Everytime I think; I dont think I have the energy to read so much right now, but everytime I find my self unable to not keep reading!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Please post part four soon! :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(Have you thought of what I said; about sending all parts of this story to jagex? )

Great story, hope you send it in to Jagex. :wink:

I'm not going to send this to Jagex - they have rejected everything I've written in the past.. but thank you all the same.

can u post wot else u sent to jagex if its half as good as this

its even better then you made it sound on runescape!way to go!!!!!!! :D

Time for part four. I warn you all, this week's entry is not as exciting than some of the previous.

 

 

 

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The Legend of the Ogre-Child.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Part four: The student.

 

 

 

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Rain fell on the thatched roof of the small school. The young student stared out the window, his face planted in his hand. He sighed in absolute boredom.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

School was no challenge to the lad any more. When he first arrived, he struggled with lessons, and was teased by the other students. However, with time, his speech had improved, and he began to excel in his studies.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ism was now 17 years old. The young man was the child of the legendary explorers, Gradius and Willhema. During an expedition to the mysterious Ogre city known as GuÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢Tanoth, the explorers and their baby son disappeared.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Many years later, a boy of about 12 years of age stumbled into Yanille, dressed in tatters. He was tired, hungry, and filthy. The medics of the town aided the boy, who spoke of his upbringing by a family of Ogres. They believed he was delirious.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Days later, the young man was brought before the grand wizard. Immediately he recognised the child, and was astounded. Ism told the old man, in his broken speech, how he had lived, and passed a set of trials before three Ogre elders.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The wizard took in this information with great interest. For many years, the wizards of Yanille believed all Ogres to be completely uncivlized, and an enemy. He began to believe differently.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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The school bell rang. Students rose and began to leave the classroom. As they left, the class teacher spoke.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅStudents, donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t forget to complete your homework assignments on the elemental rune-stones. They are due tomorrow.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Time for part four. I warn you all, this week's entry is not as exciting than some of the previous.

 

 

 

All of this will help us to understand the great Ism Jism better, and that is exiting enough :D :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wasn't disapointed with part 4 at all.... When is the next one ready???

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:wink: Acasha

gr8 i no it wernt full of action but its still good

abo[bleep]ly loved it, like posted before just remove all the runescape names of citys and other suff and pow u have a very very very very wealthy man

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

now get back to work

Thanks again guys. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I've been editing and re-editing part five, which I believe is now ready. Again, it's more plot-building stuff, and lighter on the action. Rest assured, the final part, part six, will be long and exciting.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

By the way, I forgot to add the name of the next part - it's called Part Five - King's Court.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I will put it up approximately 24 hours from this post.

 

 

 

I will put it up approximately 24 hours from this post.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

no more of this 24 hour crap YOU ARE TORTURING ME!!!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

GAHHHHHHHH

hey,YOU try making a story that fast, let alone one this good!Give the man a break hes obviously busy.

uh he doesnt do them in 24 hourS.... hes just torturing ME by posting 24hours ahead then posts it

oh well tahst the way i do mine, my bad

Dead good. I like it alot. You put great pride in your work, although it may be a bit small. But quality over Quantity.

 

 

 

PS: read my story, legend of the virus

The Legend of the Ogre-Child.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Part five: KingÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s Court

 

 

 

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The wrought-iron gates creaked as Ism pushed them open. He looked around, and spotted no signs of the guards he had expected. This was most odd to the teenager. A metropolis such as Varrock would need to be guarded constantly, he thought.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Approaching the entrance to the palace, he glanced nervously around the empty forecourt. A few decorative fountains bubbled rapidly, while birds sang in the trees. The city was certainly picturesque.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Still no guards were seen.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He stepped inside the palace, and saw a crowd of people, watching a show. Guards, servants, townspeople, peasants, children, and seated on the throne, King Roald. They roared with laughter, watching the antics of three men with bright face paint and oddly-colored clothes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ism stood silently, examining the room. On the walls were hung many artifacts, wall hangings, tapestries, and portraits. One in particular caught his eye. He stepped closer to the painting, and read the inscription.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Gradius, Willhema, and son (child un-named).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

IsmÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s eyes widened, and he gasped in surprise. The fair-haired baby in the painting was him! He looked carefully at his parents, and a tear formed in his eye. This was the first time he had seen what they looked like.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The show ended, and the people started back to their jobs. A guard approached Ism, and spoke.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅBack to school, lad. Showtime is over.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

I love it! But...do you have to make a final part so soon..? :P

i posted here after the first 2 parts and i am going to say basically the same thing brilliant very very well written and when you have said they may not be as exciting i think they have lived up to everyone of my expectations! I look forward to the final part and i will be sad that its over but from now on i will look out for your works and im sure that they will be just as good!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for the great read!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Neanderslave

i absolutly loved it and i would have read it as soon as it was posted buuut..... i went to an IU vs. UK basketball game MIKE DAVIS SUCK!!!!!! (i love IU) but MIKE DAVIS SUCKS!!!!!! any way great story NOW GET BACK TO WORK SLAVE!!!!!!!! *cracks whip* teeheehee

Heh, reading that was probably the highlight point of my "midnight snack" keep it up dude it's the best story I've ever read :wink:

gr8 really gr8 but i think ( i don't knnow) that there is potential to go more then the 6 parts but as i haven't read the last part i don't know

I'm half-way through part six - it's really long. I should be ready for the usual post time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:P

you should become a professional writer! i mean this is great!!!! im so sad that 6 is the last one :(

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

btw, since your a mod, can i ask u this question- would this phrase:"rules are there to be broken" be allowed in a sig? or owuld it stir up too much troble??

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

gr8 story

Ignore this 'Guest' business - I'm still here, and part six will go up soon, as planned.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:)

Ignore this 'Guest' business - I'm still here, and part six will go up soon, as planned.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What happend to your account anyway? :?