August 13, 200619 yr Author Just woken up - It was 1am here in London, and I fell asleep...Well it's 9:30 now and I'm awake. Also - I have a HUGE update:
August 13, 200619 yr Author Need some feedback on the latest update :?: Oh and the guy who called it a buddy - Read the first post :wink:
August 13, 200619 yr The right arm(characters left arm) is much smaller than the left(right) one, i don't know if it's supposed to be small or not, just though i'd point it out.. And since his head is shaded(shadow like thingie from the cape i guess) there should be some kind of light source somewere behind him or on the side of him but the treasure thingie doesn't look very shaded, i mean, not that i can see.. It's as white on the right side as it is on the left side. I think it would look better if the knife were pointing down instead of up, i think it would make it look more like hes holding it forwards in stead of more to him self. Maybe make the wall look more random? My english may be bad here and there, i hope you understand what i mean anyway.
August 13, 200619 yr Author The right arm(characters left arm) is much smaller than the left(right) one, i don't know if it's supposed to be small or not, just though i'd point it out.. And since his head is shaded(shadow like thingie from the cape i guess) there should be some kind of light source somewere behind him or on the side of him but the treasure thingie doesn't look very shaded, i mean, not that i can see.. It's as white on the right side as it is on the left side. I think it would look better if the knife were pointing down instead of up, i think it would make it look more like hes holding it forwards in stead of more to him self. Maybe make the wall look more random? My english may be bad here and there, i hope you understand what i mean anyway. Thanks for the CC - I will tell Bam the important stuff you pointed out!
August 13, 200619 yr Very good C&C dance. How am i supposed to improve if no one tells me the flaws? Anyways working on the wall and floor at the moment. Rip. Archer3 and runescapeAchieved 99 Hitpoints At 8:36PM June-05-09Achieved 99 Strength At 12:17AM March-08-09Achieved 99 Attack At 3:57PM April-24-?09Achieved 99 Firemaking At 5:41PM September-17-08
August 13, 200619 yr Author Very good C&C dance. How am i supposed to improve if no one tells me the flaws? Anyways working on the wall and floor at the moment. Gd luck! And BTW maybe they didn't give CC because it's perfect?
August 13, 200619 yr wouldnt it have benn 100x wasier if BAM ddid this? o well some muscle definitionw ould be nice...after all ahrims is cloth, and it looks like its form fitting also a stronger jawline would be good looks good so far thanks everyone for the sigs!
August 13, 200619 yr Author wouldnt it have benn 100x wasier if BAM ddid this? o well some muscle definitionw ould be nice...after all ahrims is cloth, and it looks like its form fitting also a stronger jawline would be good looks good so far Thanks :D I'll tell bam - I agree with you about muscle definition :wink:
August 14, 200619 yr do you mean bulk up arms and chest and stuff? Cause i was thinking about that. But if hes a mges he ain't too strong :wink: . Rip. Archer3 and runescapeAchieved 99 Hitpoints At 8:36PM June-05-09Achieved 99 Strength At 12:17AM March-08-09Achieved 99 Attack At 3:57PM April-24-?09Achieved 99 Firemaking At 5:41PM September-17-08
August 14, 200619 yr The wall defenetly looks better now. The.. dragon rocks? looks cool. The arm is better =) The chest looks like it's floating. Maybe it looks better when the floor gets here. I still think it looks like he's gonna hurt himself with that knife, never play with sharp items!.. I think the bow looks a bit to real. I like it.
August 14, 200619 yr do you mean bulk up arms and chest and stuff? Cause i was thinking about that. But if hes a mges he ain't too strong :wink: . no just muscle definition that doesn't mean he has to have big muscles, just that your able to see them, small or not. and he needs a back.
August 14, 200619 yr The portal looks like a rock, make it transparent, other than that it's very good. :) Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-I took the one less traveled by,And that has made all the difference.
August 14, 200619 yr :!: Official Bump :!: its not just a bump, its an offical bump... lol i like the background, i hate the charicter. just because i hate it so much, and even though its not, im going to call it a buddy just to make you mad. BUDDY!!!!!! muahahahaha :twisted: :twisted: back on topic: the charicter has no muscel definition, and he needs a nose and eyes. in one of the first pictures he had eyes, i liked that beter. even besides that, his hands arent in a very good postion for fletching, and i think there should be more people in the background maby and yes, i understand your not done with the portal, but it does look like a damn rock lol... make it more transparent, and also, if your animating it, make the portal move or glow or something lol. that would be cool yes i know my spelling is off by miles, to lazy to edit atm wop wop
August 15, 200619 yr good but the zammy portal needs to be transparent a little more...and reder...right now it looks like mishapened iron ore rocks http://forums.thegamehomepage.com/
August 15, 200619 yr Author good but the zammy portal needs to be transparent a little more...and reder...right now it looks like mishapened iron ore rocks I agree with you - Although he hasn't even started colouring the portal - We think we might animate it :D
August 17, 200619 yr My attempt of transparent, i like it, however. I would like to know what everyone means by muscle defenition, cause well, 3 people said it and no one has explained. Rip. Archer3 and runescapeAchieved 99 Hitpoints At 8:36PM June-05-09Achieved 99 Strength At 12:17AM March-08-09Achieved 99 Attack At 3:57PM April-24-?09Achieved 99 Firemaking At 5:41PM September-17-08
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