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um wat r we c/cing?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you posted no image

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you have no sig

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you have no avvie

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So there is nothing to c/c

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Your only flaw is since black doesn't have darker tones u used lighter tones as the shadow, whihc don;t work

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Black you shade in reverse, so the shadow dominates while the highlight in minimal as shown on robes here:

 

 

 

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bot best pixel in the world, but it shows blk shading dun quite well

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

other than tht why have u just drawn lines down the robe bottoms?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also shade around the red neck pieces, they 'bulge' out so cast shaodw (see my current sig for example of tht)

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Your only flaw is since black doesn't have darker tones u used lighter tones as the shadow, whihc don;t work

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Black you shade in reverse, so the shadow dominates while the highlight in minimal as shown on robes here:

 

 

 

sig.png

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

bot best pixel in the world, but it shows blk shading dun quite well

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

other than tht why have u just drawn lines down the robe bottoms?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also shade around the red neck pieces, they 'bulge' out so cast shaodw (see my current sig for example of tht)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i have to question wether the buldge would be seen from that angle... i don't think that it would be all thta obvious maybe a slight rise at the sides of the neck but nothing drastic

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New sigzor^^

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Yeah I agrre it wouldn;t be tht big a difference, but it will still give a slight shadow especially round the lower regions from what I seen of his lighting and although it is a kind of minro detail it would make a big difference to the overall effect

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from what I seen of his lighting and although it is a kind of minro detail it would make a big difference to the overall effect

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

no... it really wouldnt..... and he currently doesnt have a constant light source, and te fame in his hand isnt causing a light in the sig either, those are two major problems...another one is the robe bottom.... DO NOT USE THE LINE TOOL, clothes do not do that, not even pressed clothes with heavy starch..another thing is your background, it isnt shaded, and the colors you did choose are just off.. (mostly in the lava) that looks nothing like lava.. at all.. and rocks... theyre not black, except for a few, and that doesnt look like an igneous rock, and the phat seems extremely small

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thanks everyone for the sigs!

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remember, a d chain is a piece of chainmail

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

its not a solid plate, but made up of connected rings, which gives it alot

 

 

 

of manouverability, so its more like a piece of cloth, it flows and is more 'liquidy'

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

that d chain looks like its a solid piece instead of chainmail

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

other than the other few problems stated by the others,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

very good well done

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never use solid black unless you know hot to handle it well and only few on this board can.

 

 

 

there's always a side track to make something look black and quite franckly they look way better.

 

 

 

solid black is hideous and awfull in this style of pixel art.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

your influence sterms to much from runescape itself, lose that influence and reconnect it to something greater..

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