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Criticisim Needed! Please


Sharcoth

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Its really nice! Nice usage of colors and perspective, but the second guy, his hands on the pockets made the jeans look kind of wierd, I mean the position of it. Looks like his arms in the continuation of the leg going up.... :S

 

 

 

But its nice tho ^_^

 

If I was a DA member I'd post a comment there, but as I'm not... I post here :P

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His jeans seem to be sagging a bit in the crotch area ( or else the crotch is too low) so its not unreasonable to presume the pants arnt those skin tight ones, wich would in turn lead to the conclusion that the fabric from each leg would be touching, eliminating the abrupt nature of the crotch to leg gap.

 

 

 

Also, you should push your values more. More dark, dark areas and more light light areas is what I mean. Right now, it looks pretty flat.

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