, but the pixel/retro thing doesn't fit the space theme well, the way you are doing it anyway. Those pixel fonts are also way to big... usually the point of pixel is to keep it small and clean... they are all big wagon and ugly... try maybe a different font...? Dunno, just some suggestions. Keep trying, you'll get it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ok i will :D Gunna work on it more today probaly :P

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i have no idea what the others have said (just to let you know) but heres my opinion :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Since you are making a Skate/Graphics layout maybe put in some pictures of ppl skating on the banners :D i think it would be alot more sofiticated than if youd just put up some random gfx and no skate theme :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

heh i probaly will :P Right now this is for a battle against Rhymez, so i gotta follow the rules of no stock and ps only :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but once i get it for a site i'll be sure to do that :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

oh ok i had no idea :)

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v5 isn't that greaet. . the box arrangement doesn't seem to work too well for me .. just strange looking :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thats what i was thinking...too cluttered maybe? Needs more spacing around...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My fav so far is Version 3, but if it had Version 1's banner would be better, i really like the spacey theme, and if that was continued some how throughout the website...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Is this for fun or is it gonna be a real website? If so i would love to see it in action when you've made it

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