pryomancer Posted September 30, 2007 Share Posted September 30, 2007 [hide=V1][/hide] [hide=V1.1-sharpened big planet][/hide] [hide=V2- totally reworked][/hide] [hide=V2.1- Replaced moon, blurred big planet, changed the glow colour and slightly desaturated the smaller][/hide] [hide=V2.2- changed shockwave around contact][/hide] [hide=V2.3- changed shockwave again, changed crack of light in blue planet][/hide] [hide=V2.4 Final- changed cracks in planet][/hide] FINAL VERSION 06/10/2007 Well check it, I felt like making a space scene, as I haven't made one in a while. Rock and ice planet textures from DeviantArt. 'Stardust' brush from DeviantArt. It's taken me a cumulative total of around 5 hours now, each edit makes me more happy with it. This is my final version now, I'm totally happy with it. If you feel there is something more to be done, then please tell me. Comments and shrines to my greatness are always welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted September 30, 2007 Share Posted September 30, 2007 Nice job on the font!! Though, where the planets connect, is a little to bright for me, other than that, i like it 9/10 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted September 30, 2007 Author Share Posted September 30, 2007 Yay, a positive comment on font. I designed it to be bright, I wanted to convey how immense and blinding the collision of the planets is. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted September 30, 2007 Share Posted September 30, 2007 Yay, a positive comment on font. I designed it to be bright, I wanted to convey how immense and blinding the collision of the planets is. Thanks. oh it still looks good, but IMO its a little bright, but if you like it, thats all that counts :P The font, REALLY goes well with it 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted September 30, 2007 Share Posted September 30, 2007 Text is about perfect. I dont see anything bad, but the black fades onto the larger planet slightly too quick, maybe smudge it out. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted September 30, 2007 Author Share Posted September 30, 2007 Yea I was thinking about the left planet. It does look a little off from the shadow. I'll try mess with it and see what I get. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted October 1, 2007 Author Share Posted October 1, 2007 More comments? I need some more opinions. Would be good if someone can give advance critique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soa Posted October 1, 2007 Share Posted October 1, 2007 You can sharpen the planets a little more. Make it look more realistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted October 1, 2007 Author Share Posted October 1, 2007 I did that, I think it looks better. Thanks. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted October 1, 2007 Share Posted October 1, 2007 The planets are pretty low quality, not that great. They both look almost mechanical more than just a planet. Not a big fan of the colors in the background, I don't think they really work with the planets. Sorry if I sound harsh, but I know what photoshop can produce for planets and space scenes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
navyplaya Posted October 1, 2007 Share Posted October 1, 2007 Looks pretty good. Every thing I would c/c on has pretty much been mentioned. But I want to emphasize that the planets don't really look like planets very much, as mentioned above. Font does fit very well. -All sigs by me.[My Gallery] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heartz_Mage Posted October 2, 2007 Share Posted October 2, 2007 Please remember my editpic is really ruff. 1. Green- I like the length of light. Too short and you won't be able to light the bigger planet like you've done. Any smaller and you just have a huge black planet. But with the length given to the left has to be given to the right. 2. Yellow (barely seeable in my pic, sry)- But as you can see where you have made it really bright on the left also needs the same area on the right (on the collision axis). 3. Cyan/Blue arrows- These crevices/spots are too prominent. The light should be overshadowing them, not them breaking through the bright light. 4. Red- Blue planet: Think these were made with the crevices in the editing process but don't really show any design use. Just look like spots. Red planet: these should be shaded/lighted like the mountain area shown in the red arrow. 4. Violet- Reflection, really shouldn't be used here. 5. Blue planet's satellite/moon- is in the foreground. But for some reason the light is able to reach its side but the blue planet is not fully engulfed with light. How is that possible? If the light reaches as it should to match the left then the blue planet should be 98% lit and the moon be 90% lit (360ÃÆââ¬Å¡Ãâð 3-D). I might bring back the length of light a bit so that you wont have to light the foreground of the moon but instead show an eclipse type effect and so that you wont have to fully light the blue planet. 6. For some reason the light moves along 3 different axis's. The brown planet has light from a slightly tilted off horizontal and in the opposite direction of the collision axis, the blue planet along the collision axis, and the moon along some different axis of which i have no idea where from. Might wanna get them all straight. 7. I like the colors of everything, including the planets. The stars and gas looks fine. The text looks great. 8/10 Heartz Pragmatic, efficient, perfectionist. So I'm sorry ahead of time for any views, opinions, and decisions from myself :ÃÆÃâÃâ¦Ã¾ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mico Posted October 2, 2007 Share Posted October 2, 2007 Here is my C/C: 1. The shading of the planets is not right. As I know, planes are quite round, yet the shading looks more like an elipse on the left. The right has a perfest shading. 2. Get rid of the moon, or put it more to the left, so it looks more realistic and nicer. 3. Try adding clouds. Right now, theese planets have an atmosphere, yet no clouds. 4. Maybe a spaceship on the far right side of the planets 5. Get rid of those two circles on the lower side of the blue planet, don' t seem to fit there. But, even now it' s a 10/10. RSN:Mico1311 Combat: 82 Highest skill: Fishing 75 Playing time: From around August 2003 The guy in my avatar is Veso, a comedian mastermind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainy_Day Posted October 2, 2007 Share Posted October 2, 2007 Not bad, but not great IMO. It seems a little plain, but it all flows fairly well. The image quality isn't all that great either. 7/10 from me. (P.S, the text was great in this signature). ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)RIP Michaelangelopolous Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted October 2, 2007 Author Share Posted October 2, 2007 Thanks for all your comments, I spent another 3 hours or so fiddling with it and got V2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted October 3, 2007 Share Posted October 3, 2007 i dont like the new V at all... im sorry 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted October 3, 2007 Author Share Posted October 3, 2007 Can you explain why you don't like it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted October 3, 2007 Share Posted October 3, 2007 Can you explain why you don't like it? yeah for sure :P The red planet is nice what i dont like: - The line in between the planets the circle - the right planet, wat to blury - the little planet lookin thing, is to.. chrome looking? lol 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mico Posted October 3, 2007 Share Posted October 3, 2007 My word, this is amazing! I must say, this is the best sig I have ever seen. But I suggest this: -add some red lava flows on the dark side of the small planet, since the colided -oh and there is a bright white elipse on the right side top of the blue planet, probably missed it with the moon taking out. And watch this: that looks like a litlle skull :XD: KEEP IT! RSN:Mico1311 Combat: 82 Highest skill: Fishing 75 Playing time: From around August 2003 The guy in my avatar is Veso, a comedian mastermind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted October 3, 2007 Author Share Posted October 3, 2007 My word, this is amazing! I must say, this is the best sig I have ever seen. But I suggest this: -add some red lava flows on the dark side of the small planet, since the colided -oh and there is a bright white elipse on the right side top of the blue planet, probably missed it with the moon taking out. And watch this: that looks like a litlle skull :XD: KEEP IT! Wow thanks! Never been told my art was the best anyone has ever seen before. Thanks for suggestions as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted October 4, 2007 Share Posted October 4, 2007 They planets are way too saturated, they don't just look real. I don't want to really link my own work but maybe it'd help: my own planet I made a while back. I used Alyn's Advanced Planet creation guide which is amazing and tells you a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted October 4, 2007 Author Share Posted October 4, 2007 New Version up. I'm going to experiment with some planet textures, so maybe I'll add it to this signature or make a new one. Thanks Nadril. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mico Posted October 4, 2007 Share Posted October 4, 2007 Nadril, I could have SWORN that was a real planet :shock: Awwm, the picture doesnt work :cry: RSN:Mico1311 Combat: 82 Highest skill: Fishing 75 Playing time: From around August 2003 The guy in my avatar is Veso, a comedian mastermind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted October 4, 2007 Author Share Posted October 4, 2007 Should be working now. @Nadril: I can't seem to locate the tutorial- the full view isn't it and I downloaded it and there were just some firefox documents. I'd really like to see it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted October 4, 2007 Share Posted October 4, 2007 I don't like the thing that looks like the lasso tools in use. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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