Naruto!!

[mrmageman]

hey guys im making my own naruto fan story and i need your help. the ppl in the story will include me, the bulk of the naruto cast, and some original chars. what i need you all for is a suggestion for some genin to be on me team.

 

 

 

 

 

fill out this form:

 

 

 

name:

 

age:

 

race:

 

gender:

 

weapon:

 

armor:

 

appearance:

 

personality:

 

alignment:

 

short history:

[hellbellz]

That show is stupid. They scream for no apparent reason. It's dumb and their veins are like 2 inches wide. :? Very very dumb. If I had to rate it 1/10, I'd give it a -13. And I hate those kids who wear the head things, they look real dumb. :|

 

 

 

 

 

Constructive critisim! \

[No_OnE]

That show is stupid. They scream for no apparent reason. It's dumb and their veins are like 2 inches wide. :? Very very dumb. If I had to rate it 1/10, I'd give it a -13. And I hate those kids who wear the head things, they look real dumb. :|

 

 

 

 

 

Constructive critisim! \

 

A. Veins two inches wide? Really? I've watched 150+ episodes and haven't actually seen that.

 

B. Screaming for no apparent reason? Again? Really? 150+ episodes and I've seen very little random screaming.

 

C. You hate the things they wear on their heads because they look dumb? Alright... That at least contains some decent intelligence.

 

 

 

So tell me, what was the point of your post? Had nothing to do with the topic. Just some ignorant ranting that most people could care less about...

 

 

 

@The topic starter, Naruto is awesome. I'd fill out the form but I don't feel like it. Still, good luck.

[mrmageman]

no one has a char suggestion?

[WutangFlu]

That show is stupid. They scream for no apparent reason. It's dumb and their veins are like 2 inches wide. :? Very very dumb. If I had to rate it 1/10, I'd give it a -13. And I hate those kids who wear the head things, they look real dumb. :|

 

 

 

 

 

Constructive critisim! \

 

 

 

As much as I hate anime, as an art form, and as entertainment... dont say that. its an artistic style, in my opinion bad, and annoying.

 

See bolded*

 

 

 

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Continue. as you wish.

[Devilsdragon]

name: Theodin Matsuzi(First/Last)

 

age: 34

 

race: Wherever Naruto is situated, looks white*

 

gender: male

 

weapon: katana

 

armor: jonin vest with blue sweats

 

appearance: Flipped Black hair with a goatee, a scar that comes over his left eyebrow but ends before it reaches his eye

 

6' tall medium-big build 180lbs

 

personality: Often keeps to himself but will always help out a friend in need

 

alignment: +2 (-5 being the worst, +5 being the best)

 

short history: Theodin was born in the Hidden Village of the Mist. His parents were killed by assassins when he was 7 and he was kidnapped for 3 years. At this time a group of ninja from the hidden village of the sand stumbled upon their hiding place and slayed his captures. He returned home and continued his training developing his techniques and such. During his captivity he learned hand to hand combat skills and is where he recieved the scar above his left eye.

[azntemplar_00]

Devils, Naruto characters are Japanese for the most part :-P.

[deloriagod]

It baffles me how many people confuse Chinese and Japanese things..

 

 

 

As far as Naruto.. I say just use your imagination. I figure you're doing a manga so if you can't come up with the characters on your own then how are you going to come up with an entire story!?

[mrmageman]

i have the entire story lain out. 472 pages. 36 chapters. storyline. just abut everything except, my team of genin.

[WutangFlu]

i have the entire story lain out. 472 pages. 36 chapters. storyline. just abut everything except, my team of genin.

 

 

 

 

 

:shock:

[mrmageman]

In note and plan form of course. All that is left to do is get a good team. Not too soon after, I'll start to convert my plan into the actual story. Spell checking may take an hour, thank god for microsoft works. Then I'll see if i can get a few illustrations from my friends....maybe the part where.. Oh sorry its a secret. So anyways, char suggestions? 8-)

[mrmageman]

bump

[deloriagod]

Stories aren't much fun.. At least not to me.. You should turn it into a manga. Lots of work but (as long as you're a good artist) it would be great.

[Devilsdragon]

Devils, Naruto characters are Japanese for the most part :-P.

 

 

 

bull**** the anime takes place in feudal china, I don't want to hear about them not being chinese

[jak722]

Errr would't this be much better off in the Varrock Library section of the forum? http://forum.tip.it/viewforum.php?f=11 :-s

[deloriagod]

Devils, Naruto characters are Japanese for the most part :-P.

 

 

 

bull**** the anime takes place in feudal china, I don't want to hear about them not being chinese

 

 

 

I think you mean feudal Japan. Anime/manga is Japanese and thus (as far as I've ever seen) takes place in Japan (usually made up areas..)

[mrmageman]

seriously? no suggestions?

[azntemplar_00]

Devils, Naruto characters are Japanese for the most part :-P.

 

 

 

bull**** the anime takes place in feudal china, I don't want to hear about them not being chinese

 

 

 

I think you mean feudal Japan. Anime/manga is Japanese and thus (as far as I've ever seen) takes place in Japan (usually made up areas..)

 

 

 

Yeah, Japanese anime for the most part is > chinese cartoons :-(.

[Devilsdragon]

what I always figured

 

 

 

[Riku3220]

It's japanese and its not even in fuedal china or japan. they have technology...

[Nenga]

I don't get it. will someone explane what this person is trying to do.

 

 

 

Oh and naruto is set not fudel but not to far from it. i'd say maybe 700 yrs. or so ahead of it.

[Riku3220]

I don't get it. will someone explane what this person is trying to do.

 

 

 

Oh and naruto is set not fudel but not to far from it. i'd say maybe 700 yrs. or so ahead of it.

 

 

 

No its not even 700 years ago.... more like 1 year ago

 

 

 

they have communicators that they put in their ears to talk to each other during missions

[Nadril]

ooh sounds like fun.

 

 

 

name: Liona Neverwinter

 

age: 23

 

race: Caucasian

 

gender: Female

 

weapon: Dual daggers (such as Kai's)

 

armor: Black leather armor with hints of red.

 

appearance: Hair down to the shoulders, very "big" you could say (not just straight). Very slender in appearance (but deadly =P~ )

 

personality: Gives off a very "I don't give a *" appearance, however, cares for those closest to her.

 

alignment: -2.5

 

short history:

 

 

 

Liona Neverwinter is Nadril's older sister. In a way, she always has looked out for him.

 

 

 

Around the time when Nadril left Liona was off at school, studying. However, because of personal problems, she was forced to leave school and return home.

 

 

 

She returned to find Nadril gone. Her father was in the other room, a cup of coffee in one hand and the other resting his head. She insited that she know where Nadril was.

 

 

 

Her father was a good man. He worked hard to support their family and was a middle class worker. He told her that Nadril had gone off to study in japan, and that he had not heard from him for years.

 

 

 

She was angry, she scowled him and yelled.

 

 

 

"Why did you let him go!?" She yelled. He told her he had no choice, and that it was for Nadril's better good.

 

 

 

She than noticed the tone in her fathers voice.

 

 

 

"what..what's wrong?" She insisted. Her father than explained what had happened. Her mother got involved in the wrong things, and had ended up owing a large ammount of money. When she found out that she couldn't aford it, she left.

 

 

 

"but, what of you?" she asked, softly.

 

 

 

"Well, if I can't pay than i'm going to have to pay. They are coming over right now".

 

 

 

"How could she do this to you!? That *!" Liona grew furiated.

 

 

 

There was a knock on the door.

 

 

 

"get away!" She yelled.

 

 

 

Instantly the door was knocked down, and 3 large men stood there. They were part of a famous and feared mafia. She doesn't know what happened there, but she... snapped. She instantly charged at one of the men, knocking his gun out of his hand and grabing it, shooting the other 2 and him.

 

 

 

And so began her downfall. She isntantly went looking for her mother, to repay what she had done to her father. One day, she found that house. She calmly knocked on the door.

 

 

 

"Hello? Oh why it's you Liona! come, come on in!" Her mother proclaimed.

 

 

 

"look i'm not here for long ok? I just want to know why did you do that to my father."

 

 

 

Her mother looked at her, puzzled.

 

 

 

"DON'T PLAY AROUND WITH ME!" Liona screamed. "I know what you did to him, you left him because you were AFRAID".

 

 

 

Liona's rage built up inside her.

 

 

 

"well, i've come here to tell you, i'm ready to repay the favor..." as she drew a dagger out of her side pocket....

 

 

 

Before she knew it, the cops were on her. Her only chance of making it alive was to escape the US. Going by boat she went over to the only place she could, japan. Little did she know that she would bump into an old certain loved one...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And here is Nadril Neverwinter:

 

 

 

name: Nadril Neverwinter

 

age: 21

 

race: Cacasian (sp?).

 

gender: Male

 

weapon: Varriates between dual katana's or a staff.

 

armor: Light robes for the most part. under them is actual leather armor.

 

appearance: Has long blue hair, probaly around 5"11 or so. Not large muscles at all.

 

personality: Very sarcastic attitude and a dry sense of humor. Does not like fighting for what he doesn't absolutly belive in.

 

alignment: 0 (perhaps slightly to the left a bit, like -0.2)

 

short history:

 

 

 

Nadril Neverwinter from the begining had always been interested in magic and it's uses. At the age of 16 he left his home in the United states to come and train in japan, hoping to learn and unlock the secrets of magic.

 

 

 

Once in Japan he met up with many others at the training school, and through his years learned more and more about the way magic works.

 

 

 

 

 

When he was finished, and had learned almost all he needed to know, he was invited to come help and serve the local milita in an effort. He never wanted to be a hero and was not interested in fighting for a cause he did not belive in. He refused, and, when asked where to go he replied:

 

 

 

"I guess i'll just start following the road onward".

 

 

 

And to that, he started on the path, unknown on what lay ahead of him and who he may meet.

 

 

 

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Well, hopefully those two will do. If you do put one in, both would be awsome to put in. :D

[lazy_cat]

 

Here, you can use this image for ideas. It was a drawing made for a little anime contest I had in ArtRev.

 

 

 

name: Mekura (or formerly known as Niwaka)

 

age: 30

 

race: Japanese???

 

gender: Male (I think that's kinda obvious)

 

weapon: Mechanical Claws

 

armor: -none-

 

appearance: Look for yourself ^^

 

personality: Quiet and studious. A man of few words.

 

alignment: Neutral

 

Village: Waterfall Village

 

short history:

 

 

 

Niwaka who is very similar to Shikamaru minus the laziness was a brilliant strategist. He excelled in many forms of ninjutsu and because of this, he was a possible candidate as the future hokage. He was well recognized for his incredible hand-eyes coordination (the ability to detect the slightest and predictability of movements combined with his hand-to-hand Tiger Claws attacks).

 

 

 

One day, during a class-A mission, a jealous fellow team-mate betrays Niwaka. He was left behind to fend for himself but nonetheless, was able to escape successfully. After catching up with his team-mate (unknowing of the betrayal act), Niwaka was splashed with acid. His eyes were completely burnt but most painfully, the lost of trust. The weaken Niwaka, emotionally and physically, was then knocked off a cliff and was missing eversince.

 

 

 

After 13 years of his disappearance, a rumor arose about a blind man by the name of 'Mekura'; single handedly defeated a group of notorious ninja bandits. Later, another blind man was seen meditating by a waterfall.

 

 

 

Could he possibly be the same person as Mekura or even Niwaka?...*gasp*...psh, most likely lol.

 

 

 

You can use this character if you like or keep in a file somewhere. Anyways, he's obviously not a "genin" but it was fun thinking and writing about him. :)

 

 

 

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P.S. Though I am not the biggest Naruto fan and this may or may not sound lame but I just realize that today is Kakashi's birthday according to wikipedia...XD

[mrmageman]

thank you. both of you. these chars sound pretty cool. 8-)