November 13, 200718 yr Good luck on your novel, you're almost half-way there! ~Lit [Click here to help stop World-Hunger.] ?
November 13, 200718 yr Author Oh, you want the excerpts now do you? :P Sure, I'll post the excerpt I posted on NaNoWriMo. Its chapter 14, but its not too revealing. :P This excerpt is the whole of my shortest chapter, chapter 14 Chapter 14: Dusk Light. The tunnel was tighter and more cramped than the last one. Although the group knew all but two exits where tunneled in, she didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t know which two. This was their third out of twenty tunnels. There was several cracks in the roofs and a very dim light shone through. According to Stephen it was dusk outside. At least, it was when they had entered the cave. It was hard to see, and SarahÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s hand was running along the damp wall. Her hair was damp with the sweat. It turned out, she had been so immersed in the fight, she hadnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t noticed the sweat running down her neck. Now however, she was ever too aware of the dampness around her face. She had grown fond of her trials uniform, so didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t mind that her clothes had been closed off from her. They where looser than the tight jeans, which she was grateful for, it gave her flesh more air. They where walking quickly, following the tunnels twists and turns. Kris spoke out, surprising most all of the others. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅDid any of you think to pack any wood? Or have any wooden objects on you?ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ
November 13, 200718 yr Oh, you want the excerpts now do you? :P Sure, I'll post the excerpt I posted on NaNoWriMo. Its chapter 14, but its not too revealing. :P This excerpt is the whole of my shortest chapter, chapter 14 Chapter 14: Dusk Light. The tunnel was tighter and more cramped than the last one. Although the group knew all but two exits where tunneled in, she didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t know which two. This was their third out of twenty tunnels. There was several cracks in the roofs and a very dim light shone through. According to Stephen it was dusk outside. At least, it was when they had entered the cave. It was hard to see, and SarahÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s hand was running along the damp wall. Her hair was damp with the sweat. It turned out, she had been so immersed in the fight, she hadnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t noticed the sweat running down her neck. Now however, she was ever too aware of the dampness around her face. She had grown fond of her trials uniform, so didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t mind that her clothes had been closed off from her. They where looser than the tight jeans, which she was grateful for, it gave her flesh more air. They where walking quickly, following the tunnels twists and turns. Kris spoke out, surprising most all of the others. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅDid any of you think to pack any wood? Or have any wooden objects on you?ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ
November 13, 200718 yr Author Just a small note, Sophia and Kris are slightly based on the tifers yes. But very very loosely, in fact they end up more like each other... :XD:
November 13, 200718 yr Wow, that was great :thumbsup: [bleep] the law, they can eat my dick that's word to Pimp
November 13, 200718 yr Thats brilliant andu.You sure are one of the best young creative writewrs ive seen
November 13, 200718 yr Good luck with the story Andu, keep it up :thumbsup: Sn'C Events Team Member942nd to 99 hunter 2/8/07|26,042nd to reach 99 fletching 27/10/07|Quest Cape Achieved 22/1/08|50,000th to 99 Cooking 29/10/08Dagannoth King Drops: 7 Zerkers 2 Axes 3 Warriors | Armadyl: 1 hilt first ever trip and kill | Barrows: 2 Dharok Legs 1 Ahrim Skirt 1 Torag Helm 1 Guthan Spear
November 13, 200718 yr Heya Andu, Good luck on 99 fishing! If you want to chat I'll be on..well Th3 Crusader. :P Th3 Crusader
November 14, 200718 yr Author Thanks everyone. Good to hear sammy. And I'll add you when I get on crusader.
November 14, 200718 yr Bump its 8 pgs now and the villians have appeared for the first time, not giving to much away they act sorta like a comic double act :XD:
November 15, 200718 yr The unofficial Tip.It Skilling Chat! "Scape2skill"! In this chat we chat, have fun, and most of all, SKILL! The rules are all the rules of Runescape and TIF! :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: Andu is one of the mods too! So come on down! Mods: Shot (me) Sid Celt Soph Andu Th3 To enter the chat, type in "scape2skill"! Remember, anyone can come to chat!
November 15, 200718 yr bump gd luck on ur book Andu and remember write as it comes to u don't wear your brain out to quickly :thumbsup:
November 15, 200718 yr Author ^ I'm trying. :P Anyway, gotta really focus on writing tonight. Once again being kicked out to rehersal again tonight, and I'm already 2000 words behind, which means I have to do 4000 today. 2000 for today 4000 in total.
November 15, 200718 yr Author Technically, as long as I get to 25,000 in total tonight I'm on target for the month, but I was hoping to be at 27,000 tonight. Not going to happen. Bloody brother with his ruddy coursework.
November 15, 200718 yr Author Going to play rehersal again now. (Every tuesday and thursday, well most) But, I'm halfway done on NaNo!! 25,311 Its such a great feeling!
November 15, 200718 yr Author ohh nice and how many pgs is that? I'd guess 50+? 25,311 is spot on 50 pages. Any more words and it goes onto the next page. Going out now, bai! Oh and thanks lit.
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