Having a rough time with that shark and the angle of the pool of water..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I finished up the stones

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reworked the tree and placed a new one in

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Worked on pool

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Finished upper roof

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Redid second (smaller) door

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I need to add the ledge that the woman is standing on so that the perspective pops back into view...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I also need to work on the rh wall... thoughts???

Looks nice so far.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The arches on the left wall look really odd.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Are they suppose to be getting smaller and fatter?

 

 

 

Or your perspective is just wrong.

I guess 2 posts/47 views isn't bad. Lots of people are gonna wake up without their lower torso.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Aanyways, I agree with the above poster. Fix the arching doorways on the left. The lady's looking pretty good. ;P I like her hair. The doorway's pretty sweet as well.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'll watch the topic. ;P

I guess 2 posts/47 views isn't bad. Lots of people are gonna wake up without their lower torso.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Aanyways, I agree with the above poster. Fix the arching doorways on the left. The lady's looking pretty good. ;P I like her hair. The doorway's pretty sweet as well.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'll watch the topic. ;P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah I woke up with my sword ready to slice and dice anyone who didn't post... ehhh but heck since you posted... I'll give em a second chance :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I will fix those arches first thing today

post! or I chop you into three parts... muwhaaaaaa hiyaaa!!! Post :evil:

Heh, getting to know what your up against, youll hear from my work soon enough :twisted: .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ahum, C/c, maybe with the pool make the downside of it more dark, and ligher when you go up, also, make some waves of the shark disturb that. And at the edges make it lighter too.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Like your style :

Whats the actual idea behinid this pixel? Im a bit miffed about it, is it meant to be indoors?

Whats the actual idea behinid this pixel? Im a bit miffed about it, is it meant to be indoors?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It is sopposed to be a femal mage overlooking an indoor garden with a treasure room spilling out and to the lh side of the pixel another outdoor garden...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

rh side of the pixel I have no clue what i am going to do with

Ok, well the pool really doesnt look right, it needs to be in the same perspective as the arches. Being the lazy git that I am, if I were you I would make the pool a rectangle for ease of drawing.

 

 

 

You say you've finished the stones? You should dither them, and perhaps add a shadow tone too.

Ok, well the pool really doesnt look right, it needs to be in the same perspective as the arches. Being the lazy git that I am, if I were you I would make the pool a rectangle for ease of drawing.

 

 

 

You say you've finished the stones? You should dither them, and perhaps add a shadow tone too.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I tried dithering on a few of the stonesl... they are so small it doesn't look good on them...

Well I tried it out because I didnt believe you, frankly, and I think it looks fine.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The reason it didnt look good was simply because your highlight colour was too bright.

Well I tried it out because I didnt believe you, frankly, and I think it looks fine.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The reason it didnt look good was simply because your highlight colour was too bright.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah, but imo they don't look as 3d-ish then...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I don't know.. I could be wrong.. Maybe they do need some dithering on the edges and such... this is my first sig that I have ever tried (all my others have been avatars)

Hmm, The walls look like they're to thin to me, and the angle of the pool looks... off somehow, but the person looks good.

Please, spare my torso! :pray:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Alright, time to c/c. *rubs hands together*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I like what you've done with the water so far - I've yet to attempt doing such a difficult thing to pixel but you seem to be pulling it off. :D I also like what you did with the coins spilling out, they're well defined.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The stone walls look awfully thin to me. :| Have you tried thickening them out? It just doesn't seem like they're going to hold up if they're as thin as the door.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The tree by the water's edge looks like it's about to topple over - unless you're going for that effect, you might want to straighten it out. :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The pool, as you've already identified, is at an odd angle - maybe try making the pool widen as it approaches us. :| Not too sure what to do with it though.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It's probably just me, but the character (I assume it's supposed to be female) has very masculine facial features. :| Ignore me if I'm completely wrong. X_X

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That should keep you going for a while. Keep it up, it's looking good apart from the stuff I pointed out just before. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(can I have my torso back now?)

The stone walls look awfully thin to me. Have you tried thickening them out? It just doesn't seem like they're going to hold up if they're as thin as the door.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah, three people can't be wrong... I am going to go back later today (if i have time) and redefine the stone walls over there...

 

 

 

I think that I might dither the stones also...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The tree by the water's edge looks like it's about to topple over - unless you're going for that effect, you might want to straighten it out.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It is sopposed to be leaning, I might have gone a bit too far

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The pool, as you've already identified, is at an odd angle - maybe try making the pool widen as it approaches us. Not too sure what to do with it though.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah I might also try and make it square like what his name suggested... Anything to make it look a tad better

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It's probably just me, but the character (I assume it's supposed to be female) has very masculine facial features. Ignore me if I'm completely wrong. X_X

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hmm, the stickler... I really have no clue how to make her (yes her) fetures appear more feminine.. :-s

 

 

 

I might try and thin the nose define the lips and highlight the face more

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for your comments and C\C... You got off, but over a hundred other people are waking up without legs :( [/b]

Feminine features? Smaller nose, smaller chin, thinner waist, thinner arms (maybe), and the hips, try to make them a bit smaller too.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

However, I can see where you are coming from, that it's a bit hard to do.