xxbamxx Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 My attempt of pixelling. Haven't in over a year and a hlaf or more. And i've wanted this idea done forever! So i tried. I need all the pointers i can. Help me artists :) Rip. Archer3 and runescapeAchieved 99 Hitpoints At 8:36PM June-05-09Achieved 99 Strength At 12:17AM March-08-09Achieved 99 Attack At 3:57PM April-24-?09Achieved 99 Firemaking At 5:41PM September-17-08 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hugger_88 Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 Well, if you know me I have no art talent whatsoever, but it looks good. Very clean linework, and the anatomy gets an A+ (no pun intended) Cant wait to see the finished product!! - 60,023rd to 99 Firemaking on April 29th, 2012 -- 15,152nd to 99 agility on August 21st, 2011 -- 30,569th to 99 Prayer on June 26th, 2011 -- 22,646th to 99 Hunter on Jan 9th, 2011 -1993 Miata; sold - 2001 E46 330i; "totaled" - 2001 E46 325iT; Bags and wheels ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rebdragon Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 Finish at least five percent of it before posting :| ? [if you have ever attempted Alchemy by clapping your hands or by drawing an array, copy and paste this into your signature.] Fullmetal Alchemist, you will be missed. A great ending to a great series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jiraiya19 Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 Well, I don't mean to sound mean, but really, try some anatomy some time. The anatomy is, well..not good. Sketch out the human form some time, just as stick figures w/ correct proportions. http://www.elfwood.com/farp/figure/will ... ction.html That is an amazing sight for learning the important basics. It also ranges to intermediate in the end :] Good luck. jiraiya_lova Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aussie_King Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 Lookin good. Keep working on it and I'll boss you around and tell you what to do later :P Add me ingame: Lnterest. I am back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
semjuel Posted December 28, 2007 Share Posted December 28, 2007 not too much to comment on yet but head is way too large.. The size of the head should be about 1/5 part of the whole body (without the head) the upper body should be 2 heads tall, legs 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unorclan Posted December 28, 2007 Share Posted December 28, 2007 I could critisize - but i couldn't even attempt this so yeah, it looks good to me. After looking at it a while you can see errors more clearly Thanks to the amazing talent of Jopie211 for the sig!Finest Fist of Guthix Strategy Guide Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rushrock Posted December 28, 2007 Share Posted December 28, 2007 Finish at least five percent of it before posting :| ? He probably wants criticism on the outline, and probably some ideas on what to do next. While there isn't much to crit on, I suggest nighttime. With plenty of purples and reds. And whites and swirls for the stars. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runemetsa Posted December 28, 2007 Share Posted December 28, 2007 Looks cool so far, but there isn't enough work yet for some big comments. I shall comment more when you get some more progress : [Star Wreck][PM me][My gallery][DeviantArt][Cool T-shirts!][iron Sky - Trailer is now out!] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodredsword Posted December 28, 2007 Share Posted December 28, 2007 and the anatomy gets an A+ (no pun intended) The anatomy isn't that good, it may be true to rs anatomy, but not to actual anatomy :? Looks good so far, but I agree with reb, do more before posting :P Listen to the mighty words of Bloodredsword. Tip it MGC Xbox live leader board! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingcomet32 Posted December 28, 2007 Share Posted December 28, 2007 if i were you i would bring the helmet out one pixel more on the left side so that it looks like its sitting on his head and not sewn to his scalp until you get sumore of it done though cant say much, its lookin good though thanks to Etexbleu for the sig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unoalexi Posted December 28, 2007 Share Posted December 28, 2007 and the anatomy gets an A+ (no pun intended) Umm.. no.. Like, where did his jaw and the top of his skull disappear too? I can't rate it yet.. Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
princessa9 Posted December 30, 2007 Share Posted December 30, 2007 Anatomy =) His head is too big and his legs too skinny. Work on the body proportions =D Good luuuck [sig inserted here....in few days] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbamxx Posted December 31, 2007 Author Share Posted December 31, 2007 wow princessa it's nice seeing you. And can anyone outline where i need to fix it, and ill re do it. Cause i can't see the problem or how it should look, ive been study human proportions. and i can't see the problem :? Rip. Archer3 and runescapeAchieved 99 Hitpoints At 8:36PM June-05-09Achieved 99 Strength At 12:17AM March-08-09Achieved 99 Attack At 3:57PM April-24-?09Achieved 99 Firemaking At 5:41PM September-17-08 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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