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I like the color choices, also I think you should put a door or something below "subtext here", the background is a bit bland right now. Mabey put a faint outline of a building by the window.(It is a window right?)

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Wow great. I love the kinda faded feel to it. If I had to give critique of anything it would probably be that i think the font seems a bit to formal for the style of sig in my opinion.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That's actually what I like about it :oops: I love how the signature itself has a very grungy feel to it, and then the text contrasts that by being plain. If it were anything 'wilder,' I think the signature would just look messy :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Overall nice job. I love the soft, relaxed colours. My only real criticism is that I think the border looks a little too thick. Other than that, nice job. I really like Sir_Erderik's idea of having the faint outline of a building in the background, more faded windows/doors, etc.

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I really like it but it annoys me that your breaking jagex rules by selling it for RS Money :(

 

 

 

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Thanks for the suggestions. :)

 

 

 

@Sir_Erderik: Nice idea! I could definitely add a few subtle lines to suggest a brick wall, I'll see what I can do about that.

 

 

 

@tripsis: Hmm imo the border adds to the contrast of the piece. Thanks though.

 

 

 

@mitsubishi64: Yep, drawing a door would probably fix this too.

 

 

 

@DarkKnightRider: Ah yes sorry about that.

 

 

 

@rik: That's more graffiti. I guess it looks like a flower because it's so faded. :?:

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@rik: That's more graffiti. I guess it looks like a flower because it's so faded. :?:

 

yes it did look pretty much like an flower on the first sight, but when u look a bit better u see all the lines. Maybe mak them a bit less faded so you see it better :?:

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My main problem is you selling it for RS gold. I agree with Tripsis about the border. I agree with Ederik about the outlines. Maybe change the font to something a little less formal, dunno just an idea.

 

 

 

Other than that it's great work.

 

 

 

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