EDIT: FINISHED and it's looking mighty schmexy:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The toffee is my tribute to Alex (SirAlex85), The Toffee eating canadian artist, and his crazeh art. Rate it, criticize it. I need a few touch ups I think, but I am sooo glad its done for now :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

UPDATE:I added a small building, a border, moved a building, and fixed the toffee!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Rate it please and give a constructive tid bit to help me make it perfect.

Kind of looks like he tripped and his hat fell off lol. :?

yeh, lol it does. maybe add a shadow under him later to show that he's in mid air (do the same to the phat). I'm loving the beach, the incoming wave looks pretty sweet. yeh, I'd like to see what it's look like once it's done :wink:

I'd say change the angle a bit, right now it looks like he fell on the ground. Perspective-wise, I'd say try bringing down the angle a few degrees so that we can see he's not on the ground, but falling. Other than that, the beach looks nice :wink: .

hehe, well its obviously not finished is it. you can see that once the ground below the cliff is finished it will look like a big drop, that green thing is the edge of the cliff, and the white bit is the unfinished ground. I like it, highlights the sad but true fact that noobs will do anything for cash.

I ahve a feeling this is gonna be a new standard for my sigs :D I'm really excited, but I'm leaving for camp, then california for 3 SOLID weeks. I'm depressed about that, but have reason to come back for this :) I wat this to be my best sig. and The beach took FOREVER btw ;)

hes bigger then the boat?

Perspective, young one.

Rawr, dude. perspective. He's going to be FALLING towards the boat. More like falling towards the city, but whateva. I'm working now before I leave tomorrrrrow

I'd say change the angle a bit, right now it looks like he fell on the ground. Perspective-wise, I'd say try bringing down the angle a few degrees so that we can see he's not on the ground, but falling. Other than that, the beach looks nice :wink: .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yeh I agree with the 'changing the angle' part but its a cool concept :D

Bump. Just letting you all know that Max is away on a camping trip. Or something.

lol not bad u should put the phat smaller so it looks like its a reallly big fall lol

The crashing waves are superb.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Perspective and anatomy are off. The cliff looks a bit simple... not really like a cliff, but more of a square of grass.

beh, bump. Away in cali. BYE you suck...

Rate out of 10, and I'd like C/C please. It's going good so far I guess.

 

 

 

Ya, I'm liking the waves myself, a nice touch :) other than that, I have to agree that he doesnt look like hes stretching for the hat and the boat is way to small :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Aaanyway, I'll rate 7/10 for now, prolly higher once its done. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

J272

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Btw, to make the cliff more realistic, you prolly need a more definate light source (sun of course :P) and where its coming from :) other than that, its looking quite nice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

edited it a little :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

edited it a little :P

 

 

 

:D spammer

 

 

 

i like it maybe show the movement lines like this ====)===)=== if you know what i mean

Quick question...Is he supposed to be jumping off the cliff?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If so, disreguard the larger boat crits and work on making the p hat a lot smaller :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

J272

To improve the effects of the fall, make his clothe and hair be like this:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

_/\_/\_/\_ instead of a flat back like this _______

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For example, his hair would look [bleep]ey in the back of his head.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Try that out, I think it will really help the falling visual effect. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He's not finished the ground below, for you people who think he's just fallen over this should answer your troubles. maybe bluring the ground below may make it look far down, just select it on photoshop and alter the contrast.. it may be a short cut but Im guessin that would be a lot of work for you trying to do it all manually. (on the record I do it all in paint 8) )

thanks guys for all the help :D I have a feeling this will be a great sig and improve my skill greatly. I'm back from california and i hope my cousin dies. He's 6 and acts 3 and is spoiled and manipulates everyone. ridiculous, the kid still drinks from a bottle.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

UPDATED A LOT! yay it's near almost finishing... I figure I'll get it done, gather some advice and then really complete it. So, for now, give any advice/criticism.

edit: the white line on the left is fixed and realized that the man is hard to see with the building below, so i'm moving that building.... or the man

Is he ok?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lol he's a bit big look at the houses and him :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He's not finished the ground below, for you people who think he's just fallen over this should answer your troubles. maybe bluring the ground below may make it look far down, just select it on photoshop and alter the contrast.. it may be a short cut but Im guessin that would be a lot of work for you trying to do it all manually. (on the record I do it all in paint 8) )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thats what I call some first class help :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nice sig btw, the shading is looking good especially the waves breaking on the shore