Err.. is that suppose to be better? =/ And what I said was useful to a degree if you'd stop worrying about your comebacks and just listen. It's too simple, the black and white + half color doesn't work. The border isn't good, try making it a full border, no depth, no clear light source, and you used the same C4D twice. Lucky you got that much from me, I'm just bored.. <_<