diophantusdan

maybe it does look a bit asque, but technically, there is nothing incorrect. I'll try to fix it.

Yah they do, but the big black part is supposed to be an eye. Maybe it should be slightly lower.

Well, here is what I have so far, soon I'll add characters, any comments and helpful hints would be most welcome. Thanks for looking.

I still cant get the 10x to work, but the the grid and thumbnail will come in handy for me.

#-o , it was banned on runevillage months before it was banned on tip it.

it looks purple to me. It just has a bit more blue in it.

yes that is supposed to be a mouth lol. Thanks for the comments everyone. I messed up originaly making everything at the right angles, and didnt notice till I had gotten pretty far, so I really didn't feel like doing it over. I tried to make some adjustments but it wouldnt work. Once, again, thanks for the comments (and I dont see how the right wall is messed up either #-o )

yes, perfect, this is the stuff thats good. Original and funny. Not hard to do, but funny.

Well, it took two and a half days to finish. Not sure if I am completely done. Still trying to figure out how I can add more detail, suggestions would be helpful. Anyway, comments, critisism, all welcome.

oh and while im at it i used a reference for the church too.

Its not that its bad made, its just not very interesting. It would be better with a story of some kind.

sigh*i new i should have mentioned using a reference. I did not trace, however. I really dont have any proof of it though, you can either believe me or not. I guess the colors arent random in the sense that i made them myself(though some i did). They were random because i would zoom in on the area i was working on and use the color coyping tool to randomly click on a pixel i liked and transfer it. From there i made variations of that color for the rest of it. The stars are extremely similar because i did them as similarly as possible, while trying to make it be pixelzed at the same time. None of it was copy and paste from the original. Like i said though, there is no way to prove this, you can either believe me or not.

Only problem i see is that the only thing on the chat screen is him talking. It should at least say welcome to rs or something. Why did you even fake that part? The rest is good.

Yes im planning to add enough shadows that things are a bit smoother. If that doesnt work all make all the colors darker. I will eventually add flowers and stuff. And I sorta see what your saying about the horizon line, but im kinda dumbfounded on how i should fix the problem. Thanks for the comments guys.

I guess it depends what you use it for...what are you using it for by the way.

err, im kinda on the edge. I like #1 i guess. And they are really small.

Im not really sure what to suggest. I guess the only thing that comes to mind is not to have black lines around your shadows. You might also want to add some more complex shading. I can tell you tried though, most people dont put much effort in.

Yah im planning a graveyard and someother stuff. And thanks for the comments everybody.

yah they clash for now. Hopefully by the time im done i can fix that. Im gonna be adding lots of shading so hopefully it will smooth out. Im not sure exactly where you're going with the path. Thanks for the comments though. what does this "^" mean pureleader?

THis is a WIP...not done yet. K, this was all done in paint. I actually had to dumb down on some parts of the sky, cuz it looked to real, and I wanted it so you could tell it was made in paint. It was almost all pencil with tons and tons of random colors. Tell me what you think so far. C & C plz. UPDATE! k, here is how it looks so far now. The new scenery may not look like it matches the sky but it will after i add more shadows. Im gonna have trees on the right side of the church and a grave yard on the other.

its a bit too small. And there isnt a backround. For the character 6/10

whats wrong with paint?

should be helpful for all beginners, hopefully they use it.

how can you have been around these forums for 4 months now and be proud of that?

thanks for the comments, and ill work on that part of the sky some more.