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Here is the sketch of it, all my friends and family say they like it, should I countinue with it or make a new one?

 

Also, im up for ideas, color suggestions or imporvments.

 

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yeah I know its hard to see whats on the shoulders -.- (it looked better in real lol)

 

I plan on making one as an archer mage and warrior as well depending on how well this one goes.

 

Thanks for your feedback! ::'

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meh, i dont like it, the anatomy of his legs looks like his leg was sawed in half.... but i would scan it in, outline it, and pixel it, or ill shade it for you.

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oh.... honestly its not that good..... i would belive you drew that eaisily. sorry to point out flaws but....

 

 

 

 

 

1. right arm is oddly shaped

 

2. left arm is in an imposible position

 

3. left leg looks like rubber

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Thanks for your feedback I know it has many flaws my friend and I only worked on this during some school classes, (maybe a half-hour total) so you can shade it if ya like, make correction do whatever as long as you know... You dont claim you created it all again thank you

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I agree with you about the flaws though the left arm isn't an impossible shape, dark lines of a mistake make it seem like the hand is super large but really its part of the magic bolt thingy

 

Anyone have any good suggestions for another cool sig?

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you leave me speechless too.. its really bad anatomy wise.. shading wise.. arms look dislocated.. how he shoots a big ball from a pin point i have NO idea.. its just not great.. i give it 4/10

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I havent even shaded it if you cant tell, its just a sketch, lol its not a pinpoint that thing on the guys hand is an... afetr effect I'll call it of shooting the magic (thus doesnt make a lot of sense) but basicaly hes not shooting it from a pinpoint like you think.

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also the left hand is firing the bolt thingy, as I've said this was a 30 min during classtime sketch im merely asking if I should continue it, and improvements I know it doesnt look too great, I need suggestions not critisims, although I dont mind critisims since in a way they are suggestions lol

 

( thx megadedhed I may redo the right arm if i continue)

 

Please more feedback!!!

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Well if ur gonna drop it, could we at least see a full sized version of the sketch?

 

 

 

This one is too small to see. :-k

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Oh, thats the original size that you drew it on?

 

 

 

 

 

I thought you shrunk the picture when you scanned it! :oops:

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