lit0ua Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 Good luck on your novel, you're almost half-way there! ~Lit [Click here to help stop World-Hunger.] ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Wouter828 Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 where be the preview on your novel? : Click here for my blog. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted November 13, 2007 Author Share Posted November 13, 2007 Oh, you want the excerpts now do you? :P Sure, I'll post the excerpt I posted on NaNoWriMo. Its chapter 14, but its not too revealing. :P This excerpt is the whole of my shortest chapter, chapter 14 Chapter 14: Dusk Light. The tunnel was tighter and more cramped than the last one. Although the group knew all but two exits where tunneled in, she didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t know which two. This was their third out of twenty tunnels. There was several cracks in the roofs and a very dim light shone through. According to Stephen it was dusk outside. At least, it was when they had entered the cave. It was hard to see, and SarahÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s hand was running along the damp wall. Her hair was damp with the sweat. It turned out, she had been so immersed in the fight, she hadnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t noticed the sweat running down her neck. Now however, she was ever too aware of the dampness around her face. She had grown fond of her trials uniform, so didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t mind that her clothes had been closed off from her. They where looser than the tight jeans, which she was grateful for, it gave her flesh more air. They where walking quickly, following the tunnels twists and turns. Kris spoke out, surprising most all of the others. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅDid any of you think to pack any wood? Or have any wooden objects on you?ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zuit Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 Oh, you want the excerpts now do you? :P Sure, I'll post the excerpt I posted on NaNoWriMo. Its chapter 14, but its not too revealing. :P This excerpt is the whole of my shortest chapter, chapter 14 Chapter 14: Dusk Light. The tunnel was tighter and more cramped than the last one. Although the group knew all but two exits where tunneled in, she didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t know which two. This was their third out of twenty tunnels. There was several cracks in the roofs and a very dim light shone through. According to Stephen it was dusk outside. At least, it was when they had entered the cave. It was hard to see, and SarahÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s hand was running along the damp wall. Her hair was damp with the sweat. It turned out, she had been so immersed in the fight, she hadnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t noticed the sweat running down her neck. Now however, she was ever too aware of the dampness around her face. She had grown fond of her trials uniform, so didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t mind that her clothes had been closed off from her. They where looser than the tight jeans, which she was grateful for, it gave her flesh more air. They where walking quickly, following the tunnels twists and turns. Kris spoke out, surprising most all of the others. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅDid any of you think to pack any wood? Or have any wooden objects on you?ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted November 13, 2007 Author Share Posted November 13, 2007 Just a small note, Sophia and Kris are slightly based on the tifers yes. But very very loosely, in fact they end up more like each other... :XD: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skull Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 Wow, that was great :thumbsup: [bleep] the law, they can eat my dick that's word to Pimp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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sammy200 Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 hey thats great Andu I got 7 pgs in book now and a mostly done front cover : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krisc6 Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 Thats brilliant andu.You sure are one of the best young creative writewrs ive seen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chazimcgee Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 Good luck with the story Andu, keep it up :thumbsup: Sn'C Events Team Member942nd to 99 hunter 2/8/07|26,042nd to reach 99 fletching 27/10/07|Quest Cape Achieved 22/1/08|50,000th to 99 Cooking 29/10/08Dagannoth King Drops: 7 Zerkers 2 Axes 3 Warriors | Armadyl: 1 hilt first ever trip and kill | Barrows: 2 Dharok Legs 1 Ahrim Skirt 1 Torag Helm 1 Guthan Spear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Th3_Crusader Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 Heya Andu, Good luck on 99 fishing! If you want to chat I'll be on..well Th3 Crusader. :P Th3 Crusader Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted November 14, 2007 Author Share Posted November 14, 2007 Thanks everyone. Good to hear sammy. And I'll add you when I get on crusader. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sammy200 Posted November 14, 2007 Share Posted November 14, 2007 Bump its 8 pgs now and the villians have appeared for the first time, not giving to much away they act sorta like a comic double act :XD: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shotdown12 Posted November 15, 2007 Share Posted November 15, 2007 The unofficial Tip.It Skilling Chat! "Scape2skill"! In this chat we chat, have fun, and most of all, SKILL! The rules are all the rules of Runescape and TIF! :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: Andu is one of the mods too! So come on down! Mods: Shot (me) Sid Celt Soph Andu Th3 To enter the chat, type in "scape2skill"! Remember, anyone can come to chat! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted November 15, 2007 Author Share Posted November 15, 2007 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sammy200 Posted November 15, 2007 Share Posted November 15, 2007 oh shots been busy : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sammy200 Posted November 15, 2007 Share Posted November 15, 2007 bump gd luck on ur book Andu and remember write as it comes to u don't wear your brain out to quickly :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted November 15, 2007 Author Share Posted November 15, 2007 ^ I'm trying. :P Anyway, gotta really focus on writing tonight. Once again being kicked out to rehersal again tonight, and I'm already 2000 words behind, which means I have to do 4000 today. 2000 for today 4000 in total. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wouter828 Posted November 15, 2007 Share Posted November 15, 2007 that's alot of words to wright :shock: good luck Click here for my blog. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted November 15, 2007 Author Share Posted November 15, 2007 Technically, as long as I get to 25,000 in total tonight I'm on target for the month, but I was hoping to be at 27,000 tonight. Not going to happen. Bloody brother with his ruddy coursework. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted November 15, 2007 Author Share Posted November 15, 2007 Going to play rehersal again now. (Every tuesday and thursday, well most) But, I'm halfway done on NaNo!! 25,311 Its such a great feeling! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lit0ua Posted November 15, 2007 Share Posted November 15, 2007 Bump [Click here to help stop World-Hunger.] ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sammy200 Posted November 15, 2007 Share Posted November 15, 2007 ohh nice and how many pgs is that? I'd guess 50+? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted November 15, 2007 Author Share Posted November 15, 2007 ohh nice and how many pgs is that? I'd guess 50+? 25,311 is spot on 50 pages. Any more words and it goes onto the next page. Going out now, bai! Oh and thanks lit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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