Whadya think?

arrows just a bit small dont you think?

Looks pretty good axe! I just think it lacks a little colour.

 

 

 

7/10

arrows just a bit small dont you think?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

How big are they supposed to be :shock:

long enough to reach from the string just a lil ova the handle when the bows pulled back

Maybe im just pulling it back to far =P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for the comments.

I shoot archery RL and the arrows rest on the grip of the handle. It reaches maybe an inch past your hand.

Maybe im just pulling it back to far =P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lol take it from me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If you pull it back like that, its gonna hit the hand holding the bow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I did it once, and the stick pierced my hand between the thumb and the rest. :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8/10 :D

lol ok.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for comments.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but maybe i just fletched em wrong! or maybe the bow is retrded! or maybe...!

you so called archery buffs sure aren't vey good with termonology, and the arrows does not have to rest an inch or whatever past your hand...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

not too many shades or colors

 

 

 

the guy's ar, gets choppy towards the choulder

 

 

 

your kinda chubby in it lol

which arm? And the shades... just look closer, there is about three for every color.

the little block thingys on the castle behind him make it look like a sand castle his arms are fat.. see the little folt with his elbow.. and wtf is with his left arm? and the lines on the armor dont look real good and you can barely see ranging to victory.

His arm is a big muscle what do you think its supposed to be lol, its also closer to the screen so it must be bigger and if his body is that long his arm needs to reach bellow his waist, left arm is stretched behind him (gonna make the elbow further back if i feel like it lol.) lines on armour, thats how i do ranged armour, if you know a better way by all means tell me.

that doesn't look muscular, he looks like he eats too much of the cocoa cake

Art is said to reflect some of yourself :P

bow is a little bit oddly drawn but good enough but the error is definitley to small is longer than the width from the sting to the bow. And the skin tone of the person seems a little bit...uh......reddish overall pretty good

Things I like:

 

 

 

 

 

 

His pose. Nicely done.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Things I don't like:

 

 

 

 

 

 

The background colors need more contrast. They're very bright and all appear to be the same color. Unforunately yellow does this to the eyes, but you could have added a little more of a "mud" type color.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The bow's string is uneven.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The arrow is SMAAALLLLLLL.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The dragonhide pattern is not right. It's like... checkered. It's not a problem that you do this, but atleast make it look 3d. The colors are 3d and all, but not the dragon pattern.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

His arm is too fat. It would be rather uncomfortable for the vambraces to squeeze on your arms like that, how it does.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ranging to victory usually means a high range level. Red dragonhide = not a high range level.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The width of the bow string is really thick, and the bow doesn't quite look so good. It's too fat and the ending shouldn't be fat also like that.

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- thanks, i posed it then drew how i saw it :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- I was going for the sara base, but i guess there is a contrast there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- well i made it bent where he was pulling it if thats what you mean...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Heh :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- yeah i got lazy, ill try harder next time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- lol yeah it would hurt.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- well i mean that i was climbing levels, but i see how you thought it meant i had a high level.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- thanks ill remember that next time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

To Aldeon...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

isnt skin supposed to be redish? it is just a light combination of red and orange.

Try giving the dragonhide some more texture, I know it might be your style, but dragonhide has little shapes of a brighter shade. Other than that bit, and the arrow length, looks quite good.