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Sing For Absolution - Muse

Angels and Demons: Awful movie.

You've Seen the Butcher - Deftones

Rock Post Hardcore D&B Electronica Metal Hip Hop Indie.. Is the genres which cover everything I like.

Numb - Linkin Park

Night Drive - Jimmy Eat World

You Can't See The Forest For The Wolves - Funeral For a Friend

Different - Pendulum

Re-Education (Through Labor) - Rise Against.

Enth E Nd - Linkin Park

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Nothing Else Matters - Metallica

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Th Nan jokes on facebook... Where have they come from? They cover nearly the majority of my news feed...

I think in that case, he really needs to stress the fact that this isn't a dating process, that romantic feelings will never grow out of it, and that if she's not ready for that, she should just give it up. If it's already done, I guess there's nothing left but for her to fall flat on her face then hate him/learn something. And regardless, this is probably something he could save her from. He might not be doing the wrong thing, but he's certainly not being a great guy. And when you've got a chance to easily do something great for someone, shouldn't you take it? I am not offended by your questioning of my morality. I made it rather clear to her that I'm not one for relationships and feelings and whatnot, and the friends with benefits thing was her idea. While I could have said no...would you? I don't even think she has feelings for me to be honest, considering she texts my buddy ALL THE TIME stuff like 'hey come drink with me and sleep over, I don't have cooties ;) " and trying to get him to hook up with her. So...I feel I'm not exactly going against any moral standard here lol. [and for the record, my buddy's trying to get with her friend, so he's obviously not interested in her either] Well she's a [bleep] then by the sounds of it... What happened to standards..

I'm well aware of the consequences of my potential actions. I accept this responsibility, and the inevitable [cabbage] storm that succeeds it. Wait, so you know you're going to be using her and hurting her, but you accept this responsability? Am I missing something? You're not missing anything, you're just not agreeing with it. RPG's girl knows he doesn't like her, she cannot expect anything new to come up. It's HER fault if she gets "hurt" in the future or creates drama. RPG's just taking advantage of what he's acquired; it's nothing to fuss over if you can deal with conflict. Taking advantage is pretty [cabbage]ty though.

I don't but I should.

It's good but very cliché in the sense that it seems you take a lot of ideas from song lyrics and paraphrase them around you.. But that doesn't subtract from it, just if you have used song lyrics and changed them try and harness the raw emotion without influence. The writing you will be able to produce will be brilliant.

You can just open with "One of the questions." This is a personal essay so you don't need to use I. This sentence doesn't make sense as you are stating the same thing twice, you should re word this. I would personally remove the word "resonate." It doesn't fit the style of writing you are trying to achieve. This is very picky but in any formal essay you should expand it fully to "That is" if you keep it. You could do a lot more with your word allowance if you stopped repeating the exact same thing the next sentence. Embedding sentences. Right, I've just checked only this one of many in this essay and it doesn't work. Mainly because you have your sentence ordered muddled up: That makes sense unlike your previous sentence. Every day doesn't need to be between commas and should be before "is" and you are missing a "to" as well. Another picky point but the use of the word "expanding" isn't really the best. Also' date=' please, state the obvious. Don't leave words unqualified; hammer your point home. Also, change your sentence structure up more. A powerful essay will employ a variety of different sentence structures. Just a query but has somebody taught you recently how to use commas? You seem to try and throw them into every sentence; don't crowbar techniques in, let it flow fluently. Another thing, one) what tense are you trying to write in? You seem to flirt between tenses but never firmly using one. secondly) Whenever you have a word such as "and" or "but" you have no need to use a comma. As you will see, I went through and removed every unneeded one. Writing as "one" is not necessary and sounds stupid in this context. If you are going to refer to yourself stick to I not "one must." Part take is two words. It should also be "in" not "of." Doesn't seem to make sense how you have used it. In those first two lines of paragraph one you don't really go anywhere. You state a point and then set about re stating the same point just written differently. No need to end the sentence there just remove the full stop. Qualify your point, what is your situation? Yes you only have 400 words to play with but if you scrap out all the unnecessary waffle you can write a much better essay. Also, the stuff underlined s all the commas you may want to remove. Oh, I apologise for picking apart your essay.

Thank you, I'm not even religious just use religious ideals and twist them into a darker sense which is my current project I'm starting on tomorrow. And it will be depressing as it's my coping mechanism to deal with excess emotions and such.

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