September 3, 200619 yr This is very rare, I post about 1 pixel each month. here it is, I like it. Post ur comments, CC appreciated. [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
September 3, 200619 yr I like what the actually is actually about, but the "school" looks to square IMO. Thanks To: Everyone for the siggies, especially Kal for the Pixel.Currently Playing: FIFA 07, NFS: Carbon, Morrowind and Dungeon Siege II.
September 3, 200619 yr I like what the actually is actually about, but the "school" looks to square IMO. I agree. The school is too square and the lines arcoss it don't look good. The person is really good though.
September 3, 200619 yr Author rofl... now i see it looks like a box :XD: [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
September 3, 200619 yr nice... for fm 99 or something ;P no lifer :) ^^ click my sig for my lesser ranging guide ^^jwrm22: 4816th > 99 cooking 100% f2p !1172 total! + 140mil in items.i dont play anymore... i think rs is ruined
September 3, 200619 yr Ok here we go Sun: no texture and since when was a sun a bright round lemon!? Fire: black lines a no no with fire you don't use black lines with fire... School: square flat no roof?! Clouds: no shadeing? at least none that i can see... also since when were clouds a lighter shade of blue... blue highlights yes! all blue clouds no :shame: look at this picture... ignore the horrible lady please i stopped doing her it just looked bad but look at the cloud... see not all blue actually not at all blue but you get the picture... Grass: It is shaded but you didn't place any texture into it... you need darker jots and lighter ect ect ect Character: The image is small so you can't do much but! hands wdf? those aren't hands those are combs with a skin color arms: !? straight arms? and no elbows... :-k Hair: no shadeing at all that i can see Shirt: not bad but not much you could do to make it look bad lol Skin color and shadeing: I can't really see much shadeing on your character, if it was really in front of a large fire then highlights from the flame would be on the edges of his arms... but since its light out that wouldn't really happen... however you then need to place shadeing somewhere on his armos and neck as the sun is the only light source and its aim TOWARDS the guy.... Text: Most of the text is rather basic... you can expand on pixel texts and make them more fancey even though what you have done is adequate... Mmk that about sums it up... just keep at it even though i kinda tore it apart it doesn't mean its not good or anything it just means there are alot of things you can work on :lol: and next time i'm sure it will be less :wink: New sigzor^^
September 4, 200619 yr I think you've captured the ecstaticlly pleased posture rather well. Made me laugh anyway...
September 4, 200619 yr School: square flat no roof?! All the schools I've ever seen/attended (which were all in the US) have flat roofs. Internet Marketing For Newbies
September 4, 200619 yr woop is back in pixeling! ypuve been away from the pixelers too long! one of us! one of us! one of us! Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY!
September 4, 200619 yr Author Ok here we go Sun: no texture and since when was a sun a bright round lemon!? The sun doesnt need shading, ppl said to me. but it could be smaller Fire: black lines a no no with fire you don't use black lines with fire... Havent tried that yet, but I thought that would look ugly School: square flat no roof?! (allready commented on) Clouds: no shadeing? at least none that i can see... also since when were clouds a lighter shade of blue... blue highlights yes! all blue clouds no :shame: look at this picture... ignore the horrible lady please i stopped doing her it just looked bad but look at the cloud... see not all blue actually not at all blue but you get the picture... http://url479.imageshack.us/url479/3046/aassaak9.png True, the clouds cost me 7 seconds Grass: It is shaded but you didn't place any texture into it... you need darker jots and lighter ect ect ect True, something to work on still Character: The image is small so you can't do much but! hands *? those aren't hands those are combs with a skin color arms: !? straight arms? and no elbows... :-k Hair: no shadeing at all that i can see Shirt: not bad but not much you could do to make it look bad lol Skin color and shadeing: I can't really see much shadeing on your character, if it was really in front of a large fire then highlights from the flame would be on the edges of his arms... but since its light out that wouldn't really happen... however you then need to place shadeing somewhere on his armos and neck as the sun is the only light source and its aim TOWARDS the guy.... Text: Most of the text is rather basic... you can expand on pixel texts and make them more fancey even though what you have done is adequate... Mmk that about sums it up... just keep at it even though i kinda tore it apart it doesn't mean its not good or anything it just means there are alot of things you can work on :lol: and next time i'm sure it will be less :wink: Thanks for CC :thumbsup: and the others too. [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
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