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Holy hell, thats awesome! Here i was thinking your a nub pixeler.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

rofl, i am. But i think i have improved, lol look at this:

 

 

 

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that was a long time ago, but i think i'm alot better

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

can't believe the feedback, any ideas on how to fill up the sig a bit?

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Quer has made a great edit, and a few of the things should be easy to fix and will come out with a much better result.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Abdomen area fix, part of forearm visible. Yours is too straight.

 

 

 

Chest fix, slopes inward and around his "breasts".

 

 

 

Cool designs -- simple so it doesn't get too busy, wish you'd have kept em (or something similar).

 

 

 

Your muscle needs a bit of work, QS fixed it a lot with the additional line.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Past that, I think the middle mountain should be nudged over to the left 2-4 pixels and you should work on your flesh tones and skin shading.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8) thank you, now all he has to do is fix it and his sig will have way more appeal.

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8) thank you, now all he has to do is fix it and his sig will have way more appeal.

You make it sound like he's drawn the character with pink hair and green skin... I can only notice the difference between the stomach lines if I look closely. Infact, the puffed out chest almost gives him a somewhat cocky and authoritarian pose.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keep at it nuzza, it's looking great.

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nice lol, maybe a few shadows on the sky? birds? dragons? or some other flying abomination? like a flying bicycle :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lol, maybe fix the elbow(or the lack of) for the lef arm? it looks like two random stumps join togeter at the moment :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

maybe use the lava to cast a red tinge? just for the 'WHAO!' effect... :lol:

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nice lol, maybe a few shadows on the sky? birds? dragons? or some other flying abomination? like a flying bicycle :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lol, maybe fix the elbow(or the lack of) for the lef arm? it looks like two random stumps join togeter at the moment :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

maybe use the lava to cast a red tinge? just for the 'WHAO!' effect... :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

your really enjoying urself arn't you?

 

 

 

i like the bird idea, i think i'll do that. I'm not too sure about the bike though :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

oh and thanks blazer :wink:

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8) thank you, now all he has to do is fix it and his sig will have way more appeal.

You make it sound like he's drawn the character with pink hair and green skin... I can only notice the difference between the stomach lines if I look closely. Infact, the puffed out chest almost gives him a somewhat cocky and authoritarian pose.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you make it sound like i did totally the wrong thing by correcting him on a mistake?

 

 

 

for future reference keep those kind of things directed towards me for yourself. :? i dont quite get the source of your reply either?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

nice edits the sig is starting to look quite neat youve improved allot, your making awesome stuff now :D

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8) thank you, now all he has to do is fix it and his sig will have way more appeal.

You make it sound like he's drawn the character with pink hair and green skin... I can only notice the difference between the stomach lines if I look closely. Infact, the puffed out chest almost gives him a somewhat cocky and authoritarian pose.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you make it sound like i did totally the wrong thing by correcting him on a mistake?

 

 

 

for future reference keep those kind of things directed towards me for yourself. :? i dont quite get the source of your reply either?

 

 

 

I was just commenting on how you made it sound like he'd done something totally wrong... "all he has to do is fix it and his sig will have way more appeal." Editing the stomach line will give "way more appeal"?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Geez... :roll:

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8) thank you, now all he has to do is fix it and his sig will have way more appeal.

You make it sound like he's drawn the character with pink hair and green skin... I can only notice the difference between the stomach lines if I look closely. Infact, the puffed out chest almost gives him a somewhat cocky and authoritarian pose.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you make it sound like i did totally the wrong thing by correcting him on a mistake?

 

 

 

for future reference keep those kind of things directed towards me for yourself. :? i dont quite get the source of your reply either?

 

 

 

I was just commenting on how you made it sound like he'd done something totally wrong... "all he has to do is fix it and his sig will have way more appeal." Editing the stomach line will give "way more appeal"?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Geez... :roll:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

we misinterpetated one another then but to answer your question, yes way more appeal.

 

 

 

what you perhaps dont realise is that simple things can make big difference small can be big, david and goliath, the mouse who defeated the tiger.

 

 

 

per example would a human be considerd a normal human if his head was off centerd.. no neither will it be if he had a off centerd body and that was my point.

 

 

 

i hope you get it now.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

well Nuzza you deserved it here you made a very nice sig.

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The character looks completely different from the one your started out with :lol: that's a good thing though :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the flying bicycle is just a gag on the movie, ET or whatever lol, can't remember it was a long time ago.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yup, it was from ET, lol

 

 

 

thanks anyways, should i sell it now?

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I think it needs to be a little darker to be the wilderness considering it is set at the rune rocks. Those hills in the back look like sand dunes. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think more dead trees and make the sky and hills darker would help. But it is very good like it is at the moment.

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