First abstract/grunge in a LONG time: made it lighter

[navyplaya]

Well I was listening to the song Face Down by The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus (very good song) and it inspired me to make this:

 

 

 

 

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Eh, I think I've gotten rusty at abstact/grunge, because I don't really like it... at all... but what do you guys think?

[woopidoo2]

Im sorry but its to dark. It took a while for me to see a woman's face at the right too. Thats all, I do like the border... #-o

[runemetsa]

It's hard to see, because it's so dark. If you lighter it a bit then it would be better. The text is little dark too.

[Bloodredsword]

Im sorry but its to dark. It took a while for me to see a woman's face at the right too. Thats all, I do like the border... #-o

 

 

 

 

 

woopis back yaaaaaaaaay!

 

 

 

 

 

on topic: wtp(where the poo) is there a womans face :shock:

 

 

 

its not very good...the border is the only good thing

 

 

 

 

 

you can barely see the text its just to dark over all

 

 

 

 

 

6/10

[Goldwolflord]

on topic: wtp(where the poo) is there a womans face :shock:

 

 

 

 

Woopi's been back for 2 days now. =\

 

 

 

WTP = What the potatoes. Not where the poo.. :-s

 

 

 

The face is the last quarter on the right.

[Kalbatorix]

its too dark i cant sell anyting. i think i can make out a face on the right side. am i right?

[navyplaya]

hmm maybe my brightness on screen is turned up more than yalls, cuz i dont have trouble finding face at all, then again i made it so i dunno...

 

 

 

hmm maybe try scrolling on the page so that the sig is at the bottom of screen and look down on it?

[pt_PLUTO]

Well...i like it...i like the darkness and it definitly fits with the lyrics...a woman crying dur...nice job and i can see it fine :P

[duran]

I.... Love it.. it's dark and depressing yet artistic and pretty..... Then again i'm into dark art. :roll: Good job.. :wink:

[navyplaya]

atleast somepeople can see it

 

 

 

wanna know what gold thinks of it

[pryomancer]

i coodnt see anything but black at first, from the angle i saw it

 

 

 

then i saw the sig, but not the womans face

 

 

 

then woopi said there was a face and i found it almost straight away

[No_OnE]

Too dark and plain for my tastes.

[navyplaya]

edited it to make it lighter

 

it has to be pretty dark, it cant be happy, just not happy lyrics

[sebbeberg]

I liiked the darker more, but that's jsut me. Nobody lisstens to me. :boohoo: