CC: -Shade the background, don't draw random lines. -More detail on the guy in the background, can't really see him -More work on coloring, still see white spots on trees -The way you're shading rocks seem...odd, where's your light source? From above? -Stars look funky -Linework should be more clean -More shading on bones needed -Ok now the main guy: -Torsos are not triangular -Needs more shading on his upper body, face, shoulderplates -Legs too skinny for the guy -Head too big -Don't make left arm with a line tool -The rock next to him is messy But hey only your 2nd pixel, good for a 2nd :D