Hey, guys i know its not shaded i will do that later but for know whut u guys think rate 1-10 and say why it sucks thx.. :D

personaly i like the dude in the corner!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But the bug looks wierd!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Me sa lika!

Why is the bug much bigger than the dude? Unless its the kq and if it is it looks nothing like it

KQ Doesn't look anything like the KQ, and everything's too...too....uh Square-lookin'.

yeah its the KQ but the thing is i dont have members and i quit RS so i have no idea wuts it spos to look like maby u chould fill me in...

Try Monster Database.

but like wut colors and stuff thats wut i got working off monter data base..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THX :D

1st Form: (Bug) Oragne Stripe down middle and around eyes. Eyes are not Red. The Head [bleep]ey things are kinnda more razor lookin.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2nd Form (Fly) A Fly with 2 white wings, white stinger, and red shades on the body.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*Edit*

better??

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lines= Good, Body is black not green.

sucky perspective ruins it

as i said beore just dont say it sucks say how to help it plz...

He did tell you, he said the perspective sucks, that tells you a lot right there.

the kq is a very dark green, not black

i give it 5/10 its ok... but idk... lol its a bit too simple and dark

trying to put more action in wut u guys thing and yes i know its plain if u guys have any ideas plz tell me :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you need to do shading. it doesnt look so good with out it....

i can see u read the post..... it said that i wanted to get everthing layed out first before i shade..... :shock:

Ok, the Bug is good enough, Now make everything come to life, not so squarelookin. Looks Weird With All The Squares.

 

 

 

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/_\ The Orange Part Aroun the eyes I was talkin about is around the eyes in that shape.

The Top line goes one space over.

perspective aint your strongest point..

 

 

 

so a high top overview perspective wasnt a good choice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

fix the perspective.

hey Skull i just relised you were the same guy that i used to know rember back in the day when i worked with axe wow... you got alot better lol i rember your old sigs.... Lol now i feel like the new guy how can i change my perspective without redoing the entire sig lol...

Perspective?

well the main problem with the perspective is the kalphite queen.

 

 

 

youll have to redraw it in the same perspective as the castle.

its too boxy :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but i like the mage!