Shiny Posted June 5, 2009 Share Posted June 5, 2009 First one in 6 months! Feel proud. I used my new Pentax K100D, which I got with a bag, and the kitlens and a hood for $425NZD. I really love my little baby. Some of these are on my deviantart, if you want to comment further and fave. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted June 5, 2009 Share Posted June 5, 2009 In my opinion, the last one is great. The rest of the photo's just seem slightly out of focus and a few where the sky appears, it's been over-exposed. Try playing with shutter speed and f numbers, you'll have much nicer results! GJ Shiny, it's great that you now have a camera 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted June 5, 2009 Share Posted June 5, 2009 DAAAAMN those are nice. Where in Taka is the fourth taken? GJ Shiny :) My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
remoteman Posted June 5, 2009 Share Posted June 5, 2009 Oooh more than devart! I love the leaf btw. Excellent shot, sharp as a tack, really brings out the texture. Perhaps could have shot at a slightly higher f stop to bring more of the lead in focus, but it's nice. You'll have to watch out for where the camera is focusing, in the panoramic shot with teh tree on the left it's obviously focussed on that rather than the horizon, which is your focal point. Having centre-weighted focusing would have helped. And yes, as someone pointed out, watch you don't over expose the skys. You certainly have an eye for the artistic stuff, can't wait to see more. "A disbelief in magic can force some poor souls into believing in authority and business" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wongtong Posted June 5, 2009 Share Posted June 5, 2009 I really like the leaf but I don't really like 2nd and 3rd, a bit blurry/out of focus. I don't really get the bent stick either... Oh well, great job! Where'd you buy your camera from? 8,180WONGTONG IS THE BEST AND IS MORE SUPERIOR THAN ME#1 Wongtong stalker.Im looking for some No Limit soldiers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted June 5, 2009 Share Posted June 5, 2009 He bought if off Trademe. Which is the NZ equivalent of eBay. Oh wait, you live in NZ... :lol: My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bewareitsandrew Posted June 16, 2009 Share Posted June 16, 2009 I like the last one. The only Professional camera I have in a really old Pentax that uses Film :shock: ^Hawt new Siggy^ Made by yours truly.Yeah, Spanish class is where everything funny happens.Click To see my Origami gallery![hide=Important drops]Important drops..... Bandos Tassets x2Dragon medium helm x 1Dragon pickaxe x 1 (6m)Verac's Brassard x 1Veracs's Helm x 2Verac's Skirt x 1Guthan's Helm x 2Guthan's spear x 1 Karil's Leatherskirt x 1 Karil's C'bow x 1 Dharok's Helm x 1 (4.6m)[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pirate_Felix Posted June 17, 2009 Share Posted June 17, 2009 What are those? i now see they are saved as Saucers lol [hide]Felix, je moeder.Je moeder felixJe vader, felix.Felix, je oma.Felix, je ongelofelijk gave pwnaze avatar B)Felix, je moeder.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
obfuscator Posted June 17, 2009 Share Posted June 17, 2009 Some really nice stuff here, keep it up. "It's not a rest for me, it's a rest for the weights." - Dom Mazzetti Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted June 21, 2009 Share Posted June 21, 2009 1- bad composition, obey the rule of thirds 2- focus is off, it looks low quality 3- focus again, the front pot thing is blurry 4- focus, the tree on the left is blurred 5- boring 6- rule of thirds again, the horizon should be 1/3 of the way up or 1/3 of the way down the canvas, not the middle 7- pretty boring 8- the stick gets in the way 9- the blurred leaf in the extreme foreground is distracting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted June 22, 2009 Author Share Posted June 22, 2009 Rule of thirds is boring. I tried to mix it up a bit. The rule of thirds is always the first rule you break in photography. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johannas Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 In my opinion you need to work on your composition, and your focusing. Composition isn't something you pick up straight away, and focusing can take a bit of practice to get the perfect focal point. Looks like you had similiar problems with all of your shots (apart from the leaves - which i absolutely love!!) A tripod would definately help prevent camera shape, and give you more time to think about your composition. Keep at it!! :thumbsup: Thank you to tripsis for an awesome sig! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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