September 2, 200619 yr I thought I'd try and do a bit more shading. Well, rate, hate, CC is welcome :) Also if anyone would like to animate it for me that would be great because I dont have the programs for it :(
September 2, 200619 yr His face looks pretty good, the santa also. the grass underneath the gold needs more detailing. Nice pixel, 7/10 [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
September 2, 200619 yr Author Thanks. I'll try dithering the gold and... Well I'll think something up for the grass. :)
September 2, 200619 yr it doesnt really look like hes standing on the grass. make some grass come up and cover the boetms of his feet wop wop
September 2, 200619 yr its cool looks a bit blurry but that mite be my eyes, i think you should make him hold the magic bow in a different way, the way hes holding it looks funny 9/10 cos its cool and way better than mine lol Sig and Avatar made by me.
September 2, 200619 yr Shade the air more... The staff looks odd, try making it contact the wood with metal or whatever. Now it looks like he is prodding a stickin in an flying red orb. Also make him wield the staff in a different way. And shade the ground. you have a moon in the background, yet the grass is not shaded in front of the pile of gold and the dude. Ill give it a 7/10. its a bit empty. Interrested in joining the cabbagy madness? Click here to go to our forums, and say hi ^^lol one of the biggest pvp updates of the year, and tip it is discussing granite
September 2, 200619 yr its ok. for tip it standards nowadays its pretty good. old standards, not really. My photobucket
September 2, 200619 yr Author Thanks for the advice. I think I fixed most of what people suggested. Here it is,
September 2, 200619 yr for the nat altar, i would try to make it more 3d pop out, because tright now, it kinda looks like a floor mat Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY!
September 2, 200619 yr Ok, how's this? http://url79.imageshack.us/url79/5148/rcaltergrassysigtestci2.png i would aslo fix the nat symbol, it looks like it is just see through... Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY!
September 2, 200619 yr Author Thanks, I'm not too sure whether this is what you mean but I tried. Here it is. An update
September 2, 200619 yr i think you should add more contrast between hair and skin of face. It's quite hard to notice which is which when looking quickly to head so that ends up as result that makes his head to look like a pile of grease IMO :-k his staff is bend... good shading in orb Edit: better now [Star Wreck][PM me][My gallery][DeviantArt][Cool T-shirts!][iron Sky - Trailer is now out!]
September 3, 200619 yr Author Thanks everyone for the advice. I tried to make the face more distinguishable from the hair. Here it is.
September 3, 200619 yr ok no ones said it so I will, Proportion wise the dude has a long left arm..other than that it reminds me of classic, Nice job \
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