Shiny Posted June 19, 2009 Share Posted June 19, 2009 Aiming to do more large art. I love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted June 19, 2009 Share Posted June 19, 2009 Looks amazing, Shiny :) Just make the transitions smoother, if you can :) :thumbup: My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laxaria Posted June 19, 2009 Share Posted June 19, 2009 Looks nice, really nice job. Although I question the choice of having the lines go in front of the focal instead of into the background, but your call I suppose. Still looks good, just a weird choice of it. Resources used? :) deviantArt | A book without a cover | My poems | My SigsI'm an artist of words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skully Posted June 19, 2009 Share Posted June 19, 2009 I actually reall like it. : You got tuts for this kind of stuff? :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted June 19, 2009 Share Posted June 19, 2009 It's definitely going somewhere, my biggest point of critique would be the composition. The lightbeams at the left look cool, but it makes the right side quite empty. (Which is interesting too, but the beams are too demanding.) Keep it up, find balance and think of what you place where in order to make it a striking manipulation :) [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Etta Posted June 19, 2009 Share Posted June 19, 2009 That looks great :thumbsup: The swirly light near the spaceman doesn't seem to fit the rest of the piece, but it looks great nevertheless Keep it up : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soa Posted June 19, 2009 Share Posted June 19, 2009 O.O @ Glowing lines. I'd suggest to remove them because.. it doesn't fit, at all. It's like writing an essay about a dog, then entering a cat. It doesn't mix, there's no coherence. I think you need to work on your positioning as well, it's dead center. Everything else is fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pirate_Felix Posted June 19, 2009 Share Posted June 19, 2009 Your glowing lines never stop do they? Look: [hide=][/hide] [hide=][/hide] [hide=][/hide] [hide=][/hide] [hide=][/hide] [hide=][/hide] [hide]Felix, je moeder.Je moeder felixJe vader, felix.Felix, je oma.Felix, je ongelofelijk gave pwnaze avatar B)Felix, je moeder.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laxaria Posted June 19, 2009 Share Posted June 19, 2009 It takes quite some skill to utilise the pen tool effectively to achieve certain effects. Even from preferring the pen tool over fractals and C4Ds, it can still take me a few tries to get a good pen tool effect. Love the pen tooling shiny. Always develop a skill that sets you apart and makes you unique. Most importantly, have fun! :) deviantArt | A book without a cover | My poems | My SigsI'm an artist of words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pirate_Felix Posted June 19, 2009 Share Posted June 19, 2009 Love the pen tooling shiny. Always develop a skill that sets you apart and makes you unique. Most importantly, have fun! :) Agreed, i immedeatly associate pentooling with you now. You are teh king You know that the men to sheep ratio has halved in the past ten years? only 10 to 1 now on your the island where they shot Lord of the Rings EDIT: Found a map of locations where they shot some of those images, not sure where the mountains are, you should go there sometime with your camera [hide]Felix, je moeder.Je moeder felixJe vader, felix.Felix, je oma.Felix, je ongelofelijk gave pwnaze avatar B)Felix, je moeder.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted June 19, 2009 Share Posted June 19, 2009 Love the pen tooling shiny. Always develop a skill that sets you apart and makes you unique. Most importantly, have fun! :) Agreed, i immedeatly associate pentooling with you now. You are teh king You know that the men to sheep ratio has halved in the past ten years? only 10 to 1 now on your the island where they shot Lord of the Rings EDIT: Found a map of locations where they shot some of those images, not sure where the mountains are, you should go there sometime with your camera See Auckland? Shiny and I live there (Not together, of course) See from Nelson down? That's where the mountains are. :( My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted June 19, 2009 Share Posted June 19, 2009 Love the pen tooling shiny. Always develop a skill that sets you apart and makes you unique. Most importantly, have fun! :) Agreed, i immedeatly associate pentooling with you now. You are teh king You know that the men to sheep ratio has halved in the past ten years? only 10 to 1 now on your the island where they shot Lord of the Rings EDIT: Found a map of locations where they shot some of those images, not sure where the mountains are, you should go there sometime with your camera See Auckland? Shiny and I live there (Not together, of course) See from Nelson down? That's where the mountains are. :( Swim. :thumbup: Anyway, the map of NZ looks like a photographer's paradise. Almost like a Runescape Guild... everything you need is in your reach. (beach, interesting landscapes, skies, good weather, etc) Ive got to go to sleep. #-o [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted June 19, 2009 Author Share Posted June 19, 2009 Thank you for all the comments. I think pentool + glow is like my signature, something I put on most things. I guess its something which is the same in everything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted June 19, 2009 Share Posted June 19, 2009 Keep at it, it's working for you :thumbup: My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shin Posted June 20, 2009 Share Posted June 20, 2009 If I were you, i'd crop out the right side, its very blank and distracts the eyes. Good use of those neon rope things, brings the subject into focus better. I think the transitions from the sides are very abrupt, try smoothing it out better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted June 20, 2009 Share Posted June 20, 2009 make the pen lines thinner, prehaps wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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