August 1, 200619 yr This is my 5th one, I kinda messed up on the text, not really sure what to do there, so post some ideas. Update: 2nd Update: [/bads]
August 1, 200619 yr Not sure what to put, but the bricks look too straight. Veyr few bricks in reality are that straight, just slightly mis-shape them. I think it would look better anyway. >_>
August 1, 200619 yr i dont know if its supposed to be this way, but it looks like the door is floating infront of the wall, since it is still continued on the floor part.... Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY!
August 1, 200619 yr r u seling money too lol cuz its on the counter. i think u shoud have someone running the stand and uhh maybe put like treasure trail armor in the back Seling 45548 Airs PM if u want to buy some!
August 1, 200619 yr The santa should have a sort of bulge under it where the peg it is hanging on is supposed to be. :wink: Thanks To: Everyone for the siggies, especially Kal for the Pixel.Currently Playing: FIFA 07, NFS: Carbon, Morrowind and Dungeon Siege II.
August 1, 200619 yr bricks arent that staight in real life.... the phats arent hanging realistically (why is money in the display window?) and is a yoyo really rare? thanks everyone for the sigs!
August 1, 200619 yr Man that owns...You should be in the background trying on loads of rares...and you should change top font..., to make it more like a shop...Great work though...
August 1, 200619 yr Author i dont know if its supposed to be this way, but it looks like the door is floating infront of the wall, since it is still continued on the floor part.... It's a border [/bads]
August 1, 200619 yr i dont know if its supposed to be this way, but it looks like the door is floating infront of the wall, since it is still continued on the floor part.... It's a border i was talking about the tan tile floor, not the white border Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY!
August 1, 200619 yr he means why is there no space between the bottom of the door and the ground alsowhy dont the hinges connect to the wall thanks everyone for the sigs!
August 2, 200619 yr Author i dont know if its supposed to be this way, but it looks like the door is floating infront of the wall, since it is still continued on the floor part.... It's a border i was talking about the tan tile floor, not the white border It's not a tan tile floor, it's a border (the little panel thing the lines the bottom of a wall) [/bads]
August 2, 200619 yr Veyr few bricks in reality are that straight Yes they are... How many bricks in reality have bevelled edges and no mortar?
August 2, 200619 yr Well, there are quite a few faults in the "anatomy" of some of the items, but the biggest problem is that there really isn't a 'depth' to it. I can't even really tell if the box with items in it is outside, inside, has a window, doesn't, the door is built-in, built out, etc. It is easier to criticize than to do. -Quote: Myself.
August 2, 200619 yr The contrast in colors isn't really good enough for a good effect of shading. The phats are shaded so they look like hexagons instead of circles, try blending the colors by dithering. Not quite sure where the light is coming from. If you look at the blue phat the light is coming from the left but if you look at the pumpkin right beside it, it's now coming from the right. The back of the window is bare...........really bare. Try putting a suit of armour or something there. The text is horribly bright and hurts my eyes. Try using colors lower down on the pallette with morre grey in them. Hinges don't really look like they attach to the wall. In recap: Try blending the colors you use to shade instead of just using the fill tool. also fill the picture up more, it looks empty. 4/10
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