jaminjames Posted September 11, 2004 Share Posted September 11, 2004 i got some sugesstions from my friends but i did all the drawing and coloring plz dont flame me to hard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
y0ur_m0ther Posted September 11, 2004 Share Posted September 11, 2004 nice first... work abit more on the shading... 7.5/10 :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Templar Posted September 11, 2004 Share Posted September 11, 2004 Wow, nice! I think you made the mood shading a little too dramatic if you know what im saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted September 11, 2004 Share Posted September 11, 2004 its not bad for first try. The mountains look weird with just a shade across it (aka they look really smoooth and flat). But its good for first try, keep at it. Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
y0ur_m0ther Posted September 12, 2004 Share Posted September 12, 2004 its not bad for first try. The mountains look weird with just a shade across it (aka they look really smoooth and flat). But its good for first try, keep at it. like white cheese... from the dramatic moon ololol :P messing with ya jamin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaminjames Posted September 12, 2004 Author Share Posted September 12, 2004 thanks for the good critisizm and ill try i think i know what u mean anyways can some 1 give me a rate 0/10 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unknownmasterofnothing Posted September 12, 2004 Share Posted September 12, 2004 thanks for the good critisizm and ill try i think i know what u mean anyways can some 1 give me a rate 0/10 8) 7/10 You should bend the arm more, so it looks like hes preparing to strike. Not just holding up an axe for no reason. The shading is ok. The bitten golf ball in the sky is little weird. Maybe a dark blue for the sky. Unstead of the grey, so the text stiks out more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaminjames Posted September 12, 2004 Author Share Posted September 12, 2004 sory i guess i cant draw anyways that golf balls a moon thank u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted September 12, 2004 Share Posted September 12, 2004 Oh and jaminjames please remove that quote i started from your sig. I got my sig taken away cause i had it, wouldn't want the same to happen to you. Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djscoobsta Posted September 12, 2004 Share Posted September 12, 2004 not too bad the arm with axe in is way to small and in wrong place shading needs work too not too bad for a 1st attempt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaminjames Posted September 12, 2004 Author Share Posted September 12, 2004 with all ur sugestions i kinda shaded it and the arm i fixed alot hope u like the new 1 and id like more strong suggestions on what to do better and help me improve my work if u would like me to add something please tell me to and ill try to get it as quickly as possible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misterxman Posted September 12, 2004 Share Posted September 12, 2004 Nice sig, here are a few suggestions for the background: The moon, in RL, usually shades in yellow colors. The snow, in RL, usually shades in light blue colors. You will be surprised at the results of just watching stuff in RL to see how things shade, it's what I do all the time. Guessing shading never beats checking out what RL's got in store. :) Pixel sigs by me.Pixel Art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WarriorSpud Posted September 12, 2004 Share Posted September 12, 2004 way better than my frist attempt dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaminjames Posted September 12, 2004 Author Share Posted September 12, 2004 thanks i had alot of critisizm by my friends so they helped me alot and well i do alot of computer graphics on photo shop so i guess that helped alot too plz i want ratings too lol and sorry to sound like a noob buy whats RL lol? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Posted September 12, 2004 Share Posted September 12, 2004 nice looking man...9/10 for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryan Posted September 12, 2004 Share Posted September 12, 2004 thanks i had alot of critisizm by my friends so they helped me alot and well i do alot of computer graphics on photo shop so i guess that helped alot too plz i want ratings too lol and sorry to sound like a noob buy whats RL lol? RL is real life Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaminjames Posted September 12, 2004 Author Share Posted September 12, 2004 yeah thanks man o and i was thinking u know how misterxman said like yellow moon so im doing that now and the snow mayb like very very light yellow tell me what u think and please i want more critisizm plz it will help me go on ferther with my pixel sigs mayb later on like a month or so i might be able to sell to some people 8-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xrhinox Posted September 12, 2004 Share Posted September 12, 2004 nice job brudda , keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiger Posted September 12, 2004 Share Posted September 12, 2004 Nice sig jaminjames, 8/10 :) I just think u should work more on the moutains in the bg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
posmo Posted September 15, 2004 Share Posted September 15, 2004 i really like the abs of the guy :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misterxman Posted September 15, 2004 Share Posted September 15, 2004 yeah thanks man o and i was thinking u know how misterxman said like yellow moon so im doing that now and the snow mayb like very very light yellow tell me what u think and please i want more critisizm plz it will help me go on ferther with my pixel sigs mayb later on like a month or so i might be able to sell to some people 8-) Nice sig, but snow always shades in blue in RL, never yellow. :) One sometimes wants to shade in a different color than RL because we think that it will look better and less confusing, but putting the honest real color on makes it unnoticeable (a good thing, since 99% of stuff around us in RL is unnoticeable because it's so normal). Try blue out see how it works out, different shades until it looks good, and you'll be surprised by the results. Why make up colors when you can check RL? :lol: Pixel sigs by me.Pixel Art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted September 15, 2004 Share Posted September 15, 2004 yeah thanks man o and i was thinking u know how misterxman said like yellow moon so im doing that now and the snow mayb like very very light yellow tell me what u think and please i want more critisizm plz it will help me go on ferther with my pixel sigs mayb later on like a month or so i might be able to sell to some people 8-) fix the left arm fix the neck.. it doesnt have a neck.. and shading snow in yellow would look like someone took a leak in it :lol: add some more detail in the sky and whabamm it would rock Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orchiare Posted September 16, 2004 Share Posted September 16, 2004 not to shabby 7/10 for your 1st pixel :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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