Sam Posted June 7, 2009 Share Posted June 7, 2009 I do feel as though I've advanced a little lately. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wongtong Posted June 7, 2009 Share Posted June 7, 2009 Looks great :D I feel as though the blurry leaves are a little too blurry though. Haha I just realised it spelt Leaves :P Nice job, I like the background too. 8,180WONGTONG IS THE BEST AND IS MORE SUPERIOR THAN ME#1 Wongtong stalker.Im looking for some No Limit soldiers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted June 7, 2009 Share Posted June 7, 2009 Looks great :D I feel as though the blurry leaves are a little too blurry though. I like the concept. The colours and overall mood work well, but it just seems to lack something, not sure what... pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ipkjooo Posted June 7, 2009 Share Posted June 7, 2009 background is bleh, and the blurry leaves should be sharpened a bit more tbh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted June 8, 2009 Share Posted June 8, 2009 It doesn't do anything for me, just feels sort of empty, not in the physical sense, though. I like the use of blur to make the leaves seem to be falling down above the word. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
remoteman Posted June 8, 2009 Share Posted June 8, 2009 Looks good, i don't like the background though, how about slotting a stock photo of some asphalt in there instead? And yeah, you've kinda overdone it with the blur on a few of them, the one far right in particular. Cool concept though. "A disbelief in magic can force some poor souls into believing in authority and business" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tripsis Posted June 8, 2009 Share Posted June 8, 2009 Nice job, littleboy! You definitely are improving!! :D Like several other posters, I really like the idea that you have here, but the background is just too plain. I'd love to see something more like gravel or green grass. Keep it up!! :D - 99 fletching | 99 thieving | 99 construction | 99 herblore | 99 smithing | 99 woodcutting - - 99 runecrafting - 99 prayer - 125 combat - 95 farming - - Blog - DeviantART - Book Reviews & Blog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star. Posted June 9, 2009 Share Posted June 9, 2009 ^Green grass does sound like a good idea, just have to make sure that it isn't too vibrant that it takes all the attention. The concept is brilliant though :P ☢ CAUTION ☢ CAUTION ☢ CAUTION ☢ CAUTION ☢ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted June 10, 2009 Share Posted June 10, 2009 Littleboy, this is really amazing. I have to give you props here, you have worked wonders. Everything looks really good, and you have outdone yourself here. Keep it up, your an inspiration to noobs like me. :thumbup: My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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