[1,000,000 gp-contest] .oO(about poetry!)

[The_MOMH]

Roses are red,

 

 

 

With stems of green,

 

 

 

Your breath smells bad,

 

 

 

Use more listerine.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok, so I didnt make it up (stole it from a recent foxtrot comic), but its still funny :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

since I didnt make it up, you could use it free :P

[siney]

Your smile once spread joy in me

 

 

 

Now your smile reminds me

 

 

 

of all the memories

 

 

 

i cherish

 

 

 

of us

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:roll: ^ cause poems that have lines that get smaller as they go are "in" now :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Siney

[Zero-Overdrive]

Aight everyone, a few more dasy to post - if you have allready posted - feel free to post more, I'm finding the winner in a few days.

[dark_ice]

Roses are Red,

 

 

 

Violets are Blue,

 

 

 

I hope you die horribly

 

 

 

you heartless fool

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:lol: You made me cough up some stuff laughin at that one!! :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Heres one:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Every rose has its thorns

 

 

 

Too bad yours pierced my heart

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Another:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A single rose

 

 

 

Covered in my cold blood

 

 

 

Pierced my shattered heart

 

 

 

Just like you did

[Adolpha]

um...i dun think this is the best idea in the world, but hey, 1 million gp!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

here's my entry.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"I guess on this dark road, even angels die."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

my rsn: Adolpha

[Ferline]

I wish I were as invisible as you made me feel,

 

 

 

Because as you stand there waveing to me goodbye,

 

 

 

You leave holes like a shotgun kissing my heart...

[bummerboy]

I've got a few...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You brought light to my heart

 

 

 

Now it sits in the darkness

 

 

 

I just wish I could replace all the memories

 

 

 

Of what makes my blood run cold

 

 

 

And as your blood flows through me

 

 

 

I say goodbye to what we had

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

or...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

All those things you couldn't say

 

 

 

You should've said

 

 

 

All those I love you's lost

 

 

 

Weighed more like lead on your chest

 

 

 

What if I could take back all those misspent days?

 

 

 

Every second of anger, I would wash my sins away

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

or...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Crystal clear I see the rose is frail

 

 

 

The thorns hide easily in its beauty

 

 

 

As I go to grasp it in my hand

 

 

 

My heart is torn beating from my chest

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

or....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It feels like the light will never reach me here

 

 

 

I am choking back my longing for shed tears

 

 

 

So strangulated by my lonesome fears plead

 

 

 

Don't worry too much, it only hurts when I breathe

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

or...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My soul it screams for you

 

 

 

can you not here it

 

 

 

my arms reach out for you

 

 

 

why cant you take them

 

 

 

my heart burns only for you

 

 

 

can you extinguish it

 

 

 

i love only to be loved by you

 

 

 

why cant you love me too

[Lady_Xio]

Once upon a time I dreamed I saw

 

 

 

a world that didn't exist

 

 

 

A world like ours

 

 

 

Except everyone was happy

 

 

 

And everyone accepted one another.

 

 

 

Once upon a time I dreamed I saw

 

 

 

a world that didn't exist

 

 

 

And I never woke up.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

or

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Not by any foe's hand but yours do I lie here

 

 

 

surrounded by gloom,

 

 

 

ignoble.

 

 

 

Only you could pierce my heart

 

 

 

Devour my soul

 

 

 

Only you,

 

 

 

Dearest enemy.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

((The second one's part of a long poem of mine, but I thought I could skip it straight to the point :wink: ))

[xpure4eva]

k.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sometimes when I'm alone

 

 

 

I Cry,

 

 

 

Cause I am on my own.

 

 

 

The tears I cry are bitter and warm.

 

 

 

They flow with life but take no form

 

 

 

I Cry because my heart is torn.

 

 

 

I find it difficult to carry on.

 

 

 

If I had an ear to confiding,

 

 

 

I would cry among my treasured friend,

 

 

 

but who do you know that stops that long,

 

 

 

to help another carry on.

 

 

 

The world moves fast and it would rather pass by.

 

 

 

Then to stop and see what makes one cry,

 

 

 

so painful and sad.

 

 

 

And sometimes...I Cry

 

 

 

and no one cares about why.

[logic-is-overrated]

I gave you my weiner, whenever you were hungry.

 

 

 

But you went and burnt it, and now you're not so lucky.

[Futurama]

Some things used to make me smile

 

 

 

and one of those was you for just a little while

 

 

 

but then i realised, I HATE YOU WITH A BURNING PASSION YOU WILL NEVER UNDERSTAND, I GRIT MY JAW AND SLASH MYSELF AT THE SLIGHTEST THOUGHT OF YOUR EXISTANCE.

[chimpira]

Roses are red

 

 

 

LEmons are sour

 

 

 

open your legs and

 

 

 

give me an hour

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:P she'd proably kill you if u wrote that

[Mfh_cheese]

You said that you wanted one line, but it's difficult to convey such a profound message in such meager words. I'll give you a two-liner and you can cut it down to size if it's too long.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You were my muse, bethought an angel, for angelic was your seeming;

 

 

 

And here I waste, and I wither, steeped in sorrow, beyond redeeming.

[booduz69]

Heres mine:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There is nothing like a great dream to create the future,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

True love is hard to find, but i found it,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The spaces between your fingers were meant to be filled with mine,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If nothing last forever, will you be my nothing?,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Those who have never loved, have never lived,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

...I went for the dark bit in mine... :wink:

[Martinsek55]

the last one was bad..take a look at this one

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I hate the way

 

 

 

when i walk down the street

 

 

 

I'm reminded of you

 

 

 

and i fall into my own retreat

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

my own place

 

 

 

filled with memories locked up tight

 

 

 

the good times we shared

 

 

 

an era before the fight

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but as i stand

 

 

 

all alone

 

 

 

thinking of days past

 

 

 

a tear i feel on my cheek

 

 

 

as i wish the good times could have last

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i feel so lost and alone

 

 

 

a part of me wants you here

 

 

 

yet a part wants to forget

 

 

 

it dosn't want you anywhere near

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

so i start to walk

 

 

 

feeling torn in two

 

 

 

so hopeless i am

 

 

 

to think this is all over you

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i hate the way you put me through this

 

 

 

i hate the way i care

 

 

 

i hate the way i want your kiss

 

 

 

i hate everything its way to much to bare

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but i really hate the way

 

 

 

i actually miss you

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

when are we gonna find out who wins?

 

 

 

by the way my rsn is martinsek5

[Merry]

I just wanted to say I think that Xpure4eva and Martinsek55's

 

 

 

Poems are really nice. They Accually rhyme which makes it flow better in my opinion. With so many good poets here, I doubt I'll recieve the award money... :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh well writing the poetry was fun at anyrate... :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thank you for the competition! :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:twisted: whether or not I win, My peom was still cool! :twisted:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Edit]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I thought I'd share this poem/song, if you like it your welcome to take parts from it, I also took out certain parts that seemed not to apply.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

In the twilight of each day

 

 

 

when my heart seems turned away

 

 

 

from these daily tasks I do

 

 

 

as I try not to cry over you

 

 

 

____________________

 

 

 

(chorus)

 

 

 

Your absence is felt

 

 

 

as I daily remember

 

 

 

of the joys that we shared

 

 

 

for my love will last forever

 

 

 

____________________

 

 

 

In the darkness of the night

 

 

 

while the moon glistens bright

 

 

 

My thoughts would turn towards you

 

 

 

and the things we use to do

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(Chorus)

 

 

 

I miss You, I do

 

 

 

as I continue through

 

 

 

all my days

 

 

 

reminders of you in different ways

 

 

 

hoping one day to see you once again

 

 

 

to show you my love, dear friend...

[nolothepoet]

At first I thought this was going to be a loving present to your g/f..At least besides the poem the black rose and the box everything sounded like something my girl would have liked. I want to see this amazing box.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You made me happy

 

 

 

Now im kinda sappy

 

 

 

I got this box

 

 

 

I want you to rot

[bucky]

Roses are red

 

 

 

LEmons are sour

 

 

 

open your legs and

 

 

 

give me an hour

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:P she'd proably kill you if u wrote that

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lol :lol: don't think i can compete with that...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But for 1mill its worth a try:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I feel so dark inside when I think of our past together.

 

 

 

For although those times were happy,

 

 

 

We would not be as one forever.

 

 

 

Would it have been better if I never loved you at all?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT: you can cut out that last line if u need

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

OR (this one sux a bit)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I used to love you

 

 

 

I still do, but i hate you too

 

 

 

You broke my heart, and now I'm in the poo.

[xpure4eva]

plz...did any1 win? :? :lol:

[Mfh_cheese]

Not that I know of :roll:

[falconice]

i know i'm bumping up a old topic and stuff... but...

 

 

 

i don't think the guys choosing a winner...

 

 

 

sry for bumping...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but i'm only doing it cuz the guy just sorta dissappeared and i got curious of who won after a while...