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Ok here we go

 

 

 

Sun: no texture and since when was a sun a bright round lemon!?

 

 

 

Fire: black lines a no no with fire you don't use black lines with fire...

 

 

 

School: square flat no roof?!

 

 

 

Clouds: no shadeing? at least none that i can see... also since when were clouds a lighter shade of blue... blue highlights yes! all blue clouds no :shame: look at this picture... ignore the horrible lady please i stopped doing her it just looked bad but look at the cloud... see not all blue actually not at all blue but you get the picture...

 

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Grass: It is shaded but you didn't place any texture into it... you need darker jots and lighter ect ect ect

 

 

 

Character: The image is small so you can't do much but!

 

 

 

hands wdf? those aren't hands those are combs with a skin color

 

arms: !? straight arms? and no elbows... :-k

 

Hair: no shadeing at all that i can see

 

Shirt: not bad but not much you could do to make it look bad lol

 

 

 

Skin color and shadeing: I can't really see much shadeing on your character, if it was really in front of a large fire then highlights from the flame would be on the edges of his arms... but since its light out that wouldn't really happen... however you then need to place shadeing somewhere on his armos and neck as the sun is the only light source and its aim TOWARDS the guy....

 

 

 

Text: Most of the text is rather basic... you can expand on pixel texts and make them more fancey even though what you have done is adequate...

 

 

 

 

 

Mmk that about sums it up... just keep at it even though i kinda tore it apart it doesn't mean its not good or anything it just means there are alot of things you can work on :lol: and next time i'm sure it will be less :wink:

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Ok here we go

 

 

 

Sun: no texture and since when was a sun a bright round lemon!?

 

The sun doesnt need shading, ppl said to me. but it could be smaller

 

 

 

Fire: black lines a no no with fire you don't use black lines with fire...

 

Havent tried that yet, but I thought that would look ugly

 

 

 

School: square flat no roof?!

 

(allready commented on)

 

 

 

Clouds: no shadeing? at least none that i can see... also since when were clouds a lighter shade of blue... blue highlights yes! all blue clouds no :shame: look at this picture... ignore the horrible lady please i stopped doing her it just looked bad but look at the cloud... see not all blue actually not at all blue but you get the picture...

 

http://url479.imageshack.us/url479/3046/aassaak9.png

 

 

 

True, the clouds cost me 7 seconds

 

 

 

Grass: It is shaded but you didn't place any texture into it... you need darker jots and lighter ect ect ect

 

 

 

True, something to work on still

 

 

 

Character: The image is small so you can't do much but!

 

 

 

hands *? those aren't hands those are combs with a skin color

 

arms: !? straight arms? and no elbows... :-k

 

Hair: no shadeing at all that i can see

 

Shirt: not bad but not much you could do to make it look bad lol

 

 

 

Skin color and shadeing: I can't really see much shadeing on your character, if it was really in front of a large fire then highlights from the flame would be on the edges of his arms... but since its light out that wouldn't really happen... however you then need to place shadeing somewhere on his armos and neck as the sun is the only light source and its aim TOWARDS the guy....

 

 

 

Text: Most of the text is rather basic... you can expand on pixel texts and make them more fancey even though what you have done is adequate...

 

 

 

 

 

Mmk that about sums it up... just keep at it even though i kinda tore it apart it doesn't mean its not good or anything it just means there are alot of things you can work on :lol: and next time i'm sure it will be less :wink:

 

 

 

Thanks for CC :thumbsup: and the others too.

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