woopidoo2 Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 It's been a while ago since I posted my latest photo... I decided to give it another go :) This photo has been made by my new Canon 17-40 f4L lens, read all about it in my Deviantart journal. I would like some helpful comments. Tell me why you like it, or why you dont like it. ;) Everything in this photo has been done just the way I like it. The colors, framing, everything. [hide=Stranger][/hide] Original Link Thanks for watching. [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 I've a;lready commented but i just noticed that that colours in most of your photos is very well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 woah. holy man, your such a good photographer 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 Nothing you could really do about it at the time, but the mark on the floor in the foreground and the smudge on the condensation in the glass behind the person are quite distracting. Overall though it's a nice picture, follows the rule of thirds nicely, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 Nice, the colours of this photo give the piece a real mood to it. It's also got a lovely perspective, with all the paralell lines on the tiling and stuff. Nice framing too, not too thick, not too thin. I'm just curious, do you know this person you took a picture of? :P 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 Nothing you could really do about it at the time, but the mark on the floor in the foreground and the smudge on the condensation in the glass behind the person are quite distracting. Overall though it's a nice picture, follows the rule of thirds nicely, too. Are you seriously that picky? like my god.. i think it adds to the photo, it shows its not staged, it adds alot of surrealism 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tripsis Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 Why does this picture make me think of a serial killer? :ohnoes: I absolutely love the tone of this photo and the trees through the window. Wonderful job Woopidoo :) And congratulations on your new lens! I've only heard great things about the 17-40 f/4L!! - 99 fletching | 99 thieving | 99 construction | 99 herblore | 99 smithing | 99 woodcutting - - 99 runecrafting - 99 prayer - 125 combat - 95 farming - - Blog - DeviantART - Book Reviews & Blog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 Nothing you could really do about it at the time, but the mark on the floor in the foreground and the smudge on the condensation in the glass behind the person are quite distracting. Overall though it's a nice picture, follows the rule of thirds nicely, too. Are you seriously that picky? like my god.. Are you actually serious? Wow... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 Nothing you could really do about it at the time, but the mark on the floor in the foreground and the smudge on the condensation in the glass behind the person are quite distracting. Overall though it's a nice picture, follows the rule of thirds nicely, too. Are you seriously that picky? like my god.. Are you actually serious? Wow... I agree with pyro kina.... Nice picture though I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 The smudge on the wall is pretty distracting, being right next to his head and all. The smudge on the floor I didn't really notice. Lovely photo though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
venomai Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 The thing on the floor can be easily removed by a quick crop. I didn't even notice the smudge on the window until Nadril pointed it out. Great photo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 technically both of them can be fixed 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted January 29, 2009 Author Share Posted January 29, 2009 There are 2 smudges, the one on the right (those smudges are there, for being dirty windows) and the one next to the person. The thing I like about the smudge next to the person is that it appears that she (its a woman, I noticed later) wanted to look outside to see whats going on, which adds to the story. The 4 dots on the ground are from some pole-foundation, which might be too distracting indeed. And no, I did not know this woman. I was waiting for the train, and I get inside this building to wait and I see her. I thought it was a 13 year old metal-head because I heard music coming from it quite clearly, so I decided to photograph it because he/she wouldnt notice me at all :P Thanks everyone. [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 From the way their nose is constructed and the way they are standing i'd assume its a dude. Or a butch chick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 Woop, this is simply amazing! Very well done, this truly is a wonderful photo :thumbsup: My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted January 29, 2009 Author Share Posted January 29, 2009 From the way their nose is constructed and the way they are standing i'd assume its a dude. Or a butch chick. I was convinced it was a dude too. The boots, cap, clothes, build, everything :) I think she is.. 30-40 years old. [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 Clone stamp those stains :thumbup:. I really love the tone and perspective, really gives you that dark and dull feeling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 I really like it. Then again, I always like train stations/photos of them for some reason. I don't know, I just think they're really interesting. :P pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smackapotato Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 That's a wonderful photograph, I really like it. Though just like others have said, the smudge on the window is more distracting then storytelling. EDIT - Signature far exceeds our sig limits but since it's so colourful you can keep it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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