i got some sugesstions from my friends but i did all the drawing and coloring

 

 

 

plz dont flame me to hard

nice first... work abit more on the shading...

 

 

 

7.5/10 :wink:

Wow, nice! I think you made the mood shading a little too dramatic if you know what im saying.

its not bad for first try. The mountains look weird with just a shade across it (aka they look really smoooth and flat). But its good for first try, keep at it.

its not bad for first try. The mountains look weird with just a shade across it (aka they look really smoooth and flat). But its good for first try, keep at it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

like white cheese... from the dramatic moon ololol :P

 

 

 

messing with ya jamin'

thanks for the good critisizm and ill try i think i know what u mean

 

 

 

anyways can some 1 give me a rate 0/10

 

 

 

8)

thanks for the good critisizm and ill try i think i know what u mean

 

 

 

anyways can some 1 give me a rate 0/10

 

 

 

8)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

7/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You should bend the arm more, so it looks like hes preparing to strike. Not just holding up an axe for no reason.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The shading is ok. The bitten golf ball in the sky is little weird.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe a dark blue for the sky. Unstead of the grey, so the text stiks out more.

sory i guess i cant draw anyways that golf balls a moon thank u

Oh and jaminjames please remove that quote i started from your sig. I got my sig taken away cause i had it, wouldn't want the same to happen to you.

not too bad the arm with axe in is way to small and in wrong place

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

shading needs work too

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

not too bad for a 1st attempt

with all ur sugestions i kinda shaded it and the arm i fixed alot

 

 

 

hope u like the new 1

 

 

 

and id like more strong suggestions on what to do better and help me improve my work if u would like me to add something please tell me to and ill try to get it as quickly as possible

 

 

 

Nice sig, here are a few suggestions for the background:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The moon, in RL, usually shades in yellow colors. The snow, in RL, usually shades in light blue colors. You will be surprised at the results of just watching stuff in RL to see how things shade, it's what I do all the time. Guessing shading never beats checking out what RL's got in store. :)

way better than my frist attempt dude

thanks i had alot of critisizm by my friends so they helped me alot

 

 

 

and well i do alot of computer graphics on photo shop so i guess that helped alot too plz i want ratings too lol and sorry to sound like a noob buy whats RL lol?

nice looking man...9/10 for it

thanks i had alot of critisizm by my friends so they helped me alot

 

 

 

and well i do alot of computer graphics on photo shop so i guess that helped alot too plz i want ratings too lol and sorry to sound like a noob buy whats RL lol?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

RL is real life

yeah thanks man

 

 

 

o and i was thinking

 

 

 

u know how misterxman said like yellow moon so im doing that now and the snow mayb like very very light yellow tell me what u think

 

 

 

and please i want more critisizm plz it will help me go on ferther with my pixel sigs mayb later on like a month or so i might be able to sell to some people 8-)

nice job brudda , keep it up

Nice sig jaminjames, 8/10 :) I just think u should work more on the moutains in the bg.

i really like the abs of the guy :)

yeah thanks man

 

 

 

o and i was thinking

 

 

 

u know how misterxman said like yellow moon so im doing that now and the snow mayb like very very light yellow tell me what u think

 

 

 

and please i want more critisizm plz it will help me go on ferther with my pixel sigs mayb later on like a month or so i might be able to sell to some people 8-)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nice sig, but snow always shades in blue in RL, never yellow. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

One sometimes wants to shade in a different color than RL because we think that it will look better and less confusing, but putting the honest real color on makes it unnoticeable (a good thing, since 99% of stuff around us in RL is unnoticeable because it's so normal). Try blue out see how it works out, different shades until it looks good, and you'll be surprised by the results. Why make up colors when you can check RL? :lol:

yeah thanks man

 

 

 

o and i was thinking

 

 

 

u know how misterxman said like yellow moon so im doing that now and the snow mayb like very very light yellow tell me what u think

 

 

 

and please i want more critisizm plz it will help me go on ferther with my pixel sigs mayb later on like a month or so i might be able to sell to some people 8-)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

fix the left arm fix the neck.. it doesnt have a neck.. and shading snow in yellow would look like someone took a leak in it :lol:

 

 

 

add some more detail in the sky and whabamm it would rock

not to shabby 7/10 for your 1st pixel :D