i love it accept for the clouds

 

perhaps try a darker whispy type of clouds

The island itself looks great, very good shading. The water is nice too but maybe add some of that white from the wip below. The sky needs to be reworked, with that kind of island quality, you should aim to make your clouds a lot more realistic (check out google pics for reference).

Well I think the water still needs quite a bit of work to be honest, and so does the grass on the island. The grass just seems so random and squiggly. I think the waterfall in your 3rd update looks much better than the current to be honest. Your clouds and moon could use some work, also with the moon where it is, it wouldn't be exceptional but there should be sometime of ambient glow near left corner of the island (our right side); after all it is a light source.

very creative!

 

 

 

the only thing that can be improved IMHO is the sky.

 

 

 

8.5/10 overall so far :thumbsup:

ish very toight

Well I think the water still needs quite a bit of work to be honest, and so does the grass on the island. The grass just seems so random and squiggly. I think the waterfall in your 3rd update looks much better than the current to be honest. Your clouds and moon could use some work, also with the moon where it is, it wouldn't be exceptional but there should be sometime of ambient glow near left corner of the island (our right side); after all it is a light source.

 

 

 

Yeah i know...

 

 

 

I tried for the lighting on the end of the island today and it came out looking really really bad.... lol, i dunno what im going to do about that... :?

 

 

 

I touched up the moon some and such, going to start working on water tommorow ...

 

 

 

 

 

No pic right now guys as i am so tired... i had bb for 11/2 hours then wieght lifting for another hour then swam at the pool for about 3 hours then came home and did another hour of bb...

 

 

 

ugg so tired need... sleep... now...