well this is actually only my second full size sig that i have finished. Took me 3 hours on the grass, just get tired of making 2 px lines all over the places so it may seem that one side has more grass then the other. Any one have a better method for doing grass that looks good? Also if you dont know the little brown thing in the water is a snail. And yes I know the arms look weird.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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c/c or comment.

 

 

 

if you want to see my first sig then click here

I'm liking the duck and the flowers. The rest needs some work. You need the shading to not stand out too much. The grass could probably go with a new start. I found that choosing three shades of green and making small patches. I would shade the face and make the mouth and ears more noticable. You could put more hair to show more of the ear and choose a darker colour for the mouth. Anatomy is a problem but if it helps you could get a friend to lay down in the way you want in the sig or something, and quickly sketch it to get the basic idea. Water is pretty hard to shade right so I can't really help you there. You could add ripples around the duck and flowers. Hope I could help. :D

fixed a few things:

 

 

 

added more contrast with water

 

 

 

pants are shaded with more colors

 

 

 

removed grass, left green for now untill i can get the shading if it down

 

 

 

extened hairline

 

 

 

increased lip area and shaded aroud lips

 

 

 

made person slouch a little

 

 

 

fixed up shading around face

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

doin good

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

he looks a little... stiff?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and his shoulders arnt right

tilted his head back.

 

 

 

 

 

 

saved over version 2 so i cant make an animation

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and his shoulders arnt right

 

 

 

dont know how to fix them when is he is that pos

He needs a shadow \

added shadow not really worth a update but nothing else to do.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I would add more to the other side of the chest and maybe put the furthest leg (furthest from us) in a /\ sort of thing instead of being straight. :D

Now his arms need shadows.

Now his arms need shadows.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

his closest arm has a shadow behind it and the farthest arm is facing toward the sun so it does not really have one.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway i made the legs farther apart.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That's not quite what I meant by the legs :) I decided to edit a few things that I think needed to be changed on the person. Here it is

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I changed the pos of the leg and shaded around the jaw a bit. I didnt really like your shading too much on the legs because they seemed too smooth and the shirt because it seemed to "blotchy". I also went back a version.

 

 

 

he looks like he is screaming in pain, move his neck a little less slanted, and put a smile on....

^^^ He is looking up in shock with his mouth open, give him some thing to be worried about, like an atom bomb or a plane with iraq written on the side :).

the foot on he leg that is up dosent look right

 

 

 

his leg should be a little higher and his foott flat on the ground

Maybe he could be leaning against a tree or something :-k

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

^^^ He is looking up in shock with his mouth open, give him some thing to be worried about, like an atom bomb or a plane with iraq written on the side :).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What the hell is wrong with you?

Maybe he could be leaning against a tree or something :-k

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

^^^ He is looking up in shock with his mouth open, give him some thing to be worried about, like an atom bomb or a plane with iraq written on the side :).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What the hell is wrong with you?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Eh? What you mean whats wrong with me lol?

The shading on the guy is nice, IMO.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As long as the rest of the sig has that amount of contrast and strength then it will look good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The lillypads should also be at more of an angle, they look flat atm and it makes gives the whole picture a messed up perspective.