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Made this for a battle on Sublime to show that PDN eats GIMP for breakfast.

 

This is my entry, but I am stuck on what version to post:

 

 

 

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I think the first one is better, seeing as it isn't as mono-tone.

 

EDIT:

 

 

 

Updated version, slightly:

 

 

 

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My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages.

 

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Ah, just as I though. I now have three opinions on the first (other forum), so I can safely say that is better. Time to do some touch up!

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Good, very good. One of your best, if not your best so far :thumbsup: Good colours and a decent use of C4D's. Something about the render is bothering me. Could be the placement of it and the fact that it looks like you lowered the opacity of it. Too much black space though and I don't think the text looks very good. Overall good work though. Your last couple of signatures have been much better and I can see a huge improvement.

 

 

 

Good job and keep up the good work :D

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Good, very good. One of your best, if not your best so far :thumbsup: Good colours and a decent use of C4D's. Something about the render is bothering me. Could be the placement of it and the fact that it looks like you lowered the opacity of it. Too much black space though and I don't think the text looks very good. Overall good work though. Your last couple of signatures have been much better and I can see a huge improvement.

 

 

 

Good job and keep up the good work :D

 

Thank you, Jason :)

 

 

 

Yeah, there is slightly too much blank space, but that is because of a Layer...I'll attempt to make it cleaner in the next version :)

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Jopie took the words out of my mouth, almost to the point.

 

 

 

I liked the second one more, the one you didn't use, as it conveys and stays true to the base render. The first one is quite pixelly and dark, which makes me dislike it a lot. The border also is quite awkward and bad.

 

 

 

Text = no-no.

 

 

 

The composition is nice, but the execution is so-so.

 

 

 

Suggestions: Remove the text and shift the render a bit to the left to make it coincide with the rule of thirds better and take up more space of the left.

 

 

 

That's just me though, I bet Jopie would disagree. :P

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Just had to say this:

 

 

 

 

 

Photoshop eats gimp and pdn for starters.

 

 

 

Really? Maybe that is why it had the expensive price tag...

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Just had to say this:

 

 

 

 

 

Photoshop eats gimp and pdn for starters.

 

 

 

Really? Maybe that is why it had the expensive price tag...

Maybe that's why you don't actually pay for it :P, you just "try" it out.

 

trial only lasts 30 days?

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trial only lasts 30 days?

 

Is the double-entendre lost on you? You can get everything on the internet for free...

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Hmm, I bought PS legally, but almost everyone else just torrented it, which most of the time for other programs i've used (that I got illigally) don't work at all.

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trial only lasts 30 days?

 

Is the double-entendre lost on you? You can get everything on the internet for free...

 

 

 

Just because you can doesn't mean you should.

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