My new artwork...comments?

[ryoushinn]

Here's some recent artwork. Sorry if it's huge, but i know some people are too lazy to click links, so...=)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A sketch that i drew last year, and recently colored for fun. Still unfinished. I was just playing with the background, that's not what it's gonna look like obviously. Note: I drew it last year. Obviously there's like a billion jillion things wrong with the lineart.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Drew and colored with sharpies. Lined paper. =(

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Something i drew last night. It's a bit disproportionate since i'm not used to draw on large paper, and since it's unfinished and on large paper, i had to take a pic with a camera.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And lastly, my weird pastel mountains. I had to draw what i felt mountains looked like. I just imagined where the highlights and shadows would be. Still looks weird, but oh well.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So, comments, critique? 8-)

[Star.]

They are really cool. You are giving Princessa a run for her money-ish. I don't see anything wrong, you have a good sense of lighting. :thumbsup:

[ryoushinn]

They are really cool. You are giving Princessa a run for her money-ish. I don't see anything wrong, you have a good sense of lighting. :thumbsup:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks. =)

[terley]

first one - shading is pretty awesome, especially the hair and the top.. my only concern with it is the skin's shading doesn't have the same depth as the rest of the image, up the contrast a bit, add some browns and highlights.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

second one - again looks pretty good, you're a natural with anime.. only niggle would be the left eye looks slightly larger than the right, pulling the face over slightly, erm hard to explain but you did a great job considering its just a lined paper drawin.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

third one - lol u can see the rubbings :lol: .. I think the proportions are fab, it definately needs inking up..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

fourth one - veery blurry, took on your camera non the less haha, looks very interesting, pastel is pretty messy to work with but I think it looks great, the top of the mountains look like cracked open coconuts, great use of colour your a really good artist. :

[ryoushinn]

first one - shading is pretty awesome, especially the hair and the top.. my only concern with it is the skin's shading doesn't have the same depth as the rest of the image, up the contrast a bit, add some browns and highlights.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

second one - again looks pretty good, you're a natural with anime.. only niggle would be the left eye looks slightly larger than the right, pulling the face over slightly, erm hard to explain but you did a great job considering its just a lined paper drawin.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

third one - lol u can see the rubbings :lol: .. I think the proportions are fab, it definately needs inking up..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

fourth one - veery blurry, took on your camera non the less haha, looks very interesting, pastel is pretty messy to work with but I think it looks great, the top of the mountains look like cracked open coconuts, great use of colour your a really good artist. :

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks! =)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

On the first one, i added this brownish color for the shadows of the skin, it looked a bit strange. I needa find out how to do smooth blending with that. Thanks though. I probably wouldn't be fixing it if you hadn't mentioned that. xD

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

On the sharpie one, if you look closely you can see how her right ear is WAY high, but i colored it the color of the hair so you couldn't notice...xD

 

 

 

I guess i was pretty lucky to get it somewhat proportional, cause i couldn't erase the sharpie. o.0

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And yeah, once i finish the sketch i'm gona scan it in and ink it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks though! I appreciate you comments. =)

[Despaxes]

Major things i noticed.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

First one-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Her hair looks crooked. It seems way too far too the right. It makes it seem offbalanced and throws the whole piece off.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Second one-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The lazy eye is killing me.

[woopidoo2]

The first 2 look really good! =D>

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but at the second one, is the right arm (her right arm) supposed to be white?

[ryoushinn]

Major things i noticed.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

First one-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Her hair looks crooked. It seems way too far too the right. It makes it seem offbalanced and throws the whole piece off.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Second one-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The lazy eye is killing me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well, the first one's kinda messed up. I drew it last year. =o

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks.