Rate my New Pixel

[hiimben]

I thought I'd try and do a bit more shading. Well, rate, hate, CC is welcome :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also if anyone would like to animate it for me that would be great because I dont have the programs for it :(

[woopidoo2]

His face looks pretty good, the santa also.

 

 

 

the grass underneath the gold needs more detailing.

 

 

 

Nice pixel, 7/10

[hiimben]

Thanks. I'll try dithering the gold and... Well I'll think something up for the grass. :)

[hiimben]

Tried to fix the grass and lightly dithered the coins.

 

 

 

[eckered]

it doesnt really look like hes standing on the grass. make some grass come up and cover the boetms of his feet

[majinbuu1023]

its cool looks a bit blurry but that mite be my eyes, i think you should make him hold the magic bow in a different way, the way hes holding it looks funny

 

 

 

9/10 cos its cool and way better than mine lol

[Dharockslayer]

Shade the air more...

 

The staff looks odd, try making it contact the wood with metal or whatever. Now it looks like he is prodding a stickin in an flying red orb.

 

Also make him wield the staff in a different way.

 

 

 

And shade the ground. you have a moon in the background, yet the grass is not shaded in front of the pile of gold and the dude.

 

 

 

Ill give it a 7/10. its a bit empty.

[WeeBoab]

its ok. for tip it standards nowadays its pretty good. old standards, not really.

[hiimben]

Thanks for the advice. I think I fixed most of what people suggested. Here it is,

 

 

 

[hiimben]

I put in the Nature Alter to make it look a bit better. Here it is

 

 

 

[megadedhed]

for the nat altar, i would try to make it more 3d pop out, because tright now, it kinda looks like a floor mat

[hiimben]

Ok, how's this?

 

 

 

[megadedhed]

Ok, how's this?

 

 

 

http://url79.imageshack.us/url79/5148/rcaltergrassysigtestci2.png

 

 

 

i would aslo fix the nat symbol, it looks like it is just see through...

[hiimben]

Thanks, I'm not too sure whether this is what you mean but I tried. Here it is.

 

 

 

 

 

 

An update

 

 

 

[runemetsa]

i think you should add more contrast between hair and skin of face. It's quite hard to notice which is which when looking quickly to head so that ends up as result that makes his head to look like a pile of grease IMO :-k

 

 

 

his staff is bend...

 

 

 

good shading in orb

 

 

 

Edit: better now

[hiimben]

Thanks everyone for the advice. I tried to make the face more distinguishable from the hair. Here it is.

 

 

 

[t_hrowie_s]

ok no ones said it so I will, Proportion wise the dude has a long left arm..other than that it reminds me of classic, Nice job \

[hiimben]

Thanks everyone, I tried fixing the arm. Here it is.

 

 

 

[hiimben]

Hi, added some vines to the pillar next to the alter. Here it is.