Soa Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 C/C? Don't be harsh, it is my first. Kinda cool imo. \ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
navyplaya Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 Pretty freaking good for a first. I'd say work on shading. I really like the style... Edit. If the sun was that low, the overall look would be darker though. -All sigs by me.[My Gallery] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soa Posted September 12, 2007 Author Share Posted September 12, 2007 Added shade from boat onto water, and a little more on the boat itself. And changed the sky. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
navyplaya Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 Very nice. Try blending in the colors of the sky now, so you cant just see lines. -All sigs by me.[My Gallery] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 The water, is VERY nice, though the sig its self, in my opnion is to, to... plain maybe Its VERY good for a frist, theres no doubt about it but it for some reason, doesnt look right, its good, but something doesnt look right i think its the sky i dont know, But the way it is, is Very nice,Though, with the placing of the sun, down the middle of the water, would be more of an orange glow, from the reflection of the sun The Clouds: For the colour of the sky, and the son, the clouds do not match, they need to be a slight orange color too, not white, they stand out TOO much, Other than that, it looks good, maybe add in a few clouds in the distance.. work on the shading in everything, and add in the colours on the ocean and the clouds, and i think you will be good :) Very nice job, Especially for a first 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 looks very retroish :D All I suggest is to search google for any reference pictures that may help you with this, the main thing I think could be improved is possibly the perspective, as the boat is on the horizon I'd expect it to be much smaller unless it's a huge boat. but, you're on the right lines. I personally like it as it is. here's a ref pic anyway. http://www.atpm.com/8.11/bimini/images/sunrise.jpg Why are some people posting comments like, 'work on your shading' ? that doesn't help in the slightest, what about the shading do you think could be improved? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wisp Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 Blend the lines sort of like what i did, and maybe move the sailboat down so it's in the water rather then on the horizon Hegemony-Spain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soa Posted September 13, 2007 Author Share Posted September 13, 2007 Dithered sky, changed cloud color, made boat smaller, added more color to water to make it more look like a 'reflection'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 Dithered sky, changed cloud color, made boat smaller, added more color to water to make it more look like a 'reflection'. Much better =D> =D> Though, i cant say the boat looks good lol, it looks out of place, a little to small :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
navyplaya Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 The sky looks much better, but I liked the boat how it was earlier :-k -All sigs by me.[My Gallery] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soa Posted September 13, 2007 Author Share Posted September 13, 2007 The sky looks much better, but I liked the boat how it was earlier :-k Like this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RpgGamer Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 Added shade from boat onto water, and a little more on the boat itself. And changed the sky. wow, thats really good! The only problem i have with it is that the background needs to be blended a bit more. other than that its pretty much perfect :thumbsup: Quote Quote Anyone who likes tacos is incapable of logic. Anyone who likes logic is incapable of tacos. PSA: SaqPrets is an Estonian Dude Steam: NippleBeardTM Origin: Brand_New_iPwn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
navyplaya Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 The sky looks much better, but I liked the boat how it was earlier :-k Like this? But with the boat down further off the horizon line. Like this one: -All sigs by me.[My Gallery] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Garion11 Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 Like the last updated version Doesn't take chances. Look's cute, but dangerous. So don't mess with me.TY to Cowboy14 for the awesome Avvy, and Unoalexi for the sig! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 boarder on top? then id say your done!! 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
navyplaya Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 Very nice! =D> -All sigs by me.[My Gallery] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soa Posted September 13, 2007 Author Share Posted September 13, 2007 :o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 maybe this'll help with your boat, and it's shadow. Also I think you're sun would be massively too large. If you want this true to rl I'd focus on getting your sizes right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robgrout Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 great pic i love the style of the water i found it kinda funny how many people told you what to do in this thread when the first pic was so good - the latter vertions with the large boat sun reflection on the water and blended sky is incredible ..... make me a siggy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
np_tyler Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 Nice job! The only thing that I think could be changed is the text, but if you like it, it's fine. :) - Np Tyler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soa Posted September 13, 2007 Author Share Posted September 13, 2007 I just made something really quick so my name wouldn't be boring looking. Will update it once I get ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonshadow Posted September 15, 2007 Share Posted September 15, 2007 I just made something really quick so my name wouldn't be boring looking. Will update it once I get ideas. :o That is an excellent begining pixel! Puts my beginning avatar to shame. I love the scene, the colors, the clouds, but, listen to some of the other peoples criticism. I don't have anything critical to say. Personally, your name logo is a bit big, and I would change it to something smaller and unobtrusive. Like my little MS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soa Posted September 15, 2007 Author Share Posted September 15, 2007 That's your first pixel avvy? I luvs it. \ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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