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[softwarewiz]

too much flame

[Dharockslayer]

Okay, where do I start.

 

 

 

First up, really do shading. Its non existant.

 

 

 

Second, the anatomy on the people is horrifying. Learn yourself some anatomy.

 

 

 

Thirdly, Thick black outlines? really, it does not make it look nicer, infact it makes it horrible.

 

 

 

Fourth and last, your linework stinks.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I wont rate it for the sake of your selfesteem, but learn to pixel :?

[runemetsa]

Okay, where do I start.

 

 

 

First up, really do shading. Its non existant.

 

 

 

Second, the anatomy on the people is horrifying. Learn yourself some anatomy.

 

 

 

Thirdly, Thick black outlines? really, it does not make it look nicer, infact it makes it horrible.

 

 

 

Fourth and last, your linework stinks.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I wont rate it for the sake of your selfesteem, but learn to pixel :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Can't say anything else. Some helpful tutorials:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Click Me] and [Click Me]

[softwarewiz]

ok thanks for the help, i did this today aswell (i did these all today)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i only really started and the guy who made the first comment, you really need to get out your padded room........ :roll:

[Fortress2000]

You didn't do the brush...

[runemetsa]

ok thanks for the help, i did this today aswell (i did these all today)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i only really started and the guy who made the first comment, you really need to get out your padded room........ :roll:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That's a googled picture with some lines and text on it...

[Junction]

ok thanks for the help, i did this today aswell (i did these all today)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i only really started and the guy who made the first comment, you really need to get out your padded room........ :roll:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

he's right tho, as nasty and mean as it may sound but you really need to look more into the art form.

[Fortress2000]

Here's a little hint. Spend alot of time on one sig, and make it really good, rather than making lots, but only spending a little time on each.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

One higher quality picture is always better than a few rubbish ones.

[Dharockslayer]

ok thanks for the help, i did this today aswell (i did these all today)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i only really started and the guy who made the first comment, you really need to get out your padded room........ :roll:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh, do you want me to say, PMG ur a god @ pixeling plz teach meh!11.

 

 

 

I could have gone way harder on you.

 

 

 

And by the way, heres a tip: Learn to take constructive critism.

[softwarewiz]

not really constructive critisicm, more like a list of rants.. anyway, i spent about 45minutes on this one which is ok its meant to be a o.o.c witch:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(btw its not a sig, and i used runemetsa's guide, kind of thing, and just drew it as a picture)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and btw im only like thirteen years old, most people my age barely can draw using pencils, let alone ms paint :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

edit:just noticed the guy above me has a o.o.c member on his sig, i didnt copy him... honest :uhh:

[deleteddeleted]

i can draw with a pencil......

[peter_selie]

Can't say I appreciate that, but you're getting better. :o

 

 

 

Good luck on your pixeling, but don't post if you can't handle C/c, however harsh. :

[softwarewiz]

i can draw with a pencil......

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yeah but there are some right [developmentally delayed]s in my art class who think do right with a pencil you hold it in you.... O:)

[BloodAngel]

Dharockslayer is right on his criticisms because to be honest they aren't anything special. My advice is if you want to get good at pixelling is to look through tutorials and have a look at how people shade their pixels. However if you can't handle the advice that people give to you then there isn't much point in trying to pixel.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Bloodangel

[softwarewiz]

Dharockslayer is right on his criticisms because to be honest they aren't anything special. My advice is if you want to get good at pixelling is to look through tutorials and have a look at how people shade their pixels. However if you can't handle the advice that people give to you then there isn't much point in trying to pixel.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Bloodangel

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

k i can handle the advice. However im new to this (today in fact) I dont have much self esteem to bother doing it again, because basically they've had a lot of flame

[Nazgul740]

not really constructive critisicm, more like a list of rants.. anyway, i spent about 45minutes on this one which is ok its meant to be a o.o.c witch:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(btw its not a sig, and i used runemetsa's guide, kind of thing, and just drew it as a picture)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and btw im only like thirteen years old, most people my age barely can draw using pencils, let alone ms paint :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

edit:just noticed the guy above me has a o.o.c member on his sig, i didnt copy him... honest :uhh:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NO you do not!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I guess you aren't aware that godslayer is only like 14??? (notice the "only like")

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

STOP MAKING EXCUSES FOR YOURSELF!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I am so sick of people saying "waa i used paint and its not a good program" or "i am only like (and btw "like"??? what the flameing gerble do you mean "like"? you either are 13 years old or you aren't... jeeze!) 13 years old, so rate me on my age as well"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

No! freaking no! I refuse to take anymore of this junk from anyone in the gallery.... I will rate on your artwork... Not your age, program, skin type, or hair problem! Good grief! people need to start saying, "I might not be the best for my age, but i can give my best effort, take crits and get better" Instead of constantly makeing LAME excuses and trying to cover the fact that they aren't that good...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I don't claim to be the best pixeler out there... I KNOW I am not... But i will take and critisem laid against my work and try to use to get to better... If you do that, nobody can say anything against you...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Now stop making excuses and draw

[reddawn509]

ok thanks for the help, i did this today aswell (i did these all today)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i only really started and the guy who made the first comment, you really need to get out your padded room........ :roll:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

do not bite somebodies head off because they give you critcism, if you wanted a pat on the back, with your art looking like that, do not take it here, possibly take it to a preschool teacher or something....do not get offended when people post C/C, its there to help you improve, not insult you...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

now for my C/C

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anatomy- The anatomy on these pictures are barley resembeling human. This may seem harsh, but it is true. None of the characters have necks, and their arms are to short. Arms usually fall near the mid thigh, not the mid chest.... Study an online anatomy guide or book, these help tremendously, I say this alot, but it is true.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Shading- The only shading I see, berley constitues pillow shading. A small line of darker color around the edge of a image doe not constitue shading. Look at something in real life, and study how the colors shift from one to another, and try to mimic that in your work. Use lighter and darker shades, and use them in a way that looks realistic. Do not jsut go from lighter to darker to the center of an image, this is pillow shading, and it does not show much effort behind the work. Chose a light sorce and shade in occurance to that. If none of this makes since, look at some of Tip.It's guides in the Gallery FAQ, or google a pixeling guide.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Linework- Work on the smoothness of the lines, and the resembelence to real life. A mans arm is not squiggely, it is smooth. In this art, you define muscles as a horizontal line across the chest with a vertical line through the center. This might be acceptable for a robot, but not for a human. I will draw a little sketch of a little bit more how it should be (agian, a anatomy book will help)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I fixed up anatomy, it is not perfect, but it shows you the basic idea.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

now, practice,practice, practice, and you will improve :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and by the way, I am 13, and I DO NOT do art like that, age is not an excuse.

[softwarewiz]

 

not really constructive critisicm, more like a list of rants.. anyway, i spent about 45minutes on this one which is ok its meant to be a o.o.c witch:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(btw its not a sig, and i used runemetsa's guide, kind of thing, and just drew it as a picture)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and btw im only like thirteen years old, most people my age barely can draw using pencils, let alone ms paint :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

edit:just noticed the guy above me has a o.o.c member on his sig, i didnt copy him... honest :uhh:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NO you do not!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I guess you aren't aware that godslayer is only like 14??? (notice the "only like")

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

STOP MAKING EXCUSES FOR YOURSELF!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I am so sick of people saying "waa i used paint and its not a good program" or "i am only like (and btw "like"??? what the flameing gerble do you mean "like"? you either are 13 years old or you aren't... jeeze!) 13 years old, so rate me on my age as well"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

No! freaking no! I refuse to take anymore of this junk from anyone in the gallery.... I will rate on your artwork... Not your age, program, skin type, or hair problem! Good grief! people need to start saying, "I might not be the best for my age, but i can give my best effort, take crits and get better" Instead of constantly makeing LAME excuses and trying to cover the fact that they aren't that good...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I don't claim to be the best pixeler out there... I KNOW I am not... But i will take and critisem laid against my work and try to use to get to better... If you do that, nobody can say anything against you...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Now stop making excuses and draw

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

sheesh calm down, this is an online conversation, people arent as rude in real life because if you are you get smacked (im not reffering to you or anything) i think creating this topic was a bad idea, all it is, is flame. Ive not seen any1 elses work whos posted on this thread, i actually at least post my drawings, you guys are like vultures and find anything to pick about. Merry x mas.... :roll:

[reddawn509]

We do not mean to flame, we try and help you, but I guess you look at it wrong, and if you want to see my work, look around the gallery, look at all my posts........we aree not vultures, agian, we are trying to help you improve, do not post here if you are not prepared to take criticism.

[tomdavies90]

it wouldn't have been so bad if you hadn't called them pixels, just call them cartoon pictures and don't draw with the paint brush!