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:P hmm...... *thinks of how to advertise it more in sig* Haha! I'll think of something

I guess your right

its good

well, pro's its a small, quite town there is a bank near by there is a post office nearby lovely views cons its a small, quite town there is no big shop nearby It is hard to find something to do outside pollutuion

Well, its just I love writing and english. Its my goal in life to become a succesful author, I can't see how some people can hate it. Its the one subject where no one puts the same answer. Its not in two books the answer is "1 - 4 = -3" in all the people's books but its more like "My viewpoint on this poem is that the writer was trying to capture the image of how the people worship water as if it was finer than gold" and then in someone elses its "my viewpoint is that the author was trying to make us realise what we take for granted can be considered precious. because for us we know that the water is there in the tap, but they have to hope for rain"

Its really good, it captures a diffrent view of a vampire so this is me :thumbsup: well done, you are a very talented writer

its not a rant, and sorry if it seemed like I was having a go at suzi, I was asking why board a is more used than board b

I read chapter 1 and 2 and don't really understand. I think that the first chapter should be full of a bit more discription. instead of "they sent us all flowers. roses, voilets everything. even plants i'd never heard of" try something a bit more like "They sent each and everyone of us a small set of flowers, there where red thorned roses, delicate and precious violets and a few others that I don't know the names of." I'm not good at the punctuation my self but its more the imagery that I'm on about.

more than you have

stop right there =; :shame:

Well I bet you posted on here yesterday? so why not there?

lol

but ape! Why?? there are so many other talented people's work there! Check it all out, not just one person's.

listen to your heart, when she's talking to you. think to yourself, only you can decide, should you be nervous?

aha! so there is another librarian amongst us!

I have noticed some boards like general get used so much more than something like the varrock library. Personally I use both quite alot, is it just me or are Tip. Iters people who dont like reading?? If you do visit the varrock library today. note: sorry is this is breaking some rule or something, if it is please lock it/move it or whatever ~Andufus

hmm... elven lands you say? Thats intresting I love mystical creatures like elves, must do that wuest some time :

This is my secdond draft of a character for my book - john. It is supposed to be a bit mysterious. I will add the histories and stuff later, right now I'm tired and don't really want to write it right now. but here it is small note: Chapter unfinished the title might not make much sense but it will be clearer later. Issy I changed the title since the pm :wink: Chapter one: hunting darkness The forest is a scary place to be when you're alone, especially at night. But not everyone was hesitant of the darkness - a silhouette slipped through the trees like a fox - slick and silent. After a while the silhouette stopped in a small clearing, it was dark but small streaks of moonlight slipped through the fog. The figure looked around the small clearing and noticed it was about the size of a small campsite, except it was filled with the screeching of night owls and noises of the wild life. The silhouette was the shadow of a man, he was known to his people long ago as John. He was a human who was a talented hunter; he had left his people after certain things that he chose not to remember. John looked up and ran his hand through his dark hair; he then tried to start collecting firewood. He found it hard to see through the fog but soon managed to amass a pile of dead twigs and branches, and when he was satisfied with it pulled up the left sleeve of his robes. He stretched out his hand and muttered some of the ancient ritual words that he was taught years ago. Three ocean blue sparks appeared from his hand, followed by a blast of pure fire. It started to smoulder and slowly burst into life, it gave a warm glow and an unnatural amount of smoke curled upwards in the sky. That was an unnatural side effect of magical fire; it crackled loudly and then calmed down. The fire licked up around the wood, slowly turning it to ash. Very slowly John sat down and stretched his hands out, and sighed as he appreciated the small warmth that it gave. John swung round as he heard a small twig snap. A large bear that had long matted hair stood in front of him. His hair was coated with small patches of blood, sweat and mud. His claws where long and pointed and sharp. There was a vicious look on his face, and he growled. John reached into his long robes and pulled out a knife. It was a small hunter knife, made out of fine steel. The handle was decorated with the moon tribeÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s symbols for the elements. The blade shone in the small light of the fire. The beast leapt forward into a strike, by the skin of his teeth John dodged. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅYou [bleep]!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Well, LeeLee granted so far, I have only read the first paragraph. And I know I'm not perfect at it but the first sentance needs to really draw the audiance in. I'll read the rest tomorrow, I'm making a thread for something and going to bed :wink:

Can we all provide a small peace of writing to go with our answer? and LeeLee you are a bit like me. The elements of the world fasinate me and I love writing about them. I'll put my peace of writing up in a moment.

oh, that was ment to be a pm! lol

oops, mistake

see ya issy, that quote is my favourite one! :