Mercifull Posted August 8, 2005 Share Posted August 8, 2005 Looking much better. But why is the hat bigger (closer to camera) when objects fall at the same speed? Mercifull <3 Suzi "We don't want players to be able to buy their way to success in RuneScape. If we let players start doing this, it devalues RuneScape for others. We feel your status in real-life shouldn't affect your ability to be successful in RuneScape" Jagex 01/04/01 - 02/03/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J272 Posted August 8, 2005 Share Posted August 8, 2005 Much better, putting like half a house under the cliff would make it a lot easier to tell it was a cliff, umm, waves need to wrap around the island more, aand more falling effect needed on the char, maybe some lines or summin for both the char and the hat? Who knows it may or may not work out well :? J272 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxiemumu Posted August 8, 2005 Author Share Posted August 8, 2005 Looking much better. But why is the hat bigger (closer to camera) when objects fall at the same speed? you do realize its a PAPER party hat right? Paper can be blown away in the wind (the little swoosh) and the man is not falling yet. He has JUST jumped off the cliff and is beginning to learn the laws of gravity. and Terley: You kick wagon O_O thank you sooo much for the help all you guys, specially terley. I moved the building to the shoreline. It's a bed and breakfast now ;D I'm adding a fountain, flowers along the path, and color to the lkast 2 buildings. I think again, this';ll be great :D Only 27.. RIP Kurt Cobain, Jim Morrison, Jimi Hendrix, and Janice Joplin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted August 8, 2005 Share Posted August 8, 2005 Is he ok? lol he's a bit big look at the houses and him :P Perspective my friend, perspective. Looking much better :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted August 8, 2005 Share Posted August 8, 2005 I think it need more painting on the sand! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxiemumu Posted August 9, 2005 Author Share Posted August 9, 2005 ok peoples, this is my semi-finished piece. I need a little more critiquing and It will be finished, then I will tamper with it some mor ebecause I never can make it look right. Like Pixelling OCD kinda... Yeah Only 27.. RIP Kurt Cobain, Jim Morrison, Jimi Hendrix, and Janice Joplin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxiemumu Posted August 9, 2005 Author Share Posted August 9, 2005 FINISHED! Only 27.. RIP Kurt Cobain, Jim Morrison, Jimi Hendrix, and Janice Joplin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Alex85 Posted August 9, 2005 Share Posted August 9, 2005 XD I'm loving the toffee in the corner. Nice Max. Very nice. It really has Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J272 Posted August 9, 2005 Share Posted August 9, 2005 Mmmm Toffee..... Oh right, sig, ya! Very nicely done mate! :wink: Looking forward to more in your future :D J272 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted August 9, 2005 Share Posted August 9, 2005 Toffee!! I like. Lol. Nice, but it needs a border, simple one, 1px border should do. Oh, I have a C/C to add: The guy in the ground its a bit disproporcional in relation the houses, looks like he's a giant jumping to get a giant phat. Lol. But's nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lowgravity Posted August 9, 2005 Share Posted August 9, 2005 BORDER :!: GJ. Lowgravity, I want to be just like you. But...I never will be as 1337 as you. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxiemumu Posted August 9, 2005 Author Share Posted August 9, 2005 Toffee!! I like. Lol. Nice, but it needs a border, simple one, 1px border should do. Oh, I have a C/C to add: The guy in the ground its a bit disproporcional in relation the houses, looks like he's a giant jumping to get a giant phat. Lol. But's nice. Its called perspective!! He is JUMPING OFF A CLIFF for a p hat, thus he appears must larger because he is closer to the screen! Agh I added the border earlier and am uploading as we speak. Only 27.. RIP Kurt Cobain, Jim Morrison, Jimi Hendrix, and Janice Joplin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxiemumu Posted August 9, 2005 Author Share Posted August 9, 2005 This is the final, no more key, because idiots STILL didn't understand the bloody concept. For all of those who do understand and compliment my work, I thankyou. Everyone else who says "He's a giants, what's toffee? whats the swirl thats grey and stupid looking!?" just.... Ew Is all I have to say. Only 27.. RIP Kurt Cobain, Jim Morrison, Jimi Hendrix, and Janice Joplin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Alex85 Posted August 9, 2005 Share Posted August 9, 2005 Very nice key, man. Very nice. In other news, I woke up 15 minutes ago. It really has Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted August 9, 2005 Share Posted August 9, 2005 Now it looks much better, with the border and the key. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jfp221 Posted August 10, 2005 Share Posted August 10, 2005 What about adding a shadow on the ground from the ledge? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tenz0900 Posted August 10, 2005 Share Posted August 10, 2005 What is this? A hand that's been hit with a hammer.. Some toffee a random grey swirly stupid looking thing in the water.. a giant human lieing down.. :x Now do you know how i feel when im trying to get positive feedback about my work? Fool :roll: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boogie Posted August 10, 2005 Share Posted August 10, 2005 Is the guy a giant or something? :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhys Posted August 10, 2005 Share Posted August 10, 2005 What is this? A hand that's been hit with a hammer.. Some toffee a random grey swirly stupid looking thing in the water.. a giant human lieing down.. :x Now do you know how i feel when im trying to get positive feedback about my work? Fool :roll: Erm, no, sorry. Just... no. You want positive feedback on something that is NOTHING like this? Quite the opposite, in fact. "A giant human 'lieing' (if you want critiscm, I'll give you it on your spelling) down", I think not. It's called 'perspective'. You know what that is right? Here, let me help you understand: http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=perspective See? He's jumping OFF the cliff and he is closer to the camera. Which means that, because of that funky new word we just learnt about, he seems seem like he is much bigger than he really is. Got that? Good. "A hand that's been hit with a hammer". Personally, I can't see that. The hand doesn't look like it's been hit with a hammer. No mark, no bruising. Hmmm, odd. "Some toffee", what's wrong with toffee? Huh, punk!? "A random grey swirly stupid looking thing in the water". No, that's a shark. Want me to teach you what that is too? Now, if you want me to, I could move over to YOUR thread and give you 'positive feedback'. [/rant] Max, that's an amazing piece of work. I like the shadow of the guy on the ground and, as others have said, the waves on the shore are amazing. Maybe try and add some sort of sparkling effect on the water...? I think the grass needs a bit more texture too. All in all, a darn good piece of work. 8/10. :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxiemumu Posted August 10, 2005 Author Share Posted August 10, 2005 Thanks Rhys, you rule :) To Other noob who insulted my work: You need to learn the basic rules of art, perspective, surface, and light source, then maybe you can critique me. Oh and while you're busy learning, maybe also study what animals Have FINS, not stupid grey swirled blob things. Please avoid critiquing things your small brain cannot understand. Also, know who you're starting a fight with, because I consider myself an intellectual, and by your writing, I consider you a monosyllabic ape :) Have a nice day. Only 27.. RIP Kurt Cobain, Jim Morrison, Jimi Hendrix, and Janice Joplin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted August 10, 2005 Share Posted August 10, 2005 What is this? A hand that's been hit with a hammer.. Some toffee a random grey swirly stupid looking thing in the water.. a giant human lieing down.. :x Now do you know how i feel when im trying to get positive feedback about my work? Fool :roll: Erm, no, sorry. Just... no. You want positive feedback on something that is NOTHING like this? Quite the opposite, in fact. "A giant human 'lieing' (if you want critiscm, I'll give you it on your spelling) down", I think not. It's called 'perspective'. You know what that is right? Here, let me help you understand: http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=perspective See? He's jumping OFF the cliff and he is closer to the camera. Which means that, because of that funky new word we just learnt about, he seems seem like he is much bigger than he really is. Got that? Good. "A hand that's been hit with a hammer". Personally, I can't see that. The hand doesn't look like it's been hit with a hammer. No mark, no bruising. Hmmm, odd. "Some toffee", what's wrong with toffee? Huh, punk!? "A random grey swirly stupid looking thing in the water". No, that's a shark. Want me to teach you what that is too? Now, if you want me to, I could move over to YOUR thread and give you 'positive feedback'. [/rant] Max, that's an amazing piece of work. I like the shadow of the guy on the ground and, as others have said, the waves on the shore are amazing. Maybe try and add some sort of sparkling effect on the water...? I think the grass needs a bit more texture too. All in all, a darn good piece of work. 8/10. :wink: Lol, Tenz0900 pwned one! (You got him Rhys) :lol: :lol: Thanks Rhys, you rule :) To Other noob who insulted my work: You need to learn the basic rules of art, perspective, surface, and light source, then maybe you can critique me. Oh and while you're busy learning, maybe also study what animals Have FINS, not stupid grey swirled blob things. Please avoid critiquing things your small brain cannot understand. Also, know who you're starting a fight with, because I consider myself an intellectual, and by your writing, I consider you a monosyllabic ape :) Have a nice day. Lol again, ROFL, Tenz0900 pwned twice badly in the same day. Hey Tenz, if you need positive comments about your york, do one that deserves it, dont expect people lie, Maxiemumu, made a great work, you didnt! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted August 10, 2005 Share Posted August 10, 2005 He's not finished the ground below, for you people who think he's just fallen over this should answer your troubles. maybe bluring the ground below may make it look far down, just select it on photoshop and alter the contrast.. it may be a short cut but Im guessin that would be a lot of work for you trying to do it all manually. (on the record I do it all in paint 8) ) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! when you people look off a cliff down at the world below what goes through your mind? maybe 'omgz the heigher I get the bigger I am!11 im like 100ft tallz'.. cmn its been explained at least 5 times throughout this thread whats going on and seriously you'd have to be stupid or just quick to judge to think hes just a giant who's tripped over and crushed a town.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxiemumu Posted August 11, 2005 Author Share Posted August 11, 2005 Terley, you can be in my posse anyday XD It's a lost cause, explaining perspective to these people. The people who understand my art's perspective are the ones who like it, and they're the ones I WANT to like it. I don't expect a 5 year old (Tenz) to understand it because his meek little mind can't perceive my art. Only 27.. RIP Kurt Cobain, Jim Morrison, Jimi Hendrix, and Janice Joplin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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