Okay, started second story. There is a reference to Eyes of a Warrior in this and there is a reason for that. This is kinda like the second part of that. The storyline will be much different but there will be a great similarity between the enemies power in the stories. They kind of draw from the same source . . . I have this part way laid out. I know what is going to happen, I just need to write it and fill in everything in between the main points of the storyline. This story should be much longer than eyes of a warrior, at least I planning on it to be. I don't plan for the realy problem to start until a hundred or so pages into the story, then they will have to figure it out and all this stuff. I am planning on giving a lot more info on all the character so you know them a bit better by the end of the tale. Of course there will be plenty of action still, but maybe not as rapid as in Eyes of a Warrior(EoaW cause it is easier). I really want to put a lot more plot into this one, rather than an all out action story. I think it makes for a much better story, and while some of you may think it is boring at first hopefully it will draw you in later. The next few chapters actually will be quite a bit of action, i mean it will be taking place at a fighting tourny, so that should be fun. I plan on making some rather lengthy intermissions between rounds though to add plot. In EoaW I kinda threw the plot into the battle and it made it a bit confusing. It is less so for me I suppose because I know the message I was trying to get, but to other people I realized it would be very difficult to comprehend everything going on at the same time and get confusing very quickly. Anyway, I hope you like this story a bit better, first part has like no action at all, just some introduction and character introduction, initial storyline setup as well. Anyway, I guess I kind of went on a rant. Happy reading :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

LEGEND OF THE DRAGON SWORD

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PROLOGUE

 

 

 

It was another peaceful day for me, Xavier Ralse. The sun was shining strongly through the kitchen window. My mom was cooking our dinner. I am only twelve, but I hope to be a blacksmith when I become an adult. I took a big breath of air and smelled the cooking trout that my father caught earlier. He was in his room doing some paper work. He buys and sells fish at the markets in town and he must know what to catch to get the best profit. My sister was outside trying to make a potion; she wants to become an apothecary but is only fifteen as of now.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅDinner is done,ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

A bit shorter this time around, no action but a lot of plot is established, so you would need to read it. Next chapter will have quite a bit of action in it, so that should be fun. Anyway, enjoy.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CHAPTER 2

 

 

 

The Tournament!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅThis place is huge,ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

OMFG! THAT IS AMAZING! Love the story. Finish it soon :D can't wait till ur done to read it...

 

 

 

13 pages in Microsoft word to be exact

sometime I'm going to have to read one of your stories all the way through, from what I've read they are very good but I just don't have the time. (its hard enough keeping up with necro)

Hmmm, lot of things I haven't really established in my head yet. I kinda threw this together. I know I will go back, like i did in EoaW and change a ton of stuff. I may even eventually break this down into two shorter chapters. It is a bit longer than most and I know that by the end of the story I will be able to fit enough content in here to do so, just not sure if I will or how long it will be until I do. Anyway, here is chapter 3. Chapter 4 will be ready I dunno when.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CHAPTER 3: Round One

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I stood long after the crowd began to disperse. I waited and stared at Hyrocyte, who walked out of the arena and over towards the door from which he entered. How I wished to kill him right here, but I would stand no chance. He had a mass of guards and most of the crowd would go to his aid as well. Maybe with the help of this dragon sword I will have the power. He said it grants unfathomable power, so why is he giving up ownership? It was a one-handed weapon after all, he could easily wield both. I didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t really care though.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I was about to leave when a pair of hands once again grabbed my shoulders. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅWhat are you doing? Your fight starts in like three minutes! Get going, my arena is just in the other room, yours, however, is outside. They will disqualify you if you are not present when the match is scheduled to begin.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Woot! A NEW CHAPTER! CAN'T WAIT TO READ THIS!!!!

Really, really great Sirith, theres not much to improve upon except maybe a spelling error or two. Hope to see more soon :wink:

This has to be one of my favorite fan fics. Keep up the good work man!

that was great i reli hope u make the new chapter soon this has to be the best fiction i have read so far on the forum ...............ever

Gah, sorry I haven't come out with anything new in a long while. My home computer is shot, motherboard went out, and seeing as it is very old anyway I am just getting a new one. Not gonna be at my house for another week or so though, they are stupid. I will try to get something new up as soon as I can though.

Hope your new computer arrives safely...

 

I can wait to hear the next chapter!

Cool story can't wait to hear the next chapter

 

You are such a good writer i wish i could write like that with that much detail. The storys flawless and so good keep it coming

I know it's been forver, and it's not even that long, but I am now one of the thousands of helpless victims addicted to World of Warcraft... ah well.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CHAPTER 4: The Battles Continue

 

 

 

The day rolled on by like normal. Kronas, James, April and I randomly chatting about things, those of us who were fighting tomorrow just trying to keep our mind off the battle for as long as we could, but I couldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t.

 

 

 

I had never heard of a druid named Korvoc, but I did know how rare and powerful a druid was. It took more years than I was in age just to become initiated. They are supposed to be one of the most versatile classes in all of the lands. They use the power of nature to heal themselves and to take an advantage over their opponent. I was nervous, I had never seen a druid, and I wasnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t much looking forward to fighting one.

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅXaivier.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Woot, I've been waiting forever, lol. 6 pages :) ty

At last. I was wondering when you were going to write some more.

 

 

 

Nice one :wink:

Wow, that was amazing :D

 

MORE MORE MORE, lol.

Wanted to get this posted before I went to bed, I got a job interview at 10:30AM and it is 2:40 AM here, lol. I didn't expect to get this done so fast but once I started writing this part I wanted to get it done. I didn't know I was going to finish where I did, but then I looked back and decided this would be a pretty nice suspenseful part and it was long enough for my tastes. I haven't proof read it cause I didn't have the time, so there is mistakes, hopefully I can edit out the mistakes tomorrow and I will edit the post. Enjoy. Hopefully I will keep up this pace :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CHAPTER 5: Deadly Elimination

 

 

 

I opened my eyes slowly, a pain shot through my stomach and I cringed. April woke up; she was lying right next to me. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅAre you all right?ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Lol, I hope your interview went/will go well

Lol, thanks for leaving me at another cliff hanger...

 

 

 

Good job :) I'm guessing you already fixed the mistakes.

 

 

 

Can't wait till the next chapter. I really do love all your stories. :lol:

Just got around to proofreading it, I usually miss something anyway, but meh. Lol, at that interview the guy handed my the job and asked me if I could start tomorrow, then he looks down [roosters] his head and goes :? "You're only 16?" I'm like, "erm, I'm only 15" and he goes :o You can't work here unless you are 16, sorry, probably should have checked that before we called you in for an interview, come see us in a few months and we will give you a job. I was like wtf.... anyway, lol. Stupid Bob Evans...

Sorry about the wait. I didn't really know where to go with the story, lol. I have to keep in mind the main plot, I tweaked the prologue to make terms with that. Not a huge change, but it works out with what I plan to do better than the old one did, by far. I think I finally figured out where to go with the story and characters... at least until the competition is over... then I will need to brainstorm again.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CHAPTER 6: Decisions

 

 

 

My stomach felt as if it had caught fire, I thought I was going to die. I close my eyes tightly and prepared for the deathblow, but moments later the pain had subsided. I opened my eyes and looked at Nerzugal. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅOur final challenger has made it to the third round.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

I know this is 3 months or so old, but I just want to let you know, I really, REALLY want you to continue this...it's been my favorite story on these boards, bar none.

more more more!!

I'm sorry to see this story die off. It is simply AMAZING. I am posting this both because I want to keep this story alive and to encourage the writer to continue with this story if he (or she) returns to this forum any time soon. Thank you very much for taking the time and effort to write this much to entertain others, and I hope very much that you write more. I give this story a 9.5/10. I would have given it a ten except for the fact that u left it incomplete :( .

finish it!!!!!! now!!!!! or iw ill have a tantrum !!!! your 54 bluddy pages into theis story !!!!!!!!!!!