June 16, 200818 yr Internet went down for a bit during a recent storm, so I got inspired while playing my xbox... [hide=wip2] Fixed couch alittle, added person.[/hide] [hide=wip3] Just some colors... Idk. :|[/hide] [hide=wip4] More colors.[/hide] [hide=wip5][/hide] wip6 Close to the done stamp. Meh... Dunno when i'll finish.. but it's a start. :) Yay :thumbup: or Nay :thumbdown:
June 16, 200818 yr its a nice concept but id say pay closer attention to perspective. the couch is too thin for a couch and the tv only half lines up with the wall. but overall its unique, never done, and will make a great pic once done : Pixel Signature Made By Me.Pixel Art Tutorial * Pixel Gallery * My Free Pixel Sigs Shop
June 16, 200818 yr Looks like this has great potential phooey Good luck with it, linework is great Sn'C Events Team Member942nd to 99 hunter 2/8/07|26,042nd to reach 99 fletching 27/10/07|Quest Cape Achieved 22/1/08|50,000th to 99 Cooking 29/10/08Dagannoth King Drops: 7 Zerkers 2 Axes 3 Warriors | Armadyl: 1 hilt first ever trip and kill | Barrows: 2 Dharok Legs 1 Ahrim Skirt 1 Torag Helm 1 Guthan Spear
June 17, 200818 yr Rather neat linework, but a bit isometrical, if you get my drift. I won't rate until it's finished Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day
June 17, 200818 yr Author Rather neat linework, but a bit isometrical, if you get my drift. I get your drift, but usually my pixels are just straight up views of the character without any... life? Idk... So I thought I'd try something different. :
June 17, 200818 yr Overall it is great. The details though are what will bring this out. The TV looks a bit flat and not TV like, and the couch still needs some "Buffering" up. As said before the linework is great and this is going to turn out really good. Can't wait till its finished!
June 17, 200818 yr It's not a bad start, but like pointed out before the perspective is really quite off in some places. Especially the sofa and TV look a bit strange. I like the concept though, so I'd like to see the finished version. pixel avvy by me deviantART
June 20, 200818 yr I think its a little empty. I would suggest adding possibly a rug and some decoration to the walls. Maybe even a game case on the ground?
June 20, 200818 yr 'Tis coming along good, and i like the whole idea. The colours are good and the hing overall is great. Maybe add some more detail into some things?
June 20, 200818 yr The perspective is still a bit off. The line the couch sits on has a greater slope, than the line the window sits on. Change one or the other. Something like this. EDIT: Sorry for the bad cropping. Not sure if you can understand that. That was just one of the perspective problems. With some work and added detail, it will be great. |Signature by Jason321|
June 21, 200818 yr Author Since I havn't rounded off the corners yet. : EDIT: Everyone needs a sound system right? Also changed the lines on the couch. ;)
June 21, 200818 yr Well it looks like you made some changes while I was working on a guide for you, so mine is a bit out of date by enjoy it anyways. And sorry about the size lol. [hide=][/hide] you should never attempt to insert a floppy disk in a 56X CD-ROM drive, as floppy disk shrapnel hurts
June 21, 200818 yr This keeps on getting better and better...I like. The shading is good, and the new WIP is looking stellar! Keep it up, and i can't wait to see the finished version
June 21, 200818 yr Author Made some changes thanks to mastersigmaker... And I think it's getting close to done.. :?:
June 21, 200818 yr It's a lot better now, I think I found some perspective problems (Might just be me who is a idiot at art "again"). Same goes for the other speaker.
June 22, 200818 yr Well the screen and speakers point downwards instead of being straight that's what I'm trying to point out, well not completely straight but so it follows the other lines.
June 22, 200818 yr Author Ah, I see what you're getting at... But it's kinda hard to get that same slope when the line is only about 3 pixels long. #-o
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