Sir_Erderik

[its to the left of here, also below. Rate it if you want to, Leave C/C if you want to. Please tell me if theres anything I can improve on, it's my first attempt at making a stack of gold. Changed the boarder to match the background of the forums. First: Plain & Chalice: Gold, Gems, Glory: Furious Phat, the blue: Golden Triangle Thingy: Runite swords(I really like the corner border I made) These are some 'Ice swords! (It's a pun) Which one do you guys think is the best?

Nice, I really like that first one because it looks like something from a horror movie (not the picture itself, just the location and the whole feel of the picture). The second one is cool too, how many mirrors were there?

Ya, the text just isn't working and the arm is wierd, otherwise I like it. I think you should mabey just start over because you saved it as JPG, eather that or the site you used to upload it transferred it to JPG.

3 words, Shading and Detail.

Ya, it's nothing special. You could have made the hats fit over the stick peoples heads and made the ice block more detailed than a cyan box tool.

What the picture said.

MS Paint, I had to edit me(dragon owning me) and the red damage splash(38, just needed a pic for it so I didn't wear shield lol) out of the dragon fire, that was the hardest part because I hardly understood Paint back then.

Bump

This post is pretty much a bump, but I updated the hands(he has some now! lol...) and I added hair, did some more detail on the shirt(that turned out better than I thought.), I have no idea how to do the pants, anyone wana make a quick sketch on how I could?

Ok, tommarow I'll rework the hands, get a shirt started, work on the water(mabey add a bridge and a path). I think a boulder in the center behind the path would be cool, and a tree by that.

Sorry for mistaking it as steel, it does look like a platebody though. Try making it more rugged and blocky, make the shoulders bigger mabey. Try to get the colors darker and put less shine on it, last time I checked Granite doesn't reflect like steel. Hope this helps.

Got some new updates on them, this is harder than I thought using MS Paint... What do you guys think I should improve on now?

Ok, thanks for the comments. I'll try to make him smaller and make the hands turned. I think I did save it as BMP and that it got turned into JPEG, if I resave the original picture as a PNG can I upload it again to get rid of the JPEG?

Very nice edits, I think you should make the toe on the visible boot bigger and less pointed, like an acutual boot, alos mabey make the rune part of them come up to around the ankle, otherwise it's amazing. P.S. Just wanted to ask, why is he wearing a steel platebody? P.P.S. How did you get so amazing?

I'm guna make a pixel picture(not a sig or an avatar), I might make it smaller to be a sig later though, depends on how it turns out. EDIT: Fixed the JPEG Problem. Anatomy: Here is the basic person that I'm going to feature in the picture, I still need to add the feet and detail it more, any advice on how I should do the feet? First: Current: Background: Here's the background I have so far, the area around the river ends in a type of waterfall by the horrizon. First: Current: That's all I got so far, please comment and leave C/C.

That is really good for a first attempt, I just have one question. If your f2p for life(says on the sig) then why do you have Black Mystic and an Ancient Staff?

It is very well done, only it looks to much like a woman to me... mabey make the chin a little more defined and the mouth less feminine.

I like it a lot, make the ground around the rocks way more detailed. Also, mabey add some veins or exposed ore in the actual rocks, mabey take a part out where the pick is hitting.

Thanks :D

You drew that with a pen? Then why is all pixely? Well I suppose it is good, the actual foot could be longer. Oh ya, that one toe on the far right, it could use some work.

I like them all. P.S. Where did you get the Halo text?

I support.

Without those, the only thing on high detail will be the log-in music and the annoying roofs of buildings.

I saved your pic to my computer so I could show you some things ok. In your pic the shadows are off in comparison to the suns possition, follow the black lines in my edit to see which way they should go. Secondly, the mountain and the snow on it. The mountain should be a more greyish-brown color, it looks better with the snow. Now the snow, try not to use the line tool when making things like that, I used the pencil tool and 3 shades of white/cyan on my edit. The skin tone on the person needs more depth, I made the original skin tone a little less grey and added shading. The areas I circled in red need to be improved on, for the door try to make it a little more symetrical. The towers need more depth and add some stone chunks around the area it fell from. Th castle also needs more shading on it, and its in 2-D, try to get it 3-D. For the grass, I suggest getting one more shade of dark green by the bottom. I also changed the red stripe in the sunset to be more pinkish-purple, I think it fits good. For the second one I'm only going to say improve the shades on the lava, mabey the blue/cyan block thing(ice spell?) in the background, make the castle a little less like the one in the first pic, and improve the skyline.