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It was alright. But, I hope you realize, that the name "War of the Worlds" was one of the best films in the 1950's. And, the remake that won severel awards in 2005.

This is pretty common in the library. Where to start? First off, Actual names help alot You see what I mean? Using names like these make the story seem dull and boring. Creativity is what the Varrok library is all about. Secondly, You should work on imagery more. Not too much detail on that one either. Thirdly, There's alot of confusion. That really doesn't make any sense. Try Anceint-Magicks. I only saw about four comma's in your whole entire story. Comma's reduce the sense of your story looking like a huge blob. What? That doesn't make any sense! :? Overall: 2/10

It's alright I guess.

Sorry, I really don't like it. You should Indent for one. Two, The whole "Story about a noob" thing doesn't really go good around here anymore. Three, I just couldn't get into it. 4/10.

Another well written masterpiece by Zonorhc! Serouisly, I think he should win some kind of award.

C'mon, Don't be shy. Feedback?

Um.... The story is pretty decent except for the title. As much as I like pantera I have to say..... No man. Other than that nice job. Keep it up!

Hey, I really need a new sig bad. This is the image I would like in the Signature: If you could like write my name in cool letters and change up the backround a bit, It would be perfect. But all i ask is that it remains the same size. - Many Thanks! :D

This winter burns blue I will never forget when I saw you Promising something I wouldn't do It wasn't a cry, Yet a shatter As the flame grew fatter Trying to run, Escaping the flame Yet everything remained the same The metal has bent My legs are caught, my days are spent No time left, For this was my death The cold air taking my last breath It was not to forget, But not to remember Oh! What this dreadful day has brought me in this december! What could this possibly be? The death or remains of me Oh love, I failed you. For thy shall not weep Your love was all I could keep One last thing I would mention, before I die I shall not forget, I shall not lie How I will always love you But I shall not forget How this winter burns blue

Tell me, are you blind or just pure stupid? Have you looked at the last five posts on this thread lately? I'm sorry, but you have to face the fact that S & N is dead. From what I see, Alot of people want you to stop (Including me) Making more would just get more people angry. My suggestion is you should end the story now! Yeah well, the people are telling you. Mods don't have any overpower on what they type than what we have. They help clean up and maintain the forums. For the last time kid, your fans are gone on this story. That's a good thing. I Guarentee you will gain more fans with a different story that gets of the S&N like genre.

Thank god! Serouisly, S & N is done, just let it end! Finallly, it's over!

Banned for :wall:

Banned because you like panada's

Banned Because that guy on your avatar is red.

Banned for not having a sig yet :D

Banned for using MSN.

Banned Because Micheal Jackson should be in jail.

Banned because It's funny.

Banned because that cat is never going to reach that silver ball :D

I sure as hell don't. If you haven't seen his video, It is posted below. (Warning, Contains really strong language. Do not click unless you are 18+ or accompinied by an adult. Not safe for work!) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kHmvkRoEowc He's a Gay male, who craves for attention by acting like a psychotic moron by protecting celeberties such as brittney spears. If you ask me, I think he's a fake. He also thinks he "Owns the Internet" What are your comments on the situation?

Banned for having a creepy sig.

Banned Because, You don't have an Avatar :D

Posted a story, I'm pretty sure.

My scariest story was when I watched my freind put a bullet in his head....

Alright, I PMED Sk. He said it was alright and was going to add onto it later. There was a bit of a confusion there.