Yerp, I just made this one quickly.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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*Psst*

 

 

 

In my avvy.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway i can make it better without over simplfying it?

Ok, one, I personally find that slightly offensive. Not that I don't enjoy the idea of it......... :oops: Anyways, I don't think it has a place on these forums and I'd reccommend you take it off in case a mod finds it a bit too controversial.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

On the topic of your piece, I feel that black and white would suit it better than green and white. The lines on the woman are also very messy. I'm too lazy to post a picture so look at this done by Terley:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Alright then.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for the line advice on a positive note.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'll clean it up, How about if i was to remove the *Ahem* nipples?

Perhaps something a bit more discreet like this:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Left the head a little messy because it looks more like hair that way.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT: on second thought it looks kindal like a man now. #-o :uhh:

Lol, Ok ok.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I see what you mean with the clothes, I'll sort something out tomorrow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cheers and night.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok my covered up version..

 

 

 

Please work :pray:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'll work on the left monkey arm tomorrow

uh...hmmm

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i'd recomend you take it off right away :notalk:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thats not appropriate for these forums

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

little kids browse here(even tho the 13 age limit)

how is it not appropriate...it almost looks like a man with no clothes on her :twisted: ... anyways it's just an outline of a girl big deal

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Looks good though :

I would say it looks fine...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I seroiusly didn't even think it looked like a strippa till i read the text...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

course this is the guy who wanted to have a random event called "the little nudist" man that was the fastest I have ever gotten 100 supporters... then a stupid mod locked it even though it was completely apropriate... he didn't even delet my post and said that he wanted others to understand what not to post...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway I digress.... I think that it looks pretty good... might wanna work on some basic line shadeing... and some, y'know hair

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

your character doesn't look too feminine as her head is too big, cleaner lines allow you to toggle with the shape more, make her more curvy, Ive used a bit of AA on my edit, don't expect you to do that but it does show by taking more care of each individual pixel you'll get a better result, work on the general anatomy of a woman, simplify it for yourself and take it one step at a time, instead of sketching one out randomly and trying to alter it more and more into a sexy figure.. It'll just look distorted.

The image itself is not bad but the text isn't appropriate for g rated forum sorry. I'd ask that you remove it from your profile or an Admin will have to remove it.